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𝟙𝟘. Yours Forever by thatzaynlover

Judge Ilovewildhorses20

Engagement 15/20

I could not understand the first full chapter, but after that, I could slowly start to understand, although I didn't see a very good hook.

Concept 4/10

The story is very cliche, the boy meets a girl, the boy is a secret billionaire, but it was alright to read. Although I could not understand some of what was being said.

Cover 8/10

The cover was beautiful.

The book description 5/10

The description can be added to.

Technicalities 40/50

There were some off sentences, and some grammar errors, the character development also seemed a bit rushed.

Total 72/100

Judge WimpieKid 

Engagement 15/20

I thought that the book was a bit rushed, honestly. The storyline is simple and common, you can guess the story if you think about it harder. What kept me going on was the curiosity of character development..and her past.

Concept 7/10

Old concept. The billionaire and assistant are one of the most common themes on Wattpad. I loved for once that the best friend was not a cheating jealous person. The storyline can be modified a bit more to bring some differences.

Cover 9/10

The cover was very pretty.

The book description 8/10

Simple description and it puts you up on hold. You know what's going to happen, for the most part, you should include more force in the description.

Technicalities 40/50

Grammar-wise, I would say you should work on your tenses. I could notice a lot of problems with the 'was' and 'is'. The punctuation had some problems with commas. Dialogues were good. The female lead sounds feisty and that's a good thing. The writing style is decent but the story felt rushed to me. All the Best!

Total 79/100

Total from both judges 151/200

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𝟡. Trails of love by thats_bema

Judge Ilovewildhorses20 

Engagement 15/20

The book had a great hook, but after continuing to read, I found myself gro disinterested in the book.

Concept 8/10

I think that the book is cliche with the one-shots, but the topic of the one-shots is even better and doesn't seem to be cliche

Cover 10/10

The cover is very eye-catching, and unique.

The book description 3/10

The description could use some work, other than a few words. It can definitely be increased and rewritten to be improved.

Technicalities 40/50

A few grammar errors, but nothing that can't be edited.

Total 76/100

Judge WimpieKid 

Engagement 15/20

The story is simple with a decent storyline. It's a typical boy meets girl scenario. The narration is a bit different so it kept me engaged. Although a few more elements could have been included.

Concept 7/10

The concept is very cliché with the boy meets girl. The boy turns out to be a billionaire. The idea of an independent woman made it nicer though so I liked the new change.

Cover 8/10

Very simple but suits the storyline.

The book description 7/10

The book description can be improved a bit. As I said, it's a description that's very common. You should include something more different so that readers can be more attracted to the book. Like her being her own boss. A strong focus should be there on unique themes.

Technicalities 40/50

I noticed a lot of broken sentences. There were no spelling mistakes though. Punctuation was also decent enough. The character development seemed a bit rushed and not realistic. You should work on developing the relationship between the duo slowly rather than jumping on a date so soon. It will get the readers curious and anticipation will be raised too. The book has potential so just some editing is needed for it to shine :)Best of luck!

Total 77/100

Total from both judges 153/200

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𝟠. The Promotion by _xxAMxx 

Judge Ilovewildhorses20 

Engagement 15/20

The book is engaging and had me hooked, I was surprised when they kissed, but I like this aspect of it.

Concept 6/10

I think that the concept is pretty cliche, boy and boy/girl kiss, and start dating. one is super-rich, pretty common on Wattpad.

Cover 5/10

The cover wasn't all that appealing to me. It could be better

The book description 3/10

The description could have more added to it. Other than its a joke yall, it should have more to it that will help catch the reader's attention

Technicalities 40/50

Very few grammar errors, although the plotline seemed a bit rushed.

Total 69/100

Judge WimpieKid 

Engagement 18/20

The book is interesting with a realistic storyline. There are certain incidents here that will make you feel like you have gone through something similar at one point or another. So, good read.

Concept 9/10

For once, I liked the idea of an independent woman focused on her career. The boyfriend was a parasite and the boss was not the typical arrogant lead we find in most billionaire books. So old concept with a revamp.

Cover 8/10

Sadly, I have seen this cover many times. I mean it does capture the storyline but it's very common.

The book description 9/10

I would say the description was nice. You can get a clear idea of what you are getting into. There's no extra information that will make you choose another read. It was on point and I liked it a lot.

Technicalities 43/50

I noticed a few mistakes with the punctuation and some broken sentences. The grammar and spellings were on point so a little editing is needed. Not to be very concerned. The character development is gradual and you actually feel it's not rushed and very dramatic. I like the propagandist and the idea of a toxic relationship is clearly explored. The writing style was good with a touch of Reality to it.

Total 87/100

Total from both judges 156/200

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𝟟. The SelfCentered Billionaire by jazeena1 

Judge Ilovewildhorses20 

Engagement 18/20

The book has a great hook, I cant wait to see where it will lead to next.

Concept 8/10

This book seems to be a little cliche but different at the same time. Keep up the good work

Cover 8/10

The cover is very beautiful and eyecatching.

The book description 10/10

I love the description, simple, short but hooks the reader right in. good job

Technicalities 45/50

Great character development, there were a few grammatical errors, but other than that and a few misplaced punctuation, it was good.

Total 89/100

Judge WimpieKid 

Engagement 14/20

The story is pretty taboo so definitely, it's a bit different. I mean, I kept reading to see where you were getting into.

Concept 7/10

The concept is for mature readers and I am very thankful that you gave it a mature rating. A different concept for Wattpad.

Cover 7/10

Very simple and common. I have seen it quite a few times in many books. You should consider getting something different.

The book description 7/10

Short blurb. You know what you are getting into when you read the blurb, so that is ok with me. The rating is mentioned, so that's also a good point.

Technicalities 37/50

Now we are coming to the serious part, this book needs serious editing. The punctuation is all over the place. The grammar needs more focus too. Also, I get that the storyline is a bit matured and different, things can be written in a more mysterious and classy manner. I mean, you should be careful with your wordings sometimes. The main lead is still calling him Dad! Try to get her to just call him by his name. That would make it seem that she seems to notice him in a different manner rather than a father figure. That definitely threw me off.

All you need to do is, go through the editing once again. Concentrate on your words, punctuation, and the language a bit more. It can be a very erotic and a new adult book, just needs good editing. All the Best!

Total 72/100

Total from both judges 161/200

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𝟞. My Brother Is My Mate by djgraves01 

Judge Ilovewildhorses20 

Engagement 20/20

Already I am hooked, this is an amazingly written book and I love it.

Concept 10/10

This book is not cliche in the least. it is a very wonderful book

Cover 10/10

The cover is very beautiful and simple. keep up the good work.

The book description 10/10

The description was awesome, it definitely has me hooked.

Technicalities 45/50

Very few grammatical errors, and a great plotline already. Keep up the great work Good luck.

Total 95/100

Judge WimpieKid 

Engagement 15/20

I think the book has a pretty different storyline. The title is like clickbait because of obvious reasons. I think you should work a bit more on the story though.

Concept 7/10

Definitely a new concept. But, if you look more into it it's the same. I felt the story was not very thought over though.

Cover 7/10

Simple cover but can be improved.

The book description 8/10

Catchy book description. It will make you wonder what is actually happening. As I said, clickbait. I think that one is obvious but yeah you will give it a go to find out more. It will make you curious.

Technicalities 39/50

You should work more on the story. The character development is too fast and the story is rushed. There was no focus on history and the past. Some plots were repetitive. As I said, it's a different storyline and it has the potential to be a good book, you just have to execute it in a better manner. Characters kept popping up out of nowhere. Sudden burst-outs and whatnot. The vocabulary was decent, you can work more on your writing style. All the Best!

Total 76/100

Total from both judges 171/200

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Books which going to round two!

𝟝. The Burden of Us by MiniMoxx 

Judge Ilovewildhorses20

Engagement 12/20

I think this book captures the reader's attention really well. But to me, it had a little bit of a dry start. I like the fact that even though she graduated, she can't go and get a job because of an agreement her parents made before she was born. I think that was something good to add. her parents seem like snobs and stuck-up rich people, I really like this aspect. She is dating someone that she actually wants to date. a secret relationship. I like it.

Concept 9/10

I think this book has some cliche, with arranged marriages and all. but it's a great book so far.

Cover 10/10

The cover for this book is simple, sweet, and eye-catching, it suits the story well.

The book description 8/10

The description is a little on the dry side, it could have more to it. but I think it would attract readers all and all with the curiosity of who the secret lover is, and what the family secrets are.

Technicalities 45/50

I think this has really good character development right off the bat. There were very little to no grammar mistakes.

Total 84/100

Judge WimpieKid 

Engagement 16/20

Absolutely interesting. As a lover of romance, I would recommend this one to anyone looking for a quick taste of romance with a pinch of reality to it. I mean definitely, the plot is a bit common as per Wattpad, but it captures your attention in its own way. A good read.

Concept 9/10

Somewhat cliché but manages to pull it through well. I loved that even if the plot resembles a lot of other stories, it has differences that make it stand out from the typical plot.

Cover 9/10

Gorgeous cover. Simple yet attractive to the eye.

The book description 8/10

Described well enough, but makes it look a bit typical with the same concept of arranged marriages. The story is very different from that..so a bit of improvisation could be made. But all in all, it will attract readers anyway because of a certain mysterious element.

Technicalities 47/50

Good character development. A different point of view from two different timelines makes it easy to make out the growth of a character. The writing style is good with a flow that's simple yet powerful. I could barely find spelling mistakes. The punctuation was alright, just a slight miss of commas here and there. I loved the way the author describes the different scenes, making it easy to imagine the setting. A good book with a lot of potentials.

Total 89/100

Total from both judges 173/200 

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𝟜. On the Edge of Tomorrow  by 0liviaRose436 

Judge Ilovewildhorses20 

Engagement 20/20

this book has a very good hook, that will definitely leave the reader wanting more

Concept 8/10

I don't think that this book is cliche, it is very unique in its own way.

Cover 5/10

The cover could have a little more added to it, but it is simple enough to draw readers in.

The book description 7/10

The book's description is a little on the longer side, which may scare some readers away. But I think it is very good and detailed, without giving much away.

Technicalities 47/50

There are very little to none spelling errors, already there is great character development.

Total 87/100

Judge WimpieKid 

Engagement 19/20

I love music. This book was everything I envisioned and more from Wattpad. It has a different vibe to it that kept me going. One can just get lost in the melody of words through this book. Absolutely beautiful.

Concept 9/10

The storyline was fresh and musical! I have read quite a few stories about pop stars and rock bands but this one pulled off the plug from the typical and gave a different meaning to romance through writing.

Cover 9/10

Loved the cover. Just the type that will go with the aura of the book..plus the colors made sense :)

The book description 9/10

Perfect description. Fit right with reality according to the storyline.

Technicalities 44/50

Now, I noticed some broken sentences and incorrect punctuation in some places. The grammar was good. Few spelling mistakes were there too. Although the storyline was wonderful so it did overshadow them a bit, you should edit that part and there you have it, a good book with a beautiful idea. The characters were building up slowly although a little more focus could have been there on the setting because I couldn't help but notice that some details were vague. The writing style was to die for though. The use of words and the art of prose have been handled beautifully.

Total 90/100

Total from both judges 177/200

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𝟛. But you sent me away by mellimack 

Judge Ilovewildhorses20

Engagement 20/20

Already in the first paragraph, I am hooked. This is an amazingly written book. Keep up the great work.

Concept 9/10

I love the concept of this story. it is very well written. and does not seem to be cliche, of course, what do I know?

Cover 8/10

I think that the cover is really good. The only thing you can change is getting rid of the music notes, as they don't really go with the theme of the cover.

The book description 10/10

The description of the story is really good. sweet and simple. It leaves a bit of mystery for the reader.

Technicalities 40/50

Very good grammar, and spelling. Character development could use a little work, as could the descriptions of what is occurring.

Total 87/100

Judge WimpieKid 

Engagement 18/20

Absolutely engaging. Such matured writing. This was way ahead of cheesy cute romances we read for a happy feeling or during a nice summer night, that's for sure.

Concept 9/10

The old concept with a new touch. Teenage pregnancies, one of the very common themes on Wattpad. Meeting after a few years of separation, once again a common one. But. The time gap between these incidents and the character development gave it a golden brush-up.

Cover 7/10

I like the cover. It's simple and pretty but lacks the power this story holds. Can be improved.

The book description 9/10

A good description with the mixture of everything you want- Romance, mystery, and Action. The perfect package for a good time.

Technicalities 48/50

Once again, this author has amazed me. The writing style is too good and absolutely zero spelling mistakes or grammatical errors. A few punctuation missouts were there but they can be edited easily. The paragraphs were too long, hence longer chapters. Young readers might find it a difficult read due to the chapter length but the plot keeps things interesting. Honestly, I loved the details and the character development was up to the mark.

Total 91/100

Total from both judges 178/200

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𝟚. Keep Bleeding Love by EastCoastPinay 

Judge Ilovewildhorses20 

Engagement 18/20

This book has a very good hook. I definitely want to read more.

Concept 10/10

I don't think that this book is cliche, it is very unique and different.

Cover 9/10

I think the cover is very simple, yet eye-catching. it will definitely draw the readers in

The book description 8/10

I think the description would encourage a potential reader to open up the book.

Technicalities 48/50

There were great character development, very few grammar mistakes, and everything looked neat and tidy in general.

Total 93/100

Judge WimpieKid 

Engagement 17/20

This story kept me hooked straight from chapter one. I was waiting to see how the protagonist will face her loss. The plot was good and I can see that future development is in a good phase.

Concept 8/10

The concept is not very new to Wattpad but it has some differences from the typical teenage pregnancy stories I have come across. The idea of loss is explored through angst and that develops this storyline.

Cover 8/10

Nice cover. I personally liked it though it could be improved a bit.

The book description 8/10

The use of capital letters sure gave it a dramatic touch. Makes you wonder if it's just for the stress on the plot or for the benefit of the reader's engagement. We do love a bit of the drama in life, I can ignore that but it would be nice if that was not included much.

Technicalities 45/50

Some grammatical errors- Tenses. Use of was, is..that can be edited. A few punctuation mistakes are. The vocabulary is spot on! Characters seem nice and likable. Also, the writing style is good. You should add more about the surroundings though, it's a little difficult to imagine the scenario. I mean, of course, I can make it all out through assumption but focus on the details is necessary. Anyway, overall a good read.

Total 86/100

Total from both judges 179/200

𝟙. Romance of the Portals by kakolilaha6 

Judge Ilovewildhorses20

Engagement 15/20

The book has a great hook. I will definitely keep reading this book.

Concept 10/10

This book is very unique, keep up the great work.

Cover 10/10

The cover is wonderful, very beautifully created.

The book description 10/10

The book has a wonderful description. It is very well written.

Technicalities 45/50

Great writing style, I love it. character development seemed a bit slow to me, but that is better than being rushed. very few grammatical errors.

Total 90/100

Judge WimpieKid

Engagement 19/20

What can I say? I just could not stop reading. This book is just so gorgeous and I have no words. It's a journey..such beautiful work. I would absolutely suggest this one to my friends.

Concept 10/10

The vibrant mix of fantasy, romance, adventure, and romance. The mix just comes out with an excellent result. It's so fresh and you can find yourself absolutely mesmerized. Beautiful!

Cover 7/10

Now for this book, a more powerful cover is needed. It's too simple for a book that conveys such power. I have seen all the graphics that you have used in this book and they speak for the story. A cover that speaks for the book is a big game-changer so a new cover would certainly be an add-on.

The book description 9/10

Very eye-catching. I didn't even think about getting right into it. It's so nicely drafted and you can just feel the emotions and the power the story brings.

Technicalities 48/50

Your writing style is just awesome. The vivid description of the surroundings makes me feel like I'm watching a beautiful movie, it's such a detailed and nicely written work. The Indian fantasy realm has so much to convey and you have managed to bring them out in your own way, that's so magical. The characters seem so historically strong and the mix of vintage and modern give the storyline even a more balanced equation. Loved it. All the Best!

Total 93/100

Total from both judges 183/200

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