name: Rebellion

author: jachinthebox

genre: fantasy

- book cover/book cover quality - [4/5]

this cover seems quite simplistic which, in this context, is not a bad thing. it follows the fantasy concept very well.

- the title and its ability to relate to the story - [5/5]

again, you went with something simple here, but it wasn't just some random, fancy word you picked to sound/look smart. it definitely relates to what is going on in the story.

- the blurb - [5/5]

your blurb i concise, yet detailed. it definitely attracts a reader with good taste, which I'm nearly certain of. it's important to have a good blurb because, frankly, it tells enough about your story without telling too much. as your book is one that is planned to be heavy with multiple volumes, as you mentioned, it must've been quite difficult to write that out. well done.

- the first few chapters [5/5]

each chapter is a length not too long nor time-consuming, but long enough to tell enough relevant to the plot in a short space and keep the reader engaged. the opening sentence for the first chapter isn't too long, therefore, again, catching the attention of the reader as soon as eyes are set on the 'page'. I'm quite new to this style of writing, so i'd say you've introduced it to me well.

- spag (spelling, punctuation and grammar) - [5/5]

not much to say here. your spelling and grammar is outstanding and absolutely immaculate. i can tell that you went through each sentence, making sure that your i's are dotted and your t's are crossed. in other words, you've been nice and thorough. what some other writers may believe is that readers don't care for grammar. but you have kindly taken into account the large chunk of readers, including me, who do. kudos to you!

- uniqueness - [5/5]

i definitely haven't come across a single book split into volumes with so many chapters. it's a wonder how you manage to keep up, but you do. i love your book and from the cover alone, i'd hope to see it as a suitable anime!

- overall: [29/30]

keep it up ;)