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HOUSE OF WHISPER 

AUTHOR: BONKERZZZ_ 

Results 

Title- 8 

Cover- 8 

Blurb- 3 

Plot- 14 

Creativity- 13.5 

Grammar- 15 

Characters- 5 

Interaction with readers- 5 

Overall overview- 12.5 

Total- 84 

 REVIEW: This book has a wonderful collection of beautiful short stories and poems. Perfect use of grammar and punctuations and the plot of the stories are superb! The blurb is one thing that I think the author should work on. She just said it's a collection of short stories and poems. I think the blurb will attract more readers if it contains a little insight into one story or more contained in the book. Apart from that, I really enjoyed reading the book❤️. 

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MENDING HEARTS 

AUTHOR: PRISCILLAYIADOM4

 Results

Title- 10 

Cover- 9 

Blurb- 6 

Plot- 5 

Creativity- 5 

Grammar- 4

 Characters- 3 

Interaction with readers- 4 

Overall overview- 4

Total- 50 

 REVIEW: The title and cover of this story are very good and attractive. But the content is not satisfying at all. There are a lot of grammar mistakes and the punctuation is very poor. I am just being brutally honest here. The story is disorganized; the scenes don't follow a chronological order. At one point, I was really confused about what the plot was all about. I believe the writer should rewrite the entire story, rearrange the events, and use punctuation where necessary. Furthermore, vocabulary and sentence structure should be reviewed.

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MUHARABA

 AUTHOR: IDGAFOLOGY 

 Results 

Title- 8 

Cover- 9.5 

Blurb- 8.5 

Plot- 15

Creativity- 14 

Grammar- 15 

Characters- 5 

Interaction with readers- 5 

Overall overview- 15

 Total- 95 

 REVIEW: This is one of the best stories yet! Very very NOT cliché with a stunning and catchy introduction. Reading the first chapter already got me interested in the book. I must also commend the author's writing style! The plot was perfectly drafted out and the grammar and use of vocabulary and punctuations are all superb! I must say it took me through an emotional rollercoaster. MUHARABA is a must-read for every single teenage girl

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SANCTUARY IN THE MOUNTAINS 

AUTHOR: SARADA3003 

 Results 

Title- 8 

Cover- 8 

Blurb- 9 

Plot- 14 

Creativity- 13.5 

Grammar- 14 

Characters- 5 

Interaction with readers- 5 

Overall overview- 13.5 

Total- 90 

 REVIEW: Really good story. The plot and characters are superb. Perfect and attractive blurb. I was really fascinated by the adventures Mia and her friend took part in. The author did well in satisfying my Imaginations. Very detailed explanations! I just spotted little grammatical errors here and there in the book. I believe editing will be enough to correct those mistakes. Great writing style too!

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KNOCK KNOCK 

AUTHOR: ALICEADAMS3 

 Results 

Title- 9 

Cover- 8 

Blurb- 7 

Plot- 3 

Creativity- 5 

Grammar- 7 

Characters- 2 

Interaction with readers- 3 

Overall overview- 5 

Total- 49 

 REVIEW: The title and cover of this book got me very attracted to it. The blurb is also one that is very catchy. But getting into the first chapter of the book, I was quite disappointed. The grammar structure is really bad and the use of punctuations was not well applied where necessary. I didn't understand who and what the characters were or were supposed to portray. It was a very confusing story indeed. I think the writer should rewrite this book. The story is supposed to be horror, but it wasn't close to scary at all because the scenes were not properly portrayed. I think you have really nice ideas but you need to work on your creativity when putting those ideas into writing.

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