: ̗̀➛ WARMTH SECTION PT.2

1. Saving Michael by Misskairosclerosis

Title: 10/10

Cover: 6/10

Blurb: 10/10

Plot: 10/15

Creativity: 9/15

Grammar: 14/15

Characters: 3/5

Interaction with the reader: 3/5

Overall enjoyment : 11/15

Total: 76/100


Review: The storyline felt really good but the hook was missing somewhere. While, flipping through the chapters and reading them felt boring at times and also felt like it took a lot of time getting fully immersed into the book due to the character development being slowly shown althroughout. Romance did it's job which was great. Overall, the story was nice to read and the blurb is interesting.


2. Wait by Appy008

Title: 7/10

Cover: 5/10

Blurb: 10/10

Plot: 11/15

Creativity: 10/15

Grammar: 15/15

Characters: 4/5

Interaction with the readers: 4/5

Overall enjoyment: 9/15

Total: 75/100


Review: The story started off good, which showed a simple adaptive plot with less to ponder about , which had less hook in the first few chapters and as the chapters progressed it became interesting . Pointing out another fact, it felt like Adarn and Reese mainly helped the story enlighten itself, other characters didn't get much development.


3. A touch in the dark by SapphirianJ82

Title: 4/10

Cover: 9/10

Blurb: 10/10

Plot: 12/15

Creativity: 10/15

Grammar: 15/15

Characters: 4/5

Interaction with the readers: 5/5

Overall enjoyment: 14/15

Total: 83/100


Review: The book started off with a simple note, it felt simply mesmerizing when the characters appearing got their much needed development and the chemistry blazed me, it was a wonderful read expressed to perfection.


4. When last night didn't end by Exequinne

Title: 10/10

Cover: 6/10

Blurb: 9/10

Plot: 14/15

Creativity: 15/15

Grammar: 12/15

Characters: 4/5

Interaction with the readers: 5/5

Overall enjoyment: 13/15

Total: 90 /100


Review: The story at first seemed like a boring breakup story with a divorce at the first phase , but the starting sentence was awesome. Then the sudden twist of the story left me stunned which meant creativity at its best and I thoroughly enjoyed how the characters fought for themselves and for each other. A wholesome read.


5. Harbingers of Apocalypse: Pale horse by YooliaSthings

Title: 9/10

Cover: 10/10

Blurb: 10/10

Plot: 10/15

Creativity: 12/15

Grammar: 15/15

Characters: 3/5

Interaction with the readers: 2/5

Overall enjoyment: 10/15

Total: 81/100


Review: The storyline was interlaced perfectly with the events happening throughout and the chemistry between Claude and Clodette was fire . Though I am not a reader of fantasy genre this one caught my attention. Usage of too much exclaimation mark needs to be avoided. Overall, a wholesome read.


6. Stuck with you by itshikha

Title: 9/10

Cover: 4/10

Blurb: 7/10

Plot: 12/15

Creativity: 9/15

Grammar: 9/15

Characters:5/5

Interaction with the readers: 5/5

Overall enjoyment: 10/15

Total: 70/100


Review: The story started off a bit casually and the hook was missing somewhere but as the story progressed it became interesting , I found the character development of Vaani the most beautiful and Adhvik too. A good read. Grammar needs to be taken care of in between the lines of the story.


7. Us against the world by romance_lover16

Title: 10/10

Cover: 5/10

Blurb: 10/10

Plot: 12/15

Creativity: 9/15

Grammar: 14/15

Characters: 4/5

Interaction with the readers: 4/5

Overall enjoyment: 12/15

Total: 80 /100

Review: The story had a intriguing introduction, the main character had me hooked to the story, the blurb is too good but a certain improvement felt like it is greatly needed and it is the main character somewhat felt shadowed by the other minor characters but in overall the imperfections of the girl had me thinking how they too deserves the love the story states here. Great one indeed!


8. Peregrinate by Writix22

Title:9/10

Cover: 6/10

Blurb: 10/10

Plot: 12/15

Creativity: 10/15

Grammar: 13/15

Characters: 2/5

Interaction with the readers: 3/5

Overall enjoyment: 10.5/15

Total: 75.5/100


Review: From the story is what the conclusion I drawed out is, Manya's time travel as Maitri was a big development in the story it gave a depth and the story got its attention fully and overall it was intriguing but, some more analysis as for the historical basis was needed for the strong standing of the story , the world building was great althroughout.


9. Whispers of the night by ash20178
Title: 8/10

Cover: 10/10

Blurb:10/10

Plot: 11/15

Creativity: 10/15

Grammar:10/15

Characters: 4/5

Interaction with the readers:2/5

Overall enjoyment: 9/15

Total: 74/100


Review: The story had a good opening which slowly blossomed into a very heart warming and a wrenching one too.The night king's part when he revealed himself caught my attention. Critically scrutinizing, more focus on the character development is needed as readers might get confused at times and a keen attention to grammar is needed at places. Overall, a interesting read.


10. You, Me and Everything After by ElizaKeister


Title: 6/10

Cover: 9/10

Blurb: 10/10

Plot: 9/15

Creativity: 8/15

Grammar: 15/15

Characters: 4/5

Interaction with the readers: 2/5

Overall enjoyment: 8/15

Total: 71/100


Review: The prologue felt unnecessarily long with almost expressing the first chapter, it would have been better if the extra hints would start from chapter first. It was a heart wrenching story with less hook in most of the parts. Carmen 's character brightened the story beautifully.


11. Twin's Shadow by Debbierise66


Title:9/10

Cover: 10/10

Blurb: 8/10

Plot: 8/15

Creativity: 7/15

Grammar: 10/15

Characters: 4/5

Interaction with the readers: 2/5

Overall enjoyment: 8/15

Total: 66/100


Review: The plot of the story was very predictable as mentioned in the blurb. There is a clear understanding as to what might come and the predictions came true as I went on reading it as a whole. Nothing new to expect , but expressed very pleasingly althroughout.


12. The reincarnated CEO and his little flower by MistralPeaks


Title: 10/10

Cover: 7/10

Blurb: 8/10

Plot: 12/15

Creativity: 14/15

Grammar: 9/15

Characters: 5/5

Interaction with the readers: 3/5

Overall enjoyment: 12/15

Total: 80/100


Review: The title is really long of the book but the sweetness in it made me interested. The historical events elaborated along with the story's need was quite interesting. The sudden turn of events left me in awe! But, spelling mistakes needs to be avoided in the parts of the story. Overall , a nice read.


13. Je T'aime Imbecile by Strawberry1d


Title: 9/10

Cover: 4/10

Blurb: 9/10

Plot: 10/15

Creativity:9/15

Grammar: 13/15

Interaction with the readers:2/5

Characters: 3/5

Overall enjoyment:9.5/100

Total: 68.5/100


Review: The story kind of became clear in the blurb itself and clearer while reading , the inline analysis took it to a new level. Sometimes , it felt dwelling into some events much which wasn't needed it felt , otherwise a good read written nicely.



14. Hard to love, hard to lose by Dwarkaratna


Title: 8/10

Cover: 4/10

Blurb: 7/10

Plot: 12/15

Creativity: 10/15

Grammar: 13/15

Characters: 5/5

Interaction with the readers: 3/5

Overall enjoyment: 11/15

Total: 73 /100


Review: The storyline was interesting with sudden marriage being introduced in it. Loved the character of Subhanwita , even though , Arjun's character needed some light on it , it felt like it wasn't provided. The blurb and title made the story interesting to read , happy ending being the main solace.


══════・❃・WINNERS・❃・══════

First Position - When last night didn't end by Exequinne

Second Position - Spring in Hades by Natashalli

Third Position - Loving Edyth Swan by footnoteofhappiness

══════・❃・CONGRATS・❃・══════

Thank you everyone for your cooperation and also a special thanks to prekshanagupta for judging the above stories!

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