Dream a Better Dream Critiques

Dream a Better Dream Critiques

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Hey you! Yes You! The one with the confused look on your face, pencil hanging out of your mouth, and fingers resting on your keyboard.You seem to be in need of a good critique to help you out of your writing troubles.Well look no further, here at Dream a Better Dream Critiques I'm here to help you with just that. I'll read through your chapters and give my honest opinion on what can be improved and how you can do it. You'll have all those amazing reads and comments your looking for in no time. Just click that read more button. I don't bite...much.…

Prince of Thieves (On temporary hold for major editing)

Prince of Thieves (On temporary hold for major editing)

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After being taken in by the King of Thieves himself, and brought to the kingdom of Nem, Estelle has been initiated into their infamous ranks. Life seems like a dream come true for the girl from a small mountain village. Except for one, little, thing...The Prince of Thieves.He is the bane of her existence, the thorn in her aside, the little lost puppy that just won't go away.She is the illusive treasure, the egg that he just can't crack, the stubborn little She-wolf.When events take a sudden turn for the worst with the Princess of Telenoir's coronation, things begin to get quite difficult for the Prince of Thieves and his reluctant partner in crime. Not only that but a new threat has arrived, the mysterious people in black, the ones who she can't seem to escape from. In reality, or her dreams.With this new turn of events, the two will have to put aside their differences and work together. They may even realize how much they need each other.Highest ranking so far: #294 in fantasy Amazing cover done by @Element_Time…

Burned Shadows

Burned Shadows

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Devils hang on the shoulders of Meridian men and women. Voices echo in their heads, words of hunger, words of deceit. Words they dare not repeat. They choose to listen to the angel hanging on their other shoulder, the one convincing them that the devil is wrong, that it doesn't exist.Aveeva Jones stopped listening to her angel a long time ago. It didn't agree with the whole "killing people for money" part of her job description. It also didn't come up with a better way to put food on the table. Doesn't matter if it's for revenge or if he just happened to look at you the wrong way. If the price is right, the guy dies.Yet her angel never stops whispering, even as she lingers in the shadows.Awesome cover made by @Element_Time…

Thief Tails: The Misadventures of Estelle and Finnigan

Thief Tails: The Misadventures of Estelle and Finnigan

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Unicorns?Ogers?Gremlin traps?You name it.Our two favorite characters are at it again. Estelle and Finnigan from Prince of Thieves. Take a look and follow the lovable duo through many tales and stories of their daily lives and mishaps.…

Heart of a Fae (short story)

Heart of a Fae (short story)

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An unsuspecting, young, aspiring archaeologist by the name of Astrid always has her nose in some kind of book. Always dreaming of what kind of myths and mysteries she can find out there in this big world of ours. But one day, on a dig in Greece, one of those stories becomes a reality. What will happen to our budding archaeologist? Will she find love?Adventure?Untold riches?Who knows? Anything can happen in land of myths and legends!…

Angel of Time (On Hold)

Angel of Time (On Hold)

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Elves, dragons, mermaids, even angels. Myths and legends. Things that don't exist in real life, but do in imagination and dreams. But what if, someone told you, that those supposed myths, weren't myths at all, they were just hidden in another world. And something even crazier, what if someone told you actually belong to that world and your family does too? You've just been sheltered from it to protect you.You'd think it was all a lie right? Well, that lie, is actually Aurora McCallister's reality.Not so unbelievable after all eh?…