Hello and good afternoon, participants! 🤗❤

Thank you to our dearest judge messymizi for taking her precious time to read and judge the books!

Without further ado, here are the results for One-Shot Story entries:

1.  Title: Cinderella's Curse
    Author: Luca_Spencer

    Book Cover: 4
    Title: 5
    Blurb: 4
    Relevance to the genre: 15
    Plot uniqueness: 15
    Writing Style: 10
    Flow: 15
    Enjoyment: 15
    Overall: 12
    TOTAL SCORE: 95

Feedback:

The book cover is okay, but I suggest to just stick on 2 fonts for uniformity. The font used in the title is okay and so is the font that is used in the username, 'yong sa word na 'all genres' ang papalitan—gawin mo siyang pareho sa font na ginamit sa username.
 
Title is good, I have no problem with that.
 
Blurb is okay but the word 'love' has been repeated a lot, I suggest to keep your ideas intact and paraphrase it to have a straight to the point but full of ideas kind of blurb.
 
Your one shot have relevance to the genre, you deserved to have that 15%.
 
Hands down to the plot and uniqueness of your one shot. After I read your masterpiece, my jaw literally drops. You are really creative to came up with the plot like that. Hindi ako maka-get over sa last part. You left my mouth opened. Kudos.
 
I rate your writing style as 10% because I spot some grammar and technicality errors such as:
 
•Proper use of nang and ng, I see that you know the proper usage of this pero I think may nakaligtaan kang part about dito.
 
•Action and Dialogue tags.
 
•Comma after stating a name. Example "Hello there, Princess," nakangiting bati ng lalaki.
 
•Overusing of punctuation marks. Once lang dapat ginagamit ang punctuation marks in exception of ellipsis.
 
Example: "There you are!!!" X
                 "There you are!" ✓
                
It's pleasing right? So better observe that.
 
•Your tense used in the story is not consistent, sometimes nag-p-present tense siya at minsan past tense. You need to observed that so that the readers will not be confused about time. You need to stick at one tense lang.
 
Overall, your writing style is not boring at all. It's enjoyable but you need to observe grammar and technicalities to make your masterpiece polished.
 
The flow of your story is better than I expected. I thought na mamadaliin mo ang eksena but I was wrong, tama lang ang pag-cut at paglagay ng scenes.
 
I enjoyed reading your one shot, with the plus factor of I'm fond of fairytales. Hindi siya boring because I can really feel the feelings of Cinderella in your one shot. Every scenes ay tumatatak sa aking utak, it is indeed remarkable.
 
Overall, your one shot is enjoyable to read but you need to observe grammar and technicalities. It's good because there's a moral lesson in it. The message was also delivered well so kudos for that.
 

2. Title: Ako Muna
    Author: yoursbebe14
   

    Book Cover: 4
    Title: 5
    Blurb: N/A doesn't have a blurb.
    Relevance to the genre: 15
    Plot uniqueness: 15
    Writing Style: 10
    Flow: 10
    Enjoyment: 15
    Overall: 12
    TOTAL SCORE: 86

Feedback:
First of all, your book cover is okay because it's readable naman but I think you should change the color of the text 'muna' for uniformity. Your one shot doesn't have a blurb so I didn't score you. The plot is unique and have originality so kudos for that. Your story is good but I spot some errors especially to technicalities. It's a little bit of messy kasi pa-iba-iba ng fonts but it's okay you can still edit it naman.

Things that you should edit;

• Action tags and dialogue tags
• Proper usage of ellipses
• Nang at Ng
• Proper usage of punctuation marks

The flow of your one-shot is okay at nag-enjoy naman ako that's why I scored you perfect in that aspect. I'm just bothered about some errors that I spot.

Keep writing!

3. Title: 3 am
    Author: msohaya_wp

    Book Cover: 3
    Title: 5
    Blurb: 5
    Relevance to the genre: 15
    Plot uniqueness: 15
    Writing Style: 14
    Flow: 10
    Enjoyment: 15
    Overall: 14
    TOTAL SCORE: 96

Feedback:

Your book cover is okay but I suggest na magpalit ka ng font sa sentence na 'when everyone is asleep' kasu hindi siya readable.

Your story is really good. I felt the emotions that you put on your one-shot while reading it. I loved that your story is clean, hindi siya masakit sa mata basahin. Maganda din ang pagkakasulat at pagkaka-execute ng story the flow, the plot, your writing style are top-notch. Nag-enjoy akong basahin ang story mo kahit na masakit siya sa dibdib.

Kudos for your masterpiece! Keep writing.

4. Title: Sa Huling Araw Ng Agosto
    Author: girlinparis
   

    Book Cover: 5
    Title: 5
    Blurb: 5
    Relevance to the genre: 15
    Plot uniqueness: 13
    Writing Style: 14
    Flow: 10
    Enjoyment: 15
    Overall: 14
    TOTAL SCORE: 96

Feedback:

Your book cover is so pretty! It's eye-catching at makakahakot kaagad ng readers.

Your story is also really good. I felt the feelings that you put on your one-shot while reading it. I loved that your story is clean, hindi siya masakit sa mata basahin kasi hindi pa-iba-iba ang font. Maganda din ang pagkakasulat at pagkaka-execute ng story the flow, the plot, your writing style are top-tier. Sobrang nag-enjoy akong basahin ang story mo, gustong-gusto ko ang plot twist.

Kudos for your creation! Keep writing.

5. Title: You Betrayed Me
    Author: ElleJennifer18

   Book Cover: 5
   Title: 5
   Blurb: 4
   Relevance to the genre: 15
   Plot uniqueness: 13
   Writing Style: 13
   Flow: 10
   Enjoyment: 15
   Overall: 14
   TOTAL SCORE: 94

Feedback:

Your book cover is good. Simple siya but eye-catching and I love that it's black kasi it really matches up the story's theme.

Your story is good. Okay naman ang flow at nag-enjoy ako but I spot some errors lalo na sa technicalities.

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Hindi/'Di ✅

•Before or after 'Ah' or 'Eh' you should put a comma.

Example: Hindi ko kaya, eh.

•use a comma with the name of a person you are directly addressing.

Example: Sorry, Elle.

Kudos to your masterpiece, keep writing!