Begin Again ⊳ Gabriel ~ Jo's Review

Title: Begin Again ⊳ Gabriel

Author: sincerelygabriel

Summary:

❝You wouldn't believe me if I told you.❞
❝Try me, sugar.❞

Gabriel is an archangel looking for a way to escape his broken family.
Julia is a hunter running from her legacy.

They both want to begin again, but the past isn't done with them yet.

Rating: 3

Review: Haven't been updated in a few months.

The title and fonts work quite well together. And with striking and smooth colors it makes a good contrast. However some small nitpicks, the author name is difficult to read and should be bigger. Also, I fail to see the relevance in the picture on the cover for the story (even though the actress is the main character, I don't see the connection between that and the summary).

Now onto what we all have been waiting for, the story. I would personally prefer the whole summary in the actual summary of the book instead of having an extended one in a chapter. It's a nice touch with the gifs of showing the actors. And the epigraph is a beautiful add-on as well. The gifs and quotes are how well it can be used when done correctly.

The chapters are quite short and lots of telling, I suggest to vary so it doesn't turn readers off. It's a well-done catch sentence to make people want to read further but it's mainly missing the spark and intrigue to make one want to read further. 

It's mainly about Gabriel and Julie Roberts (her faceclaim is well chosen) escaping their pasts and their past. Both of them seems to be connected by similar feelings though, the other is an archangel.  One of them escapes from a high ranking place, I can't say which, you will have to read to find out.

Good luck with further writing!

~Jo

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