RANDOM RESULTS !!
RANDOM RESULTS
Judged by ByThyButterfly !
First place:
Behind That Mask, yusrawrites
Review:
" A broken girl held only by the remaining broken bonds she still has with her family. The writing style is truly one to fall in love with; vivid yet bleak. Overall, a really good read. "
Second place:
After 2am, lunahmed
Review:
" Essays of reflection, emotion, and secrets that paint a vivid picture. However, it would have a better flow if it was written in poem form. Regardless, the only word needed to describe them all is: poetic. "
Third place:
Iris, Nadnoud
Review:
" An eye-catching title packed with an entertaining writing style. It really appeals to the teen fiction category. Overall, it's a solid plot and a good start filled with a lot of potential. Truly an enjoyable read. "
First runner up:
Shut up! I Have a Phone Call, @KariRakitan
Review:
" Quite open and controversial with the direct themes for a diary. Overall, however, it stands with a solid point on each part with how the author words and exemplifies these controversial topics. "
Second runner up:
Lola: Lady of Sorrow, DestinyNdi
Review:
" An interesting premise but lacks in both depth and narration. With a use of more vivid adjectives you can bypass this flaw. Other than that, just give a slight touch on the grammar and it'll be a good read. "
Third runner up:
Pancake ice, MooonYagami
Review:
" A fantas that tells the tale of the seven spirits that created the universe. It's an interesting concept but has major flaw in the length of the story. The three chapters altogether could have just been merged into one with introducing more plot points. Overall, it has potential to make it an eye-catch if the major flaw was omitted. "
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