Suggestions/story sum up


The 90's Kids is an orignal concept I (Deltaknightart) came up with in 2017 with the help of a close friend over a game of 'add context'.

 This story is very precious to me and I thank everyone who joins! You're helping develop and flesh out a story that will hopefully one day be a television show or perhaps a comic book! 

So if you have any suggestions for traits for the creatures/characters that I should add, new races or characters that should be part of the story, a new planet, or really anything you think should be cannon, let me know because it will help me a lot!

Thanks again to everyone for coming to the circus! ^o^

The story thus far: 

Thomas is the ringleader of a family friendly traveling circus called The 90's Kids along with his four friends. He's what's known as a demon by the other four races, the humans, the fienkins, the alkins and the skinwalkers. A demon is a creature that is said to have gone extinct ten years ago as of the current time period when their planet Tearurtra was destroyed by means still uncertain to this day. Thomas believes he is the last one alive, having fled his planet with his older brother a year prior to the destruction. The two hid out on Asteria, the neighbouring planet, using their abilities to blend into the fienkin society, as demons were widely hated, feared and utterly despised by the other races. 

The year of the planet's destruction he and his brother were approached by a malevolent force that was immune to the demons powers, Thomas's brother was killed protecting his younger brother, while Thomas lost his hand in the battle and managed to escape. He was found by a mute human with a face prosthetic and got his own prosthetic for his hand, and learned his name through mind reading, which was Ace. Ace introduces him to his best friend Wind Chester, and Thomas was able to heal his broken arm, causing Wind Chester to be rather graceful. They meet a young half drown fienkin later in the streets and save her, and eventually learn she calls herself Rice Field and that she's from a rich family, hence she's never had to survive on her own or really do anything for herself. She tells them how she could steal a lot of money from her family to buy a train that they can use to escape. Wind Chester takes the group to meet a friend he made, and introduces them to another fienkin in an orphanage nicknamed The Firestarter, who helps them get the money. They get their train and are instantly met with the malevolent form, who promises if they give it sacrifices it will each return something important to them, and if they don't, it will kill them. The group of kids are comply and they realize that they need to hide their crimes or suffer capital punishment. They come to the agreement that they need to stay together and take care of eachother, as nobody will ever understand freaks like them. Realizing they are freaks they decide to use that and settle on a circus.  

After a year on Asteria and a few murders, their acts gets better and their circus gets more developed. Their train helps keep them on the move and one day they find the orphaned Huxley, realizing he's a kid with no family they take pity on him and adopt him into their group. As the group grow close to him they realize that they can't let him know anything about their true acts, as they don't want him to be punished no have his innocence taken. Huxley starts asking for an act even if he's young, they deny it with the intention of keeping him safe, this only annoys Huxley as he thinks they see him as a baby when he isn't one. After four years of running and hiding from the police they arrive at Pipra and plan to stay for a whole month, and preform their circus and their crimes, until one night an Alkin named Margo, who somehow is immune to Thomas's mind control powers, witnesses a crime. Now he's stuck with the Kids, and his only hope of exposing them is through the one person he can talk to, Huxley.


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