Why I'm not updating recently.

I'm seriously tired of wattpad right now. It's really. REALLY. Hard to find good books on here and I'm not just talking about Naruto books.

Everything's so so cliché and my writing is too. I've looked back at my writing and realized it's half-assed.

It looks like it was written by a 2- year old. So I went on fanfiction.net just so you know the layout of fanfiction.net is like total trash. I went on their and enhanced my writing skills and now I'm back and I'll be on both accounts.

I want your honest opinions should I re-edit the chapters one by one or should I just continue from where I left off and change things from then on.

By the way you should really check out my book on fanfiction.net.

My Account Name is Lolalight1.

The title of my book is The adventures of Hestia and Aphrodite.

I know. It sounds weird but it is Naruto fanfiction.

Here's a preview.

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Hestia was not one to whine for no apparent reason without a cause. Gods and Goddesses especially took the cake for whining on a whim. Most people would think Gods and Goddesses could not have everyday normal lives, well the most normal they're lives could get from there.

They partied, they got drunk, they cried, they got angry, in fact, if not for the fact they were blessed with immortality and individual powers they would have been exactly the same as mortals.

Hestia was, in fact, a Goddess but she did not indulge in the petty squabbles her family started. Hestia preferred to keep to herself it kept from having to deal with the pettiness of her immortalised family.

Aphrodite and Hestia associated a lot believe it or not. Aphrodite was obviously the goddess of love. Hestia was known for Family, Hearth, Agriculture and in general fire.

Family and Love usually always go together so they usually associated with each other fairly often. Even though their personality differed they got along almost all of the time but it couldn't be helped family were prone to argue, especially if there immortal.

Apollo always brings the life to the parties. Just like the sun he had blonde hair and grey eyes. But he was always tanned and usually very busy with his job of bringing the sun up and setting it. He still made time to hang out with her, though.

Hecate was actually a trouble maker hard to believe ,but it was true for a goddess who could see the multiple versions of the future, past, and present. Hecate was always getting Hestia in trouble with stuff like planting stolen Ambrosia into Hestia's domain. But it was always in a manner of jesting.

Hestia already knew she was not a popular goddess and she was lucky to even be considered a goddess there were 12 seats on the council. Demi-Gods called them the "Big 12". They were the most popular and known gods. Hecate and Hestia were part of the minor gods for a biased reason.

So when Aphrodite became banished to a Minor God, Hestia knew she had to step in Aphrodite was important she was Goddess of love. What- W-what in the Hades was wrong with Zeus?

She stormed in the pavilion that Annabeth the daughter of Athena had recently redesigned, Hecate at arm right by her side as usual.

"Zeus!" She called out lightly she was in her normal flame like child form.

Of course, the whole "Big 12" followed along with the appearance of the child-like, flame. Hestia was not easily prone to be angry so there was sure to be a show.

Zeus raised an eyebrow if this was because of Aphrodite he wouldn't actually be surprised, he was waiting for her to show up.

"Put her back in her chair. Now." Hestia demanded. Hecate's eyebrows shot up clearly Hestia was angrier than she realized.

"Silence! Hestia, do you realize what offense you just pulled?"
Zeus questioned firmly.

Aphrodite finally spoke up " You are such a-a an arse you don't belong on the first seat of the Gods! We're supposed to be family but you treat us like we're anything but."

"Silence I say! You fools. I'm tired of your query you are forever banished from this pavilion. No, I have changed my mind it seems I have been too lenient with you two. You are hereby banished from this Dimension you shall be sent to a different place." He commented in an angry tone.

He held out his hand to summon his most valuable lightning bolt.
He then shot 10,000 bolts of lightning at the two goddesses. Hestia knew Percy would be furious as Nico. Since they were the two friendliest Demi-Gods that she daily received thanks from.

Oh well at least Hermes wing shoes won't follow her around anymore he's been flirting for years. It was getting exhausting.

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See you can see the difference between this and my old crap of writing. So hope you guys enjoy.

Btw I'm shouting out from Queens,New York right now WOOHHHOO.

I'm only visiting. I'm not gonna tell you guys what state I live in hell no.

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