Title:  Heat Of The Summer (wincest fanfic supernatural)

Author: Uranusismyfav

Summary:

Its a blistering, hot summer in Arizona and Dean is strugglingto keep ahold of old feelings.Will the brothers make it threw the summer?

Rating: 3.0

Opinion:

The summary caught my interest (even though, I really dislike and fear wendigos). And first wincest fanfic I get to review. Woohoo.

It starts on a case they discuss, they are kept mostly in character as far I have read. The story takes many interesting turns and references subtly the title to the story which I always find funny when authors do.

However, there were mistakes in the summary with typos that also carries on to the book. And also incorrect spacing within the characters speaking and spacing mistakes in sentences. It makes it hard as a reader to know when a character is speaking or doing an action.  The weakness lies mostly in the grammar which can be fixed easily with some editing.

The strongest points are the characters that really shines through the page. So for you that like some bickering, this is right up your alley. Also, the case is quite intriguing as it takes place where wendigos normally aren't; you will have to read to find out. The relationship takes the time to form and doesn't feel rushed which is a good thing.

All in all, this story can be very good with some fixing.

~Jo