Title: Heroic - Dean Winchester

Author: castielsangels-

Summary:

In which the daughter of God is asked to watch and help the Winchesters.

"You really thought Jesus was the only one"

"Well yeah."

Jessie Duncan wasn't your average girl. She was the kind of girl who could take down anyone in her way. She was stubborn and didn't give up easily. So when her father, God, tells her to watch the Winchesters, she is in for a big surprise.

Rating: 3

Review: Fanfic hasn't been updated in a while, just a heads up about that.

Firstly, the cover is great, colors and blends go nicely together. Kudos to the designer about that. However, what can be improved, is to make the background clearer and easier to see. Also, username/pen name seems to be missing. That's all I got to say about that.

Now onto the story, we are waiting for. The credits are nicely done but one tag is not working, that should be checked. Even though having an extended summary in author's note, I am not a huge fan even if it's to be aesthetically pleasing. It should be right beside the cover.

The story in itself is intriguing to read Jessie (the main character) is God's daughter helping the Winchesters. Dialogue is realistic, though some errors in commas and so on are made that can be fixed with a quick edit. There should be more descriptions as well, painting a picture for the reader even when they know how they look is important to do. It can help bring the story and characters out more.

Jessie calls Bobby and walks into the house where the Winchesters are hanging out (to their surprise) which is a smooth start. She seems to know a lot including what happens to Castiel (you got to read to find that out).

A mini nitpick: I highly advise against putting tag challenges in the middle of chapters and 'update'-chapter as they are turn off to some readers. Other than that, well done!

~Jo