WINNER!
And we have another Mystery / Thriller winner in the house!!!
Let's welcome....
Survival by Jesunbo_fa !!!
Congratulations!!!
FROM THE JUDGE — Cephasqueen
Survival by Jesunbo_fa
*Cover*:- Haven't gotten the full context of the book yet but as far as we are talking survival, I think it quite works. *8*
*Title:- 10*
*Plot*:- There isn't a lot to go on with but I can tell you it's a great start. I remember reading the first chapter ages ago and anticipating the rest of it. There's the thrill, the mystery, the unanswered questions and unsolved murders. I personally appreciate the pace, slow, steady, captivating. *18*
*Dialogue*:- Real life is held together by communication. The conversations are not only entertaining but also educative and aids to push the plot forward. *10*
*Character Development*:- I think their personalities are shaping up quite well, I already have an insight to who the characters are. I can tell that Connor is brave and good at his job and Hayden though hearty with a zest for life is still guarded. *15*
*Spelling/Grammar*:- The work has obviously been edited. I think I sighted just one misspelled word. *18*
*Writing style*:- Sort of like James Patterson but not really😁. First person narrative for our main guy and good ol' observational narration for the rest. It works perfectly.
*TOTAL = 89*
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