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𝟡. (𝟙𝟘.) Golden Quotes by goldenrozes_ 

Judge WimpieKid 

Engagement 18/20

Such a cute book. It's full of quotes- all positive and inspirational. Some of them will make you laugh out loud while some will motivate you too. It is going to bring a smile to your face.

Concept 8/10

A nice concept. We all need this freshness, especially during this horrible horrible situation the world is facing right now.

Cover 9/10

Aesthetically pleasing. Very pretty.

The book description 7/10

Humorous and cute.

Technicalities 40/50

Short quotes. There are no grammatical errors, that's obvious. The writing style is poetic and adorable. It's a cute pocket book for fun times.

Total 82/100

Judge shadoocoffee25 

Engagement 16/20

It is a nice idea, it brings joy to you and makes you smile. It is a quotes book, so it doesn't have a plotline that would hook me.

Concept 9/10

It is definitely new, I haven't seen any other books like this before. It is a beautiful idea.

Cover 9/10

It fits the theme perfectly. The cover is cutely designed to fit the book.

The book description 6/10

It describes the book greatly.

Technicalities 30/50

It is impossible to find errors because they are all quotes. It isn't a plot story, it is a book that consists of quotes.

Total 70/100

Total from both judges 152/200

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𝟡. (𝟙𝟘.) Damaged Goods by djgraves01 

Judge WimpieKid 

Engagement 17/20

The book is intriguing. It starts off as a typical coming-of-age novel, slowly delving into deeper and darker themes. Given that it's rated R, I wanted to read further because I could see the progress the story makes step by step.

Concept 9/10

Not cliché. Definitely not cliché. It's a journey from darkness to light. Unique to an extent.

Cover 8/10

It's symbolic to the storyline. Though the fonts could have been different because they overshadow the beauty of the cover.

The book description 8/10

An intriguing description that serves as a good start and maintains the idea that the story is worth a read. Makes you wonder and curious.

Technicalities 40/50

I felt this novel needs some editing- the language part mostly. Commas and full stops are placed unnecessarily and some sentences have an abrupt end. The writing style is affected due to these irregularities. The idea behind the story is fresh, the characters are likable but the grammatical errors make them a bit dim. Just one good editing and I am sure this book will reach places.

Total 82/100

Judge OutOfMyImagination 

Engagement 10/20

The prologue might be unnecessary. It does add a bit of intrigue to the story but it's very short. And the prologue is in the third person's point of view and the rest of the story is in the first, it should stay consistent. The first chapter lacks the natural flow, scenes change very fast, and there's not much in them. The story appeared better balanced with chapter three.

Concept 7/10

The concept is not very intriguing, might be because I'm not a target audience for this book. Seems like a book about teens and their daily lives so far there is no big conflict in it or something that would feel very special and unseen before.

Cover 10/10

The cover is very good, it captures the genre perfectly. And adds a mystery to the story as well.

The book description 8/10

The start of the description is not very interesting, what captured my attention was a dialogue part that seemed to be intriguing enough.

Technicalities 35/50

I like dialogue-based books. It lets us know characters better in that way. However, more description would be useful mainly for the space around characters. The character description is decent but also could be better. Flashback in chapter five was done poorly and needs a better flow, maybe as Austin's memory. Dialogue structure and grammar are decent but could be improved with editing, there were some errors and sometimes the tenses flipped as well.

Total 70/100

Total from both judges 152/200

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𝟠. The Thing About Forever by AnanyaSreen909 

Judge WimpieKid 

Engagement 16/20

It's a cute story. I like the idea of the lifestyle differences that the protagonist might have to go from the move. It felt a bit rushed, to be honest though.

Concept 7/10

The concept is not exactly new but nonetheless, it keeps you wanting to read further because you want to see the character development eventually.

Cover 8/10

Very eye-catching. Beautiful. I liked the beach on the cover- as the blurb literally starts with the words- Malibu Beach! Catches the essence well.

The book description 8/10

The description is nice. You get the idea about the story pretty well. It would get you to open the book that's for sure. Overall, positive and straightforward.

Technicalities 40/50

Use of very long sentences. Some breaks can be improvised. Few spelling mistakes are there too, punctuation is also overall good. The writing style is nice, simple, and comprehensible. You can expect good character development.

Total 79/100

Judge shadoocoffee25 

Engagement 17/20

It is a cute story, reading it was fun. It was rushed through.

Concept 7/10

It is your usual highschool story. It has a nice idea though, the change of lifestyle and how things change, the difficulty and all of that stuff.

Cover 9/10

The cover is well designed. It fits the theme and tells you what type of story this book is. Very cute and pretty.

The book description 8/10

Makes you want to read the story, described enough to grab your attention.

Technicalities 40/50

There are some mistakes here and there, punctuation mostly. The writing style is great. It has a solid idea but as I said before, it was rushed. It could use some more details here and there. The characters are typical teenagers, so they were well written.

Total 81/100

Total from both judges 160/200

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𝟞.(𝟟.) I don't like you back by ever_after04 

Judge WimpieKid 

Engagement 17/20

The storyline is very common on Wattpad. If you are into highschool, the teenage story then you are at the right place. Personally, I liked it because I am biased toward romance and drama.

Concept 7/10

Very Cliché. I liked one thing a lot- the diversity was great. Themes of racial diversity and migration are very strong points.

Cover 6/10

It's a Manip cover. So if you are a fan of those celebrities, you are bound to get right into it. Could be a bit more modified according to the storyline though. It felt a little clumsy.

The book description 7/10

The description was good. It's very predictable. If you are a hardcore Wattpad reader you can easily guess at least a big portion just by going through the description.

Technicalities 42/50

Only a few grammatical mistakes. I couldn't find many errors. Lack of inverted commas and some paragraphs are too long but overall the language and the writing style are fluid. You can feel the vibe of the story.

Total 79/100

Judge shadoocoffee25 

Engagement 18/20

It is a great story. The usual highschool romance, and drama. I liked it, to be honest. It makes you want to continue reading it.

Concept 7/10

As I said before, it is a cliche high school romance story. I like how mixed the story was, from race difference and immigration to the physique of characters.

Cover 6/10

The cover is pretty, but I personally wouldn't have read the book because the cover isn't attractive.

The book description 8/10

The description is perfect, enough is written. It makes you want to read the book.

Technicalities 45/50

There are some spelling mistakes here and there. Grammar too. The characters are well developed and unique. The whole plotline has a special touch to it.

Total 84/100

Total from both judges 163/200

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𝟞.(𝟟.) The Disappointment Kid by mellimack 

Judge WimpieKid 

Engagement 19/20

It is RAW. It's so realistic, the racial discrimination, insecurities of a person, the pressure of a neglected kid. It hits you. The angst is there, it's so moving and painful. This book made me cry but I couldn't stop reading it.. because it's a mirror to how the world works. Loved it.

Concept 9/10

Fantastic concept. We need more stories like this.

Cover 10/10

Very beautiful. Captures the storyline so well.

The book description 9/10

A well-written description. Very very intriguing and I liked how the writer has given a clear warning about the mature nature of the story, so that young readers know what they are getting into.

Technicalities 45/50

The writing style is very fluent. I kept wanting more. More of the beauty the writer brings to this story. The essence of the story is very realistic. The angst and the storyline both capture the beauty of the prose. The protagonist is so likable and you genuinely feel the darkness that surrounds her. You can't help but feel sympathy and pain for her.

Total 92/100

Judge OutOfMyImagination 

Engagement 10/20

In the first five chapters so far not that much happened in the story Katherine is mainly in her headspace. It's not a bad thing but it's a bit hard to understand why she feels that way. She often remembers her mother's words but there is not that much dialogue between them.

Concept 7/10

The story is mainly in Katherine's head in a way. She is talking directly to a reader which gives a feeling we are reading her diary. She tells us things but we don't feel or see them. For example, her sister is described as bubbly but we as readers didn't even meet her, we want to see in what way her sister is so much better than Katherine, or it's just the way Katerine sees her sister.

Cover 7/10

The cover fits the genre and overall looks not bad. I think different fonts would work a bit better. And I'm not sure about the forest theme on the cover as well, the topic of the place might come later.

The book description 7/10

The description does fit the story but I feel a lack of a bigger hook. There are a lot of similarly described books and it doesn't feel special enough from the current desription.

Technicalities 40/50

Grammar, spelling, and punctuation are great. What I missed was the character's description and overall description of surroundings. It was hard to imagine the scenes and I felt the lack of dialogue as well. By chapter five we should know how characters look and it's just not there. Katherine is the main character and we know just her, other characters are just not there. I want to know what she and Henry talked about while they went out. She felt something for him, he ignored her later for some reason. For me, that suggested that the going out part might look different for him. The story is good and I did like it but it has too much of Katerine in her head aspect that we don't know anything else just how she feels and I don't even know why she feels that way because we don't see how she is ignored by her classmate or that her mother has a bad opinion of her. It's a lot of "tell" and not "show".

Total 71/100

Total from both judges 163/200

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Books which going to round two!

𝟝. Songs of the Sky by earlfangs 

Judge WimpieKid 

Engagement 17/20

The story has an overall simple pace. I'll start with the prologue, it's a bit long but has a mysterious setting, it raises curiosity. The story was not rushed. It's easy to imagine the surroundings as the description is good. It can keep you engaged.

Concept 7/10

It's a bit cliché but it pulls off the storyline. Although a bit more development could have been there.

Cover 8/10

The cover is beautiful. The large golden fonts definitely make it eye-catchy. It's attractive in a minimalistic sense, though a bit more modifications could be made due to the aura of the story.

The book description 8/10

The description is clipped with no extra information. So for me, that's a plus point. You get a straightforward idea.

Technicalities 40/50

Now, we come to the difficult part. Wrong use of commas and full stops at some places. The writing style is good, the flow is nice but seems to lack a little accuracy. The problem is with the tenses. There is confusion between the Past and Present tense. Use of some unnecessary words. Also, I want to point out some examples, like serve~ served, chase~chased. Very few spelling mistakes though.

Total 80/100

Judge shadoocoffee25 

Engagement 19/20

The story is amazing. It didn't capture my attention at first, but when I started reading it I couldn't stop until I finished the whole book. The prologue pulls you in, a really great start.

Concept 8/10

I have never read a book like this before, but it is definitely cliche. But this one has lots of possible endings, which makes it more interesting.

Cover 8/10

The cover is eye-catching and fits the theme. But I didn't like it that much, it doesn't give the story its real beauty.

The book description 7/10

The description is great, but it is confusing. You wouldn't understand it unless you start reading the book. It made me dread reading the book.

Technicalities 45/50

The characters are well-built. Throughout the story, you could see character development, yet their main characteristics didn't change. I really liked the writing style, it is organized and well structured. the dialogue can be read easily, and it doesn't confuse. For spelling and grammar mistakes, there are some punctuation mistakes here and there, but I didn't come across any spelling mistakes.

Total 87/100

Total from both judges 167/200

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𝟛.(𝟜.) Cupid's Broken Arrows by Vamprixussa 

Judge WimpieKid 

Engagement 18/20

It's interesting. It's very interesting. I found myself laughing a lot. It's a fun read, quite entertaining, and hilarious. Very much relatable, the protagonist. Kept me engaged.

Concept 8/10

A little bit cliché but fresh in its own way. The humor is on point.

Cover 10/10

Gorgeous cover. No more, no less. Loved it.

The book description 9/10

The description is accurate. It's a bit funny and would make you curious too. I definitely wanted to read further, and it seemed so poetic too.

Technicalities 40/50

Now, punctuation needs focus. There were unnecessary commas, inverted commas in many places. The writing style is good, engaging, humorous. Dialogues are less because a lot of self-talk is going on, it makes the story very funny but some conversation can be added. Few grammatical and spelling mistakes.

Total 85/100

Judge shadoocoffee25

Engagement 16/20

It is a very great story and got my attention. I am planning on completing the whole book after this. very funny too.

Concept 8/10

It is special, but a little cliche. I can totally relate to what is going on in that book.

Cover 8/10

It is definitely eye-catching, I really liked it. It might need some editing though. the title deserves to be written on it.

The book description 8/10

It makes you want to read the book. very creative.

Technicalities 45/50

The protagonist is well written and is very relatable. The writing style is amazing. There isn't a lot of dialogue, it is mostly between the protagonist and her 'brain' or inner voice.I didn't really stumble upon any grammar or spelling mistakes.

Total 85/100

Total from both judges 170/200

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𝟛.(𝟜.) Debbie's Vengeance by Nablai 

Judge WimpieKid 

Engagement 17/20

It's a mix of fantasy and teen fic. It's a quite dark storyline. You get curious, intrigued and it makes you feel like you are watching a movie, it's so fluid. It will keep you engaged for sure.

Concept 9/10

Fresh concept but it has a pinch of cliché due to the Rags to Riches storyline, but all that apart it still manages to pull it off nicely with all the interesting elements- Fantasy and Mystery.

Cover 9/10

Don't get me started on this. It's dark and gorgeous. So gothic and wicked.

The book description 9/10

It's simple and promising. Mysterious in a way. People are bound to get curious just through the description.

Technicalities 43/50

Chapter length, Paragraph length, and grammar- all on point. No spelling mistakes. Punctuation is very accurate too. The writing style is simple and engaging. Beautifully described incidents. The writing is matured and has a flow to it. The character is childish and sensible at the same time. Good writing.

Total 86/100

Judge shadoocoffee25

Engagement 19/20

I really like the story, it is well written. An amazing mixture of dark and cliche fiction stories.

Concept 8/10

It is a great idea, definitely new. It has the cliche rich bastards, but that gave the story a nice plot.

Cover 9/10

It is really amazing, shows the darkness of the story.

The book description 5/10

It kinda makes you feel lost, it doesn't really relate to the story. But it is interesting.

Technicalities 40/50

There are grammar mistakes, same with spelling. Dialogues can use some editing too, with the punctuation. The plotline is unpredictable which makes it even more thrilling. The characters need some development, their personality changed from one chapter to another.

Total 81/100

Total from both judges 170/200

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𝟚. Because of Haven Beach by GemmaMari10 

Judge WimpieKid 

Engagement 16/20

The story brings me to a flow- read it non-stop. Personally, I loved it. The first chapter kept me engaged enough to read further.

Concept 8/10

It's a very common Wattpad theme but it manages to keep you going on because there is a certain freshness to the storyline.

Cover 7/10

Simple cover. The beach signifies the title but I feel that some modifications could improve it more.

The book description 9/10

Very beautiful and poetic description. It's deep and philosophical. It has a charm to it and made me smile a lot.

Technicalities 44/50

The punctuation can be improved a bit. Grammar-wise, it was alright. These elements can be edited easily. The writing style is simple and easy to understand. Dialogues are engaging, not too dramatic and the characters are very realistic.

Total 84/100

Judge shadoocoffee25 

Engagement 19/20

This is such an amazing story, light and attention-grabbing. It pulled me in from chapter one.

Concept 7/10

It is cliche, but it has its own print. Unique and lively.

Cover 9/10

The cover fits the story perfectly, well designed, and eye-catching.

The book description 8/10

Little information, yet enough to help you understand what you are going to read. It is well described.

Technicalities 46/50

Well developed, nice storyline. The characters are well designed. I didn't stumble upon any mistakes. But I have one problem, she should have placed a warning at the start of a part, since the whole story isn't mature, no need for the mature tag on it. But just that scene needs a warning.

Total 89/100

Total from both judges 173/200

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𝟙. Komoreby by SuVida777 

Judge WimpieKid 

Engagement 19/20

Does the story capture attention? Have a good hook? Does it make you want to keep reading it?

One word- Marvellous. I absolutely got invested right from the description. It's a whole mix of mystery, science, and teen fic. It's a good piece of writing. I enjoyed it thoroughly. Keep me engaged right from the start.

Concept 10/10

At first glance, you might think it's the typical cliché Wattpad novel, but when you start reading you are bound to get addicted. It's so fresh and amazing!

Cover 10/10

Very artistic. It captures the essence of the story so well. I love the details. It's so beautiful and eye-catching.

The book description 10/10

The title of the book itself is so unique. Need I say more, one of the best books on Wattpad, for me at least. The description is enough to pull you right in.

Technicalities 48/50

Long paragraphs, yet no spelling mistakes. There is an aesthetic beauty to this writing style. Very few grammatical errors, they can be edited easily. The characters were all so realistic. Go through the story and you will find all those emotions that any teenager might have experienced at some point. This story has so much potential. I loved it.

Total 97/100

Judge shadoocoffee25 

Engagement 18/20

It is a great story. I didn't really like it at first. but as I continued reading, I did get hooked and I want to continue reading it.

Concept 9/10

The story is similar to 'Alice in Wonderland'. Other than that, it is a great idea.

Cover 10/10

The cover fits the story perfectly, as it is a drawing of the main character. Pretty, creative, and artsy.

The book description 10/10

Well desired, very little information, but makes you want to read the story.

Technicalities 45/50

The story is well organized, the writer planned it perfectly. I didn't find any mistakes. The characters are well built. My only point is that the chapters are longer than my life.

Total 92/100

Total from both judges 189/200

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