ELENA, LEGEND ONGOING 

Title- 4/10 

Cover- 6/10 

Blurb- 5/10 

Plot- 6/15 

Creativity- 8/15 

Grammar- 6 /15 

Characters- 3/5 

Interaction with the reader- 4/5 

An overall review- 7/15 

Total - 49 /100 

REVIEW:I have both some constructive criticism and praise for this story. Starting with praise, I enjoyed the creative ideas this author had, like the fairy blinking on the page and seeing the monster in the mirror. Lots of characters have been introduced early on giving the plot more depth. There were quite a few spelling and tense errors throughout that, if changed, could improve the readability of the story. I also noticed two characters had very similar names (Clara and Claire) which could become confusing as they are sisters. I would like to congratulate the author on their story as it has lots of intriguing parts throughout.

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A MYSTICAL JOURNEY 

Title- 6/10 

Cover- 4 /10 

Blurb- 4/10 

Plot- 5/15 

Creativity- 6/15 

Grammar- 5/15 

Characters- 3/5 

Interaction with the reader- 2/5 

An overall review- 6/15 

Total - 41/100 

REVIEW: I have both some praise and constructive criticism. For praise, the story has lots of description (especially at the start when Trey is dreaming) and introduces many characters early on, opening up lots of possibilities for the storyline. There were quite a few grammar mistakes throughout that if corrected, would support the writer in improving their story. There were some overused sentences and repeated parts in this story but the writer did also present imagination.

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WITCHES BURN AT DAWN

Title- 8/10 

Cover- 8/10 

 Blurb- 7/10 

Plot- 11/15 

 Creativity- 14/15 

 Grammar- 14/15 

 Characters- 4/5 

 Interaction with the reader- 4/5 

 An overall review- 13/15 

 Total - 83/100 

REVIEW: Firstly, I would like to say I greatly enjoyed reading this story. The writer has a great imagination and a way with words, they did an amazing job with description and keeping the reader intrigued. I have very little criticism of this work- there were a few spelling/written errors but not enough to say the grammar was an issue. The characters introduced all showed promise for being very interesting and I found myself wanting to read more of the story. I would like to congratulate the author for their intriguing ideas (like the poem at the start and character-building).

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CHAMPIONS OF GODS

Title- 8/10 

Cover- 7 /10 

Blurb- 6/10 

Plot- 11/15 

Creativity- 8/15 

Grammar- 13/15 

Characters- 4/5 

Interaction with the reader- 4/5 

An overall review- 10/15 

Total - 71/100 

REVIEW: I would like to praise this author for their creativity and ability to create intriguing storytelling. Many characters were introduced early on and I found myself wanting to read more. The story had really unique ideas, and although in places there was a lot to understand, I still have a lot of praise for this story.

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THRONE OF DRAGONIX 

Title- 6/10 

Cover- 8 /10 

Blurb- 5/10 

Plot- 11 /15 

Creativity- 14/15 

Grammar- 12/15 

Characters- 3/5 

Interaction with the reader-2/ 5 

An overall review- 12/15 

Total: 73/100 

REVIEW: I found this story to be extremely creative, with the author including detailed descriptions of the many titles and dragons in the story. While I found myself a bit confused in parts, I could tell that this was intended and that the story would unravel to explain itself. I was really intrigued while reading this story. My only criticism could be that, apart from the start, there wasn't much interaction with the reader, but this was a minor criticism.

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THE NIGHT'S EYE 

Title- 6 /10 

Cover- 8 /10 

Blurb- 9/10 

Plot- 12/15 

Creativity- 11/15 

Grammar- 13/15 

Characters- 4/5 

Interaction with the reader- 4/5 

An overall review- 12/15 

Total - 79/100 

REVIEW: This story had the most interesting blurb of all of the stories and the content delivered. The prologue was dark and descriptive and the following chapters kept me hooked, and the dialogue was really strong. I really enjoyed this story and the characters, and have lots of praise for the author.

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ATLANTIA: RISE OF REBELLION

Title- 5/10 

Cover- 7/10 

Blurb- 8/10 

Plot- 12 /15 

Creativity- 12/15 

Grammar- 10/15 

Characters- 4/5 

Interaction with the reader- 5/5 

An overall review- 11/15 

Total - 74/100 

REVIEW: I really enjoyed this story: The dialogue was realistic, the story itself was very interesting and descriptive and I liked how the author dedicated it to the readers. The chapters were a nice length and I enjoyed the creativity throughout. Apart from a few grammar errors, I do not have any criticism for this story, mainly praise!

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JUPITER'S ASCENSION

Title: 7/10 

Cover: 6/10 

Blurb: 7/10 

Plot: 8/15 

Creativity: 8/15 

Grammar: 11/15 

Characters: 3/5 

Interaction with the reader: 4/5 

An overall review: 7/15 

Total points: 61/100 

REVIEW: I really enjoyed this story! I love how creative the writing is and the descriptive language. A few words were misspelled and a few sentences could have been worded easier, but I overall have praise for this story and its the author! I enjoyed the characters and felt like the author interacted with the reader.