This is just something i wrote for school and i'd like to know you're opinions on it. I'm not here to fix anything so there's no need for constructive criticism. Just a "I like it" "It was wonderful" or "This is the worst thing I've ever heard" will do fine.…
It was a simple rule. Do not cross the southern borders. That's where the bandits from across the desert stayed. So why did Alvan feel the need to go there? It was insanity and he knew it. But...something...called him. It was a strange feeling. A feeling of comfort and calmness, a feeling of home. So why did it come from the country in the south?…