Review & Winner of 'The Alchemy of Originality'

GREETINGS FROM THE ALCHEMY TEAM,

SO NOW WE ARE TALKING ABOUT OUR ORIGINALITY AKA FICTION CATEGORY

JUDGE: @TheAlchemyAwards

1. Username: BellaArtz
Book: Keeper Of Demonic Forces.


Title of the book 5/5 (Loved the title)

Cover presentation 5/5 (the cover is amazing)Blurb 9/10 (One of the best blurb with good mix of short intro and engaging topics. Good work)The Opening Chapter 9/10 (Loved the opening scene with vivid description of the book plot)Grammar 8/10 (Good)Plot Twists 8/10 (Good)Vocabularies 7.5/10 (Good, you can do better)Dialogues Deliveries 7/10 (Good)Character Narrations 9/10 (Good)Story Development 9/10 (Good)Overall 8.5/10 (Good work)

Total: 85/100


2. Username : Kathy_Marwin
Book name : Five Sisters, Warriors of Finella


Title of the book 5/5 (The title is really good)

Cover presentation 3.5/5 (maybe you can use a little better graphics covers to attract more readers)Blurb 7.5/10 (Crisp, but lack of the hooking factor)The Opening Chapter 8/10 (Good work there)Grammar 8/10 (Okay)Plot Twists 6.5/10 (not much with twist and turns. But is good for a children's fiction)Vocabularies7/10 (okay)Dialogues Deliveries 8/10 (Good)Character Narrations 7/10 (Okay)Story Development 8.5/10 (Nicely done)Overall 7.5/10 (Good)

Total: 76.5/100


3. Username: romance_lover16

Title: Freeing Anvi


Title of the book 4/5 (Nice title)

Cover presentation 4/5 (Cover is amazing tho. But maybe a little too much. You can use better described cover for this amazing book )Blurb 8/10 (Nice)The Opening Chapter 8/10 (Good with descriptive plots)Grammar 8/10 (okay)Plot Twists 8/10 (Nicely done)Vocabularies 7/10 (Could've been better)Dialogues Deliveries 9/10 (Loved it)Character Narrations 7.5/10 (Good)Story Development 8/10 (Good)Overall 8/10 (Good)

Total: 79.5/100


4. Username: AnnamitaMuscaria
Title: Hell is an Empty Heart


Title of the book 5/5 (The title is one of the best titles we have came across for fantasy genre. Really loved it)

Cover presentation 4/5 (the cover looks decent. But could've been better to attract more readers. Well the fonts are good, but maybe try to use some other options to form the right meaning of this amazing book)Blurb 10/10 (Excellent work there)The Opening Chapter 9/10 (Well done)Grammar 8/10 (Good)Plot Twists 6/10 (Not much with twist and turns)Vocabularies 9/10 (Good work)Dialogues Deliveries 8/10 (Good)Character Narrations 8/10 (Good)Story Development 7.5/10 (Good)Overall 8/10 (Good)

Total: 82.5/100


5. Username: @maria_evans
Title: Scars & Secrets


Title of the book/5

Cover presentation/5Blurb/10The Opening Chapter/10Grammar/10Plot Twists/10Vocabularies/10Dialogues Deliveries/10Character Narrations/10Story Development/10Overall/10

Total: --/100

THE BOOK THAT WAS SUBMITTED, IS NOT FOUND ON THE PROFILE, HENCE REJECTED.


6. Username: @Elysian_Aon
Title: War In Embers


Title of the book 3.5/5 (Nice)

Cover presentation 3/5 (Covers need more attention. Try to use some themed covers)Blurb 7/10 (Okay)The Opening Chapter 8/10 (Good work there)Grammar 7/10 (need attention)Plot Twists 7/10 (Okay)Vocabularies 7/10 (Okay)Dialogues Deliveries 8/10 (Good)Character Narrations 8.5/10 (Good work there)Story Development 7/10 (Nicely done)Overall 7.5/10 (Good work)

Total: 73.5/100


7. Username: Anunimouse96
Title: Coliseum


Title of the book 5/5 (The name of the book is quite eye catchy)

Cover presentation 3/5 (need attention on the covers. Try using more graphic themed cover)Blurb 8/10 (Well the book is not a regular fantasy. The moral of the book id really catchy. Loved how it themed from the tournament to the secrets and so much more)The Opening Chapter 8/10 (great work there)Grammar 8/10 (Good)Plot Twists 8/10 (Nicely depicted the scenes)Vocabularies 8/10 (Good)Dialogues Deliveries 7/10 (Okay)Character Narrations 7/10 (Okay)Story Development 8/10  (Good)Overall 7.5/10 (Good)

Total: 77.5/100


8. Username: jachinthebox
Title: Rebellion: Prince of Dawn


Title of the book 5/5 (Loved the title)

Cover presentation 5/5 (The cover is really cute)Blurb 9/10 (Awesome work on the quotes in the blurb)The Opening Chapter 9.5/10 (Great work)Grammar 9/10 (Almost perfect)Plot Twists 9/10 (Awesomely descripted)Vocabularies 8.5/10 (Good)Dialogues Deliveries 8.5/10 (great job)Character Narrations 8.5/10 (great job)Story Development 8.5/10 (great job)Overall 9/10 (great job)

Total: 89.5/100


9. Username: @Sooumi
Title: Half


Title of the book 4.5/5 (Love the Title)

Cover presentation 5/5 (The cover is dope)Blurb 7/10 (Good work there)The Opening Chapter 8.5/10 (nicely descripted)Grammar 6.5/10 (Need a little attention there)Plot Twists 7/10 (Good)Vocabularies 6/10 (Okay)Dialogues Deliveries 8/10 (Nicely done)Character Narrations 8/10 (Good work)Story Development 8/10 (good)Overall 7.5/10 (Good)

Total: 84/100


10. Username: @minnyisnothere
Title: God's Wish: The Bearer of fruit


Title of the book 4/5 (Good choice with the title)Cover presentation 5/5 (loved the cover. Maybe you can publish the book. It has so much potential)Blurb 7/10 (Well done with the blurb, but wish, you could give a little more quotes for the engagement)The Opening Chapter 8/10 (Nicely done)Grammar 8/10 (good)Plot Twists 8.5/10 (Nicely done)Vocabularies 7/10 (Okay)Dialogues Deliveries 8.5/10 (Well done)Character Narrations 8.5/10 (Wonderful work with the narration. Had the suspense till the end)Story Development 8/10 (Good)Overall 8.5/10 (Great work)

Total: 81/100


AND NOW THE TIME OF OUR CHAMPIONS

OUR 1ST WINNER 

&

THE ALCHEMY BOOK OF THE YEAR, ORIGINALITY GENRE IS

RIBELLION: PRINCE OF DAWN BY jachinthebox

CONGRATULATIONS AUTHOR!!!

 NOW OUR 2ND WINNER IS 

KEEPER OF DEMONIC FORCE BY BellaArtz

CONGRATULATIONS AUTHOR!!!

AND NOW OUR 3RD WINNER IS 

HALF BY @Sooumi

CONGRATULATIONS AUTHOR!!!


AND NOW IS THE TIME FOR OUR RUNNER UPS

OUR FIRST RUNER UP IS

HELL IS AN EMPTY HEART BY AnnamitaMuscaria

AND OUR 2ND RUNNER UP IS

GOD'S WISH: BEARER OF FRUIT BY @minnyisnothere

CONGRATULATIONS TO BOTH OF OUR AUTHORS!!!




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