Name of the book: Aragons

Name of author: earlfangs

Reviewers: WRIAMPOO

Number of chapter reviewed:

Plot known till now: 13

This story is of a fantasy genre, revolving around imaginative creatures like outcasts who possess the souls of humans whenever they feel negative emotions and Elysian who are there to protect people by fighting against outcasts. Then there are Aragons which are related to an organization like in this story the girl named Raia is an Elysian who has now become an aragon by joining the mickaelean organisation. The girl has been portrayed as a mysterious person to whom everyone is trying to understand specially Raiden, the male lead who's also an Aragon. In the current plot both of them have been assigned a mission to protect people from getting their souls tainted, during which they encounter a mysterious man Loki.

Positive aspects:

To be honest I really liked the book personally. The plot is original, you have shown creativity for which I'll give you 10/10. The way the story progress, it makes the reader hook to it, to read every chapter. The start of the story was really good, the way Raia was standing on the top and observing everyone, with apple in one hand and the way you described her body language at that moment, completely justifying the enigmatic look you tried to give her.

The character of Raia somewhat intrigued me to read further as normally in every other book, female character is usually portrayed as a simple, down to earth girl being clueless about everything but in this you totally gave her different characteristics. Her bold look, giving dangerous vibes, a proper picture of a badass warrior. On the other hand the character of Raiden, totally opposite of Raia. I think in the subsequent chapters they both would have a love scene or something because the way you have shown both of them it gives a idea of it. The character of Raiden, a soft heart and the urge to help everyone totally suits to him. I like the scenes of Raia and Raiden, whenever both of them are together, the chemistry between them is a delight to read. Also, the way plot opens up layer by layer is very interesting, you kept every detail in light. The past of Raia, poking her mentally in between scenes is a good way to increase the curiosity of the readers.

Introducing totally new characters and terms like outcasts, aragons, elysians and many more were a plus point too which smoothened world development and brought the readers conceptions to an entirely new fantasy world.

Negative aspects :

Some of the points which I would like to point are the description, the story lacks detailed description of surroundings, since you're showing action through words you shall try adding more descriptive words regarding the surroundings which would enable the reader to imagine as he'll read further.

Also regarding the terms like outcasts, elysians, you shall try give a glossary about them before the chapters so that it becomes easier for the reader to understand rather than reading the whole chapter again to figure out it's meaning. I know you have given a one line meaning of these terms in your blurb, but I'm sorry to say blurb is not a place where you can explain such things, a blurb should give readers and insight about the story, so that it pushes him to get a glance of further story.

Another thing I would point out is the cover of the story. It's not at all fit for the story. The text is not visible nor the picture what's it telling about? Like one has to look closely into the screen to make it out it's a sword with purple flames around it and single single letter of Aragon dancing around them. You need to put a lot of hard work into graphics because a book is not only about writing but also how it is represented, you need to keep an eye on every aspect of your book. And also you put up the trailer of the book, it's nice but in place of quotes you can try to put some more images, I know it's difficult to find the scenes but you can try.

Overall anaylsis :

So in total I liked the book as I stated earlier in positive aspects. It's a good read to be honest. If you try to work upon the problems that i mentioned, I'm pretty sure your book will be a success in the coming future and don't take any points to heart as it was our job to give you a honest review. Personally I liked the plot and everything. If in the future you deal with these problems it can be worthy enough to be put up in other platforms. Also, the pace of the book is good neither slow nor bad. Thus, I can recommend anyone to read this book if one's interested in this genre.