🧁SWEET TREATS: BEST BLURB🧁

Thank you so much to both our wonderful judges lustxnight and _thasli_ for judging the categories and most importantly sending the results on time ! ♥️

                  🍬1st place🍬

      -ArtisticTouch- and Ch31L92

                 🍬2nd Place🍬

                  Naomi100112

                  🍬3rd place🍬

      Sanjanasen67 and mwriter12 

Please pm me to get your stickers in the format given in the " IMPORTANT CHAPTER" and all other prizes will be  will be given out soon soon!♥️

PARTICIPANTS SCORES:

1. The Difference Mixtures - Shaunatay

Does the blurb matches the story? - 5/5

Is it attractive enough to grab your attention? - 4 /5

How well is it crafted? - 3.9/5

Creativity - 3 /5

Originality - 4 /5

Overall impression - 3.9 /5

Total - 23.8/30 

Review - I liked the concept of it.

2. The Painful Truth - mwriter12

Does the blurb matches the story? - 4.5/5

Is it attractive enough to grab your attention? - 4.5/5

How well is it crafted? - 4/5

Creativity - 4/5

Originality - 3.5 /5

Overall impression - 4/5

Total - 24.5/30 

Review - Loved the quote at the start, it really gives a good impression to the blurb.

3.Forbidden, Found and Forever - Naomi100112

Does the blurb matches the story? - 5/5

Is it attractive enough to grab your attention? - 4.5/5

How well is it crafted? - 4.5/5

Creativity - 4.5 /5

Originality - 4.1 /5

Overall impression - 4.5 /5

Total - 27.1/30 

Review - Loved it so much, you grabbed the reader's attention by your words.

4.Dharmasangini - Sanjanasen67

Does the blurb matches the story? - 4/5

Is it attractive enough to grab your attention? - 4 /5

How well is it crafted? - 4/5

Creativity - 4.5 /5

Originality - 4 /5

Overall impression - 4 /5

Total - 24.5/30 

Review - I liked the way it was crafted.

5. Love in Paris - _yesha_jain_

Does the blurb matches the story? - 4 /5

Is it attractive enough to grab your attention? - 3/5

How well is it crafted? - 3.3/5

Creativity - 3.5/5

Originality - 4 /5

Overall impression - 3.9/5

Total - 21.9 /30 

Review - The originality is good.

6.Tamed for love by sahimakhatoon

Matches the story- 2/5

Attractive enough- 3/5

Creativity- 3/5

Originality- 3/5

Overall impression- 3/5

Total: 14/30

The blurb didn't kindle an interest in me to jump into your book to read. It was short, like really short, considering the fact it is a novel and not a short story. I felt the highlighting of 'French' was unnecessary. Blurb needs a must change.

7.Roxy by clara_ibi

Matches the story- 4/5

Attractive enough- 3.5/5

Creativity- 4/5

Originality- 3.5/5

Overall impression- 4/5

Total: 19/30

The blurb is good but short. You can give more information about what the readers are gonna read with keeping the twists and turns hidden. There's a minor grammatical error.

8.Reflections of Ana Ch31L92

Matches the story- 5/5

Attractive enough- 5/5

Creativity- 5/5

Originality- 4.5/5

Overall impression- 5/5

Total: 29.5/30

This blurb is great! The descriptions, use of words, everything. And the way it pulls the readers to tap on the read button is astounding. I found a minor grammatical error. 

9.Adeline by -ArtisticTouch-

Matches the story- 5/5

Attractive enough- 5/5

Creativity- 4.5/5

Originality- 5/5

Overall impression- 5/5

Total: 29.5/30

Impressive! The blurb says this story is unique and something that would keep the readers on edge. But there is still a room for improvement and development. 

10.Savior of Never Ending Happiness by dwarkaratna

Matches the story- 2/5

Attractive enough- 1.5/5

Creativity- 2/5

Originality- 2/5

Overall impression- 2.5/5

Total: 10/30

First of all, you have butchered your words. It's a blurb so the grammar has a crucial role in making the first and best impression of your book. It is small and doesn't necessarily tells what it holds inside but just tells the reader to read it, which is a flag down.

Don't lose your heart if you didn't win. May be it was not your lucky day :) and try to improve the points you lacked :)
All the very best for your future endeavours ❤

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