Comes Knocking ~ Bela's Review
Author: @Pearsforgranite
Title: Comes Knocking
Summary:
When the supernatural begins wreaking havoc in New York, the Avengers find themselves at a loss of what exactly they're up against. Saved by 2 brothers with guns and a knife, the Avengers open their home and team to the Winchesters.
Sam and Dean, used to working alone and under the radar, find publicly teaming with the Avengers a completely new experience.
Accompanied by a myriad of characters, 'Saving People, Hunting Things' is no longer just a family business.
Rating: 4.5/5
Opinion: This is actually the first cross over I've ever read, so I find this a very interesting door to open. A whole new universe where worlds collide and we get to see all the conflicts and chaos!
First off in the downside of things, I think jumping back and forth is a little disorienting. The first jump in the chapter was fine, but towards the end after the demon was revealed, it seemed a bit odd. You have the big fight and then jump to a little bit earlier (in the second chapter). Something I recommend is cutting the first chapter at the big fight without stating that the brothers were there, or they apprehended the demon. Leave it on a cliffhanger of the Avengers fighting him. Then start the second chapter with the brothers at the pizza place leading back up to the fight. And with as many weapons and hits the demon took from the Avengers, none of them damaged him. So maybe elaborate on why it didn't, yet when the Winchesters shot him, it did. Other than that, I didn't see anything else to comment on.
Weirder in a good way! I really do like the way it is written. There's just enough description to set the scene. The wording always seems pretty cool in the way it flows together. I feel like this story is exactly what it would be like if the Avengers met the Winchesters. The confusion, the badassery, the fanboying, all of it. It has comedy, seriousness, and more.
This book is still ongoing, but I highly recommend that the author keeps writing this. If you are inspired and love the story, go for it! Readers will see your passion and appreciate it. There's a lot of awesome potential to come out of this book, especially with Lucifer in play in season 12, so it'd be pretty awesome to see both groups try to stop the apocalypse.
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