𝑹𝒐𝒖𝒏𝒅 𝒐𝒏𝒆|𝑺𝒉𝒐𝒓𝒕 𝑺𝒕𝒐𝒓𝒚/𝑷𝒐𝒆𝒕𝒓𝒚

Results

𝟙𝟘. Sisters Forever by PriscillaYiadom4 

Judge AlphaLover15 

Engagement 9/20

Concept 7/10

Cover 9/10

The book description 7/10

Technicalities 20/50

Total 52/100

Judge Luna_Butterfly_ 

Engagement 10/20

The stories were too short and had nothing interesting going on in any of the chapters.

Concept 7/10

This book had a lot of potential but to no avail.

Cover 9/10

The book description 7/10

Technicalities 20/50

There were lots of mistakes and barely any plot points. The newer chapters are written better, the best advice I can give you is to unpublish and rewrite it.

Total 53/100

Total from both judges 105

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𝟡. The Shocking Truth by ceoofloving 

Judge AlphaLover15 

Engagement 15/20

Concept 7/10

Cover 5/10

The book description 8/10

Technicalities 39/50

Total 74/100

Judge Luna_Butterfly_ 

Engagement 19/20

Concept 8/10

Cover 8,5/10

The cover would look better with a different font style.

The book description 9/10

Technicalities 43/50

There were some grammar errors just like in every book.

Total 87,5/100

Total from both judges 161,5

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𝟠. I Witnessed a Murder by themysteryisme975 

Judge AlphaLover15 

 Engagement 18/20

Concept 10/10

Cover 7/10

The book description 7/10

Technicalities 40/50

Total 82/100

Judge Luna_Butterfly_ 

Engagement 17/20

The story was interesting and the open ending was definitely a bonus point.

Concept 8/10

Cover 5 /10

The cover wasn't very special. Trying a different style might work in your favor.

The book description 8/10

The book description was simple and to the point.

Technicalities 42/50

There weren't many grammar mistakes or anything like that. The flow of the story was okay as well.

Total 80/100

Total from both judges 162

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𝟟. Blue Devils by SardonicBeauty 

Judge AlphaLover15 

 Engagement 15/20

Concept 9/10

Cover 8/10

The book description 3/10

Technicalities 45/50

Total 80/100

Judge Luna_Butterfly_ 

Engagement 19/20

Concept 8/10

Cover 10/10

The book description 6/10

Technicalities 42/50

Total 85/100

Total from both judges165

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𝟞. When the shy boy comes to school by @CharmWriting

Judge AlphaLover15 

Engagement 16/20

Concept 10/10

Cover 8/10

The book description 8/10

Technicalities 47/50

Total 89/100

Judge Luna_Butterfly_

Engagement 17/20

Concept 7/10

Cover 8/10

The book description 8/10

Technicalities 39/50

Total 79/100

Total from both judges 168

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Books which going to round two!

𝟝. The World Of Poems by helloimapoet 

Judge AlphaLover15 

Engagement 19/20

Concept 10/10

Cover 7/10

The book description 9/10

Technicalities 45/50

Total 90/100

Judge Luna_Butterfly_ 

Engagement 17/20

Concept 9/10

I liked that your poems were mostly about self-acceptance and happiness.

Cover 7/10

The book description 8,5/10

Technicalities 46/50

Total 87,5/100

Total from both judges 177,5

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𝟜. Timeless by kakolilaha6 

Judge AlphaLover15 

Engagement 16/20

Concept 10/10

Cover 10/10

The book description 9/10

Technicalities 45/50

Total 90/100

Judge Luna_Butterfly_ 

Engagement 17,5/20

Concept 8/10

The idea isn't very popular but it was still great.

Cover 9/10

I loved the cover, it was beautiful and the color scheme was excellent.

The book description 9/10

Since it's a one-shot book I can't really pin down the description as a whole. But, the way you described India was nice.

Technicalities 45/50

Total 88,5/100

Total from both judges 178,5

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𝟚.(𝟛.) Turn the Paige by Evergreen_Ebony 

Judge AlphaLover15 

Engagement 19/20

Concept 10/10

Cover 4/10

The book description 10/10

Technicalities 50/50

Total 93/100

Judge Luna_Butterfly_ 

Engagement 18/20

Concept 10/10

Cover 4/10

I didn't like the cover much because it didn't feel as though it was connected to the story at all. A change in backgrounds might help.

The book description 8/10

Technicalities 46/50

Total 86/100

Total from both judges 179

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𝟚.(𝟛.) Unmuzzle by Forest45 

Judge AlphaLover15 

Engagement 17/20

Concept 7/10

Cover 10/10

The book description 9/10

Technicalities 44/50

Total 87/100

Judge Luna_Butterfly_ 

Engagement 19/20

Concept 9/10

Cover 6/10

The cover isn't very visible but the quote is fabulous.

The book description 10/10

Technicalities 48/50

Total 92/100

Total from both judges 179

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𝟙. 23Days Of September by divaakoto 

Judge AlphaLover15 

Engagement 18/20

Concept 10/10

Cover 10/10

The book description 9/10

Technicalities 50/50

Total 97/100

Judge Luna_Butterfly_ 

Engagement 17/20

Concept 8,5/10

I personally think that the concept of sharing your old poetry to help others was great.

Cover 9/10

The cover reminded me of flower pressings.

The book description 7/10

Technicalities 45/50

Total 86,5/100

Total from both judges 183,5

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