WINNER!
Let's welcome another winner from the General Fiction category....
Congrats!!!
FROM THE JUDGE — fareeree
Underwater
Overall it is a very beautiful story. The cover of the book is perfect for the title, the writing style is something you don't see everyday. Everything about characters, the suspense, the dialogue is something anyone would enjoy reading.
What killed the story was the ending. It felt as if the writer didn't think it through. The ending is a blow no-one would forget. The writer was trying to pass a message, but didn't take their time to grab the message before bombarding the readers with it. It was a full blow. Although I learnt there is a sequel, which maybe would explain what had happened, since we were awarding only the first book, we didn't venture into the sequel. I believe the writer could have done a little better than that. It would have come first, but that dragged it to second place, with a score 97.
NEW COVER (made by Donaldprince)
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