Title: Shadows (dean winchester)

Author: winchestxr

Summary: 

→ she had the power to change the world, but she couldn't save the one she loved !

Rating: 3.5/5

Opinion: 

This story is set in seasons one and two, and follow the episodes. Granted, there are only 2 chapters and a prologue, but still. Fresh stories always need support! :) The character, Rosalie Harvelle, is Jo's sister who left the hunting life. She seems to have conflictions, but we never really get into depth in that because there are only two chapters. I'm interested to see how Rose things. How she feels about her past, and what she's going to do differently to keep worse things from happening.

I loved the fact that you threw the Harvelle's in here. Hardly anyone writes about Jo and Ellen, when they were two of the most badass females we had in the show. I cried when a certain thing happened in season five. There was a small discrepancy, though, in the characterization. Jo and Ellen were never hunters until late into the show. They only knew about Supernatural because of Jo's father, who was a hunter. Ellen never wanted Jo to become a hunter. But! I am always open to changes within story line. Little changes like that tweak the story in a way that could change events in the future. I want to know what that's going to be like once it catches up to the Ellen and Jo episodes!

Okay. Now for the other side of things. I love the way this is set up. Follows the episodes. Easy to follow. I wish it had more description, though. It seems like I'm reading a script. If I hadn't seen the show before, I wouldn't know who was talking because there are no directions here. Without the directions, and even description, it's hard to relate to any of the characters. We don't see how they're feeling. We can't see anything in particular that would help the readers visualize what is happening. That's something that will keep the readers engaged.

There is potential here! I loved the direction it was going with the character. Please, author, keep writing! Keep improving. Keep loving what you're writing. I can see the passion. I want to read more. :) Check it out guys! Support our lovely community of authors.