𝑹𝒐𝒖𝒏𝒅 𝒐𝒏𝒆|𝑺𝒉𝒐𝒓𝒕 𝑺𝒕𝒐𝒓𝒚/𝑷𝒐𝒆𝒕𝒓𝒚
Results
𝟙𝟘. Sisters Forever by PriscillaYiadom4
Judge AlphaLover15
Engagement 9/20
Concept 7/10
Cover 9/10
The book description 7/10
Technicalities 20/50
Total 52/100
Judge Luna_Butterfly_
Engagement 10/20
The stories were too short and had nothing interesting going on in any of the chapters.
Concept 7/10
This book had a lot of potential but to no avail.
Cover 9/10
The book description 7/10
Technicalities 20/50
There were lots of mistakes and barely any plot points. The newer chapters are written better, the best advice I can give you is to unpublish and rewrite it.
Total 53/100
Total from both judges 105
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𝟡. The Shocking Truth by ceoofloving
Judge AlphaLover15
Engagement 15/20
Concept 7/10
Cover 5/10
The book description 8/10
Technicalities 39/50
Total 74/100
Judge Luna_Butterfly_
Engagement 19/20
Concept 8/10
Cover 8,5/10
The cover would look better with a different font style.
The book description 9/10
Technicalities 43/50
There were some grammar errors just like in every book.
Total 87,5/100
Total from both judges 161,5
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𝟠. I Witnessed a Murder by themysteryisme975
Judge AlphaLover15
Engagement 18/20
Concept 10/10
Cover 7/10
The book description 7/10
Technicalities 40/50
Total 82/100
Judge Luna_Butterfly_
Engagement 17/20
The story was interesting and the open ending was definitely a bonus point.
Concept 8/10
Cover 5 /10
The cover wasn't very special. Trying a different style might work in your favor.
The book description 8/10
The book description was simple and to the point.
Technicalities 42/50
There weren't many grammar mistakes or anything like that. The flow of the story was okay as well.
Total 80/100
Total from both judges 162
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𝟟. Blue Devils by SardonicBeauty
Judge AlphaLover15
Engagement 15/20
Concept 9/10
Cover 8/10
The book description 3/10
Technicalities 45/50
Total 80/100
Judge Luna_Butterfly_
Engagement 19/20
Concept 8/10
Cover 10/10
The book description 6/10
Technicalities 42/50
Total 85/100
Total from both judges165
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𝟞. When the shy boy comes to school by @CharmWriting
Judge AlphaLover15
Engagement 16/20
Concept 10/10
Cover 8/10
The book description 8/10
Technicalities 47/50
Total 89/100
Judge Luna_Butterfly_
Engagement 17/20
Concept 7/10
Cover 8/10
The book description 8/10
Technicalities 39/50
Total 79/100
Total from both judges 168
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Books which going to round two!
𝟝. The World Of Poems by helloimapoet
Judge AlphaLover15
Engagement 19/20
Concept 10/10
Cover 7/10
The book description 9/10
Technicalities 45/50
Total 90/100
Judge Luna_Butterfly_
Engagement 17/20
Concept 9/10
I liked that your poems were mostly about self-acceptance and happiness.
Cover 7/10
The book description 8,5/10
Technicalities 46/50
Total 87,5/100
Total from both judges 177,5
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𝟜. Timeless by kakolilaha6
Judge AlphaLover15
Engagement 16/20
Concept 10/10
Cover 10/10
The book description 9/10
Technicalities 45/50
Total 90/100
Judge Luna_Butterfly_
Engagement 17,5/20
Concept 8/10
The idea isn't very popular but it was still great.
Cover 9/10
I loved the cover, it was beautiful and the color scheme was excellent.
The book description 9/10
Since it's a one-shot book I can't really pin down the description as a whole. But, the way you described India was nice.
Technicalities 45/50
Total 88,5/100
Total from both judges 178,5
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𝟚.(𝟛.) Turn the Paige by Evergreen_Ebony
Judge AlphaLover15
Engagement 19/20
Concept 10/10
Cover 4/10
The book description 10/10
Technicalities 50/50
Total 93/100
Judge Luna_Butterfly_
Engagement 18/20
Concept 10/10
Cover 4/10
I didn't like the cover much because it didn't feel as though it was connected to the story at all. A change in backgrounds might help.
The book description 8/10
Technicalities 46/50
Total 86/100
Total from both judges 179
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𝟚.(𝟛.) Unmuzzle by Forest45
Judge AlphaLover15
Engagement 17/20
Concept 7/10
Cover 10/10
The book description 9/10
Technicalities 44/50
Total 87/100
Judge Luna_Butterfly_
Engagement 19/20
Concept 9/10
Cover 6/10
The cover isn't very visible but the quote is fabulous.
The book description 10/10
Technicalities 48/50
Total 92/100
Total from both judges 179
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𝟙. 23Days Of September by divaakoto
Judge AlphaLover15
Engagement 18/20
Concept 10/10
Cover 10/10
The book description 9/10
Technicalities 50/50
Total 97/100
Judge Luna_Butterfly_
Engagement 17/20
Concept 8,5/10
I personally think that the concept of sharing your old poetry to help others was great.
Cover 9/10
The cover reminded me of flower pressings.
The book description 7/10
Technicalities 45/50
Total 86,5/100
Total from both judges 183,5
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