A Time For Us~Jo's Review
Title: A Time For Us {Destiel AU}
Author: @Fanwarrior480
Summary:
ɪɴ ᴡʜɪᴄʜ ᴄᴀsᴛɪᴇʟ ᴀᴄᴛs ɪɴ ᴀ ʀᴏᴍᴀɴᴛɪᴄ ᴘʟᴀʏ... ᴀɴᴅ ғᴀʟʟs ɪɴ ʟᴏᴠᴇ ᴡɪᴛʜ ᴀ ғᴇʟʟᴏᴡ ᴀᴄᴛᴏʀ.
{includes lines from Romeo and Juliet by William Shakespeare}{a winner of the #curtaincall contest ye}
Rating: 3.7
Opinion:
The plot itself seems simple enough. However, even when the fanfic is fairly short the characters missed depth. I get because of the short-frame is supposed to be in, although, in every good short story (this includes the short as well, hunters!) is necessary to have enough detail to characters. More description could also make it easier for the reader to see what's going and how they are feeling. It's described some places but not enough to give me always a clear picture of what's happening.
Dean is a little OOC in this fanfic even when is AU, is important to have the core of the character there for the readers to recognize, I read glimpses where he lost character. There is possible to write a character OOC but for that, it has to be a good reason for it.
It's quite an intriguing where Dean and Cas are going to act out a Shakespear play, the story holds promise for better. They met during an audition and develop a closer relationship because they get both roles in the play. Dean gets Romeo, of course, but Cas's role is surprising. If you are looking for a quick sweet read, this is where you should go.
~Jo
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