1.  The Obscure Downsides of Fame by Obscunima

Title: 6/10
Cover: 3/10
Blurb: 6/10
Plot: 9/15
Creativity: 10/15
Grammar: 10/15
Characters: 3/5
Interaction with the readers: 2/5
Overall: 10/15

Total: 59/100

Review: Starting off with the title, I love how you have created a title that directly brings us into the main theme of the story but I would suggest having a small title enough to capture the reader's attention. The cover needs a whole change from head to toe as it isn't enthralling to plunge in readers. Always remember, that a good cover will always bring in more readers. I do love where the plot is headed to where two guys burdened with fame find it hard to solve their own problems, but from the chapters I've read, there were more dialogues rather than descriptions which kind of made me confused about who is talking and where. I suggest combining a descriptive passage-to-dialogue ratio to make it more readable and engaging. There were slight grammatical errors which can be easily rectified by using grammar checkers, Overall, I love the book but with the changes mentioned above, it is simply going to shine!

2. Crown by jayda_1o1

Title: 4/10
Cover: 3/10
Blurb: 4/10
Plot: 8/15
Creativity: 9/15
Grammar: 8/15
Characters: 3/5
Interaction with the readers: 3/5
Overall: 9/15

Total: 51/100

Review: Starting off, I'm not quite sure how the title is related to the story as it's quite common and vague. I would suggest having a title that directly relates to the story. The cover needs a whole revamp as it's not very enthralling and it's tough to read the author's name. The blurb though short and concise is a bit confusing as the word 'she' is quite often used but the readers might get confused about who this 'she' is. The blurb can have an addition of the setting of the story and a bit more details on the characters without giving away too much. The plot was great and Star's character development did keep me invested to find out more about her. There are a lot of grammatical errors and many misspelled words but those can be corrected with grammar checkers. Overall, the story would stand out with the changes mentioned above.

3. Betrayed Trust by Marwa_Hussaini6

Title: 7/10
Cover: 6/10
Blurb: 5/10
Plot: 7/15
Creativity: 7/15
Grammar: 6/15
Characters: 2/5
Interaction with the readers: 2/5
Overall: 7/15
Total: 49/100

Review: Let's be honest here, there were a lot of grammatical errors starting right from the blurb that actually cut my flow of reading. Words after full stops must be capitalized and so many words were misspelled like 'Los Angeles' in the first chapter which kind of makes the readers turn away from reading your book. The book needs a whole grammar check from head-to-toe and I would suggest using Quillbot or Grammarly to do the job. Secondly, the writing style was a little bit bland. It looked more like I was reading a kid's book than a book written by a teen or an adult. I would suggest using professional writing like using 3rd POV or 1st POV and other elements that make the writing look professional. Overall, I love your passion for writing but I really would suggest you go through the above changes.

4. Forgiveness No Punishment by ArabelaTaylor

Title: 4/10
Cover: 4/10
Blurb: 4/10
Plot: 6/15
Creativity: 6/15
Grammar: 5/15
Characters: 2/5
Interaction with the readers: 2/5
Overall: 6/15

Total: 39/100

Review: I love how you have brought about a plot that has a close relation with Turkey, however, the writing style and grammatical errors really disrupted my flow of reading. The protagonist really gave me the red flag vibes from the beginning and I would have loved to see more of Sibel, but unfortunately, the grammatical errors keep popping up now and then, and I had to go back and read it twice to understand what's going on. I would suggest you use Quillbot or Grammarly to rectify the above issue.

5. Spring in Hades by Natashalli

Title: 9/10
Cover: 8/10
Blurb: 9/10
Plot: 13/15
Creativity: 14/15
Grammar: 14/15
Characters: 4/5
Interaction with the readers: 4/5
Overall: 14/15

Total: 89/100

Review: OMG! The prologue and the entire setting are just perfect! Greek mythologies have always been my favorite since I started reading Percy Jackson. Something that I loved is obviously the hook factor towards the end of the chapter which keeps readers pondering on how a golden thread might promise spring in Hades which is usually portrayed as a very dark place. Good job with the grammar and writing style!

6. Forever and Ever by jordynwritesss_

Title: 7/10 

Cover: 4/10
Blurb: 5/10
Plot: 9/15
Creativity: 10/15
Grammar: 9/15
Characters: 3/5
Interaction with the readers: 2/5
Overall: 9/15
Total: 58/100

Review: Starting off, I love the title but the cover overshadows it. A cover should look enchanting enough to draw in readers and thus I would suggest getting a better cover. The blurb, though short and concise, could include more details on the characters and the setting of the story especially taking into consideration that the first two chapters are written according to Emery and Grayson's pov's. I would suggest you use grammar checkers to rectify the grammatical errors in the story but apart from that, I love the emotions you have portrayed in the story. With a bit of change as mentioned above, we have a good teen fiction at hand!

7. A Flower Between the Thorns by mafia_lover97

Title: 8/10

Cover: 4/10
Blurb: 6/10
Plot: 13/15
Creativity: 14/15
Grammar: 12/15
Characters: 4/5
Interaction with the readers: 4/5
Overall: 14/15
Total: 79/100

Review: I love the juxtaposition in the title which really caught me firsthand but the cover is too plain for such an amazing book. I love the blurb as a whole but it lacks professionalism. I would suggest putting more into the characters and setting of the story. Something that I loved about this book is obviously your writing style. The way you write actually caught me hooked up in each and every word of each chapter and this is really a must when it comes to writing a good book. There were a few grammatical errors here and there but it could be easily corrected with grammar checkers. Overall, I love this book and I would definitely want to read more!

8. The Five Cursed Witches: Volume 1-Zoe, the witch of innocence by High_Priestess_Elena

Title: 7/10

Cover: 3/10
Blurb: 5/10
Plot: 10/15
Creativity: 12/15
Grammar: 12/15
Characters: 4/5
Interaction with the readers: 3/5
Overall: 13/15
Total: 69/100

Review: I love the title but the cover isn't one that looks too enthralling for a fantasy book. Since it's fantasy it's better to have an attractive cover rather than a plain one so that it actually grabs the attention of all the fantasy readers out there on this platform. Apart from that, I really love the portrayal, and the fact that you cannot touch anything because you are cursed is absolutely something new that I really liked. Overall, I love the book as a whole, but with the changes mentioned above, it's going to stand out!

9. The Physics of Love by SaraSmith11

Title: 9/10
Cover: 7/10
Blurb: 5/10
Plot: 13/15
Creativity: 13/15
Grammar: 13/15
Characters: 3/5
Interaction with the readers: 4/5
Overall: 12/15
Total: 79/100

Review: I love the simplicity of the title and the cover and how it directly links us to the story. The blurb though short and concise would have been better if it was detailed giving us an idea about Ted and Bianca and the whole setting of the story. The writing style would be my favorite where everything is detailed and simple so that readers especially teens can relate to each and every word written in the book. Personally, this would be one of the best teen-fics I have stumbled upon in this platform!

10. Confirm or Suffer by JankyFluffy

Title: 5/10
Cover: 4/10
Blurb: 4/10
Plot: 8/15
Creativity: 9/15
Grammar: 10/15
Characters: 2/5
Interaction with the readers: 2/5
Overall: 9/15
Total: 53/100

Review: First of all, two main elements that push and promote a book are obviously the cover and the blurb but to be honest both were a bit off here. The cover is too plain for the book and the blurb is way too long and confusing to hold the readers' attention. I would suggest you make the blurb short and concise yet fill in the details to open the door to your book. I do love the plot at hand but the writing style combined with grammatical errors might make the readers stop short and disrupt the flow of reading. You can use grammar checkers to rectify the above issue!

11. Smoke and Fire by lookinprettyGrim

Title: 8/10

Cover: 7/10
Blurb: 9/10
Plot: 13/15
Creativity: 13/15
Grammar: 11/15
Characters: 3/5
Interaction with the readers: 4/5
Overall: 13/15
Total: 81/100

Review: I love the entire course of the plot and the professionalism shown while jotting down the blurb. The writing style is simple, lucid, yet, daring. The entire course of the story was easy for the readers to understand and the only shortcoming I found was regarding the grammatical errors but apart from that the story is simply dope!

12. The Corner Store by The_Outkast

Title: 10/10

Cover: 9/10
Blurb: 4/10
Plot: 12/15
Creativity: 7/15
Grammar: 11/15
Characters: 4/5
Interaction with the readers: 4/5
Overall: 7/15
Total: 68/100

Review: I love the big two elements that is the title and the cover however the blurb could be made more expanded and professionalised. You have an amazing plot, but the simplicity of the writing style and the constant grammatical errors make us want to switch away from reading it. Apart from that, the story is simply magical!

13. Loving Edyth Swan by footnoteofhappiness

Title: 8/10

Cover: 8/10
Blurb: 7/10
Plot: 14/15
Creativity: 14/15
Grammar: 13/15
Characters: 4/5
Interaction with the readers: 4/5
Overall: 14/15
Total: 86/100

Review: The writing style of the story has a fusion of professionalism, lucidity, and simplicity which makes it easier for readers to read and sympathize with Jonathan and other characters like Rian. Overall, the story is simply natural!

14. Stay Mine by lostlovefairy

Title: 8/10
Cover: 7/10
Blurb: 7/10
Plot: 10/15
Creativity: 10/15
Grammar: 12/15
Characters: 3/5
Interaction with the readers: 3/5
Overall: 9/15
Total: 61/100

Review: Although you've used an excerpt as the blurb, which is pretty unusual, I was really interested in your story. But after 5 chapters, I'm not so sure. I like what's happening, but I feel the story's been stretched? I hoped to see whether Fiza could find Alan, despite her husband barring her from doing so...in Chapter 1? You've done a good job with the blurb, and so I really expected the plot to begin from that. 

15. Truth or Lies by Tifari

Title: 7/10
Cover: 6/10
Blurb: 9/10
Plot: 8/15
Creativity: 9/15
Grammar: 11/15
Characters: 3/5
Interaction with the readers: 3/5
Overall: 8/15
Total: 64/100

Review: The plot seems interesting, but I don't know much of it (this is after the first five chapters). I understand the main characters and their issues have to be introduced, but I hoped to see that as the story unfolds.

16. The Healing Bond by miiruex_

Title: 10/10
Cover: 9/10
Blurb: 9/10
Plot: 11/15
Creativity: 13/15
Grammar: 10/15
Characters: 3/5
Interaction with the readers: 3/5
Overall: 11/15
Total: 79/100

Review: Something that I loved about this book is the blurb! Radhika's story is immersive, and something that I love about her is why she chose to enter the medical field. The writing style was simple, making it easier for the readers to resonate with the characters, and I simply loved the plot!

17. We Have to Kill by Klaudeta07

Title: 4/10
Cover: 4/10
Blurb: 5/10
Plot: 10/15
Creativity: 11/15
Grammar: 9/15
Characters: 2/5
Interaction with the readers: 2/5
Overall: 10/15
Total: 57/100

Review: I think the story has a lot of potential, however, the lacking of the key elements which holds a book together such as the cover, blurb, and the paragraph flow kinda lets down the hang of the book. Apart from that, there's a lot of room for improvement and growth!

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