: ̗̀➛ POETRY SECTION
1. Shadows of Us by footnoteofhappiness
Cover/Title: 8/10
The flow of words - 13/15
Grammar/Spelling/Vocabulary- 14/15
Writing style- 13 /15
Poetic devices- 11/15
Emotions- 9/10
Originality- 9 /10
Enjoyment- 9/10
Total: 86 /100
Review: I appreciate your writing style, what I felt is there was no use of punctuations so it could have been more attractive if you would have used them. Rest of all is amazing.. All the best.
2. The Boy who plays with Doves by WinterlyHeights
Cover/Title: 8/10
The flow of words - 14/15
Grammar/Spelling/Vocabulary- 15/15
Writing style- 13 /15
Poetic devices- 13/15
Emotions- 10 /10
Originality- 10 /10
Enjoyment- 9/10
Total: 92/100
Review: I really am impressed by your high level imagination. But I think if you had to continue in the flow of the chapters then you could have splitted it in the parts of three three so that reader don't get bored thinking its again left so long. And coming to the cover I think it could have been more attractive. Otherwise, I loved everything about the poem. All the best and keep it up.
3. As Calm as the Storm by girlofmanythoughts
Cover/Title: 9/10
The flow of words - 12/15
Grammar/Spelling/Vocabulary- 12/15
Writing style- 12/15
Poetic devices- 10/15
Emotions- 8/10
Originality- 8/10
Enjoyment- 8/10
Total: 79/100
Review: I appreciate your writing so much. I think you should add some punctuations to separate the lines and para where you want to. Rest of all was amazing. All the best.
4. My Heart, My Sanctuary by Aravis-Brightspell
Cover/Title: 10/10
The flow of words - 15/15
Grammar/Spelling/Vocabulary- 14/15
Writing style- 14/15
Poetic devices- 14/15
Emotions- 9/10
Originality- 9/10
Enjoyment- 9/10
Total: 94/100
Review: I couldn't stop myself from reading your further poems. Like it was great joy reading them and after reading them all just one comment "YOU ARE INCREDIBLE POETESS".. All the best.
5. Constellation by Ardra06
Cover/Title: 9/10
The flow of words - 14/15
Grammar/Spelling/Vocabulary- 14/15
Writing style- 14/15
Poetic devices- 14/15
Emotions- 10/10
Originality- 9/10
Enjoyment- 9/10
Total: 93/100
Review: I reallyyy appreciate your writings.. The depth you had in yur sentences is amazing. All the best.
6. Those Unsaid Words by wild_imaginator16
Cover/Title: 9/10
The flow of words - 15/15
Grammar/Spelling/Vocabulary- 15/15
Writing style- 15/15
Poetic devices- 14/15
Emotions- 10/10
Originality- 10/10
Enjoyment- 10/10
Total: 98 /100
Review: I have fallen for your writings... You really gave me shivers with your poems, like they are so deep and amazing to get lost in. Just a thing Lies is that the cover title is common with many books, so if you look to change it, it would be more attractive... All the best.
7. His Perfume by JankyFluffy
Cover/Title: 8/10
The flow of words - 12/15
Grammar/Spelling/Vocabulary- 13/15
Writing style- 13/15
Poetic devices- 11/15
Emotions- 8/10
Originality- 8/10
Enjoyment- 7/10
Total: 80/100
Review: I really appreciate your writing... I think if you could add some punctuations in the flow of lines, it would look more attractive for people to read it. Rest of all is good. All the best.
8. Winters of the Heart by Psr1403
Cover/Title: 9/10
The flow of words - 14/15
Grammar/Spelling/Vocabulary- 15/15
Writing style- 14/15
Poetic devices- 15/15
Emotions- 10/10
Originality- 10/10
Enjoyment- 9/10
Total: 96/100
Review: Your poems are really so deep... They literally gave me shivers at one extent. Amazing writing skills. All the best.
9. When A Bud Blooms by BlueEstelle
Cover/ Title- (9/10)
The Flow Of Words - (13/15)
Grammar/ Spelling/Vocabulary - ( 14.5/15)
Writing Style - (12/15)
Poetic Device - (13/15)
Emotions -(9.5/10)
Originality - (9.5/10)
Enjoyment - (9/10)
Total - (89.5/100)
Review: Did a great job really. Your poems are amazing and emotional. I appreciate your writing skills.
10. Requiem For a Broken Soul by mafia_lover97
Cover/ Title- (10/10)
The Flow Of Words - (14/15)
Grammar/ Spelling/Vocabulary - ( 14/15)
Writing Style - (13/15)
Poetic Device - (11/15)
Emotions -(9/10)
Originality - (9/10)
Enjoyment - (10/10)
Total - (90/100)
Review: You should check your punctuation marks. Overall I really enjoyed your poems you did a great job at it. Loved the title too. I personally enjoyed it so much.
11. Too Sick With Too Love by Sxlly_Gxrl
Cover/ Title- (10/10)
The Flow Of Words - (13/15)
Grammar/ Spelling/Vocabulary - ( 14.5/15)
Writing Style - (11/15)
Poetic Device - (12/15)
Emotions -(9.5/10)
Originality - (10/10)
Enjoyment - (9/10)
Total - (89/100)
Review: Emotions are really descripted well. Loved the unique writing style you have. The themes on you write are relatable keep it up.
12. Sail by feelin_caliginous
Cover/ Title- (9/10)
The Flow Of Words - (14/15)
Grammar/ Spelling/Vocabulary - ( 14.5/15)
Writing Style - (13/15)
Poetic Device - (14/15)
Emotions -(9.5/10)
Originality - (9.5/10)
Enjoyment - (9/10)
Total - (92.5/100)
Review: Amazing job. I loved how you penned down your thoughts so beautifully yet effortlessly. I admire the way you write.
13. A Tapestry of Thoughts by A_Rey_Of_Light
Cover/ Title- (8/10)
The Flow Of Words - (14/15)
Grammar/ Spelling/Vocabulary - ( 14.5/15)
Writing Style - (14/15)
Poetic Device - (14/15)
Emotions -(9.5/10)
Originality - (9.510)
Enjoyment - (10/10)
Total - (93.5/100)
Review: Amazing title doing justice to the amazing poems. Loved the way poems are named.You have your own unique way of writing which really adds wow factor.
14. Sunshine Be Mine by Cheems1234
Cover/ Title- (7/10)
The Flow Of Words - (12/15)
Grammar/ Spelling/Vocabulary - ( 14/15)
Writing Style - (13/15)
Poetic Device - (13/15)
Emotions -(10/10)
Originality - (9.5/10)
Enjoyment - (8/10)
Total - (86.5/100)
Review: Your poems are really good. I feel use of punctuation and poetic devices would enhance it. It really knows how to evokes emotions in one.
15. Pieces and Parts by teetharentbones
Cover/Title: 6/10
The flow of words - 10/15
Grammar/Spelling/Vocabulary- 12/15
Writing style- 10/15
Poetic devices- 11/15
Emotions- 8/10
Originality- 9/10
Enjoyment- 8/10
Total: 74/100
Review: Your poems are really interesting and unique. I just think some poems need to be better formatted (Some Turtles Are People Too, A List Of Things Worth Hating, for instance).
══════・❃・WINNERS・❃・══════
First Position - Those Unsaid Words by wild_imaginator16
Second Position - Winters of the Heart by Psr1403
Third Position - My Heart, My Sanctuary by Aravis-Brightspell
══════・❃・CONGRATS・❃・══════
Thank you everyone for your cooperation and also a special thanks to Anmol_Kaira and Aryaxsidneet for judging this genre!
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