Title:  Beginning of the End(supernaturalxTeenwolf)

Author: @xXDoIReallyCareXx

Summary:

A supernatural and Teen wolf fan fic

Rating: 2

Opinion: Fanfic is completed and a crossover between Supernatural and Teen Wolf.

Firstly the cover is pretty well done. However, the author name could be put in a simpler font so it's easier to read for the reader. Also, some colors can help draw the attention to the cover more. There is missing the spark that makes some people want to read it but it got the clear potential to be better. I suggest requesting in the MDC threads to get a better cover.

I highly advise writing a summary because the current one, I wouldn't consider one. What's the story about other than being a crossover? and who is the main character that it's put in the disclaimer?. At least some basic information what's about to get readers interested.

Now over to the fun part, starting with a dream is good to do sometimes but it, in this case, it drags away the attention from the main character (Clara). Much of the information is rushed through which rather fit better when done in multiple chapters, I noticed this early on. And telling us, the readers, who she is, and her backstory doesn't give us any relation to her. 

Kudos on making her a monster though (you will have to read to find out which one). There were some typos and others stuff that could've been fixed when editing. It got potential but it's lots of work to get there. Good luck.

~ Jo