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1| The ups and downs of poetry and her poet by FernGoldenOfGale

Cover/Title: 6/10
•The cover of this book was not that bad but it wasn't very eye-catching either. The colours blend in very well and it immediately gives the book a "deep" vibe, something which I think is amazing. The title fits the book perfectly and just brings everything together.

Flow of words: 10/15
•Very smooth flow of words. It felt so natural to just read each stanza. Each line completely touched your soul, once you look deep enough and try to understand it.

Grammer/Vocab:10/15
•There weren't many spelling errors. Just one that immediately caught my eye was "Waning" instead of "warning". Your vocab was what scored you high marks. I loved how you didn't settle for average everyday words.

Writing style: 8/15
•I do feel like you could improve. While it is very unique, there were certain aspects that I, as a reader did not like. Your format for example was one of them.

Poetic devices: 5/15
•Not much use of poetic devices in this poem.

Emotions: 6/10
•I really appreciate the sentiment in this poem. It felt like you reached in and held my heart from the beginning till the end of your poem. Loved it!

Originality:5/10

Enjoyment: 6/10

Total: 56/100

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2| It's time to say goodbye by wild_imaginator16

Cover/Title: 8/10
•Stunning cover! I love how simple it is, yet catches your eye immediately. Your cover and title go hand in hand. "THOSE UNSAID WORDS" immediately reaches out to the reader because God knows there is so much we all have left unsaid. The title itself evokes interest as it's something most people can relate to.

Flow of words: 10/15
•This poem was beautiful from start till finish. The words were perfect and natural. Simple yet heartfelt.

Grammar/vocab:15 /15
•Perfect Grammar, punctuation and vocab. Your vocabulary was not over the top or hard to comprehend. It was simply, soul-touching and honestly just amazing.

Writing style: 10/15
•I love your writing style. It's so real, so raw. Things we feel every day, things we feel in the moment, you've managed to capture that and write it down.

Poetic devices:10/15

Emotions:10/10
•You reached out and touched many hearts with this poem. You've painted a picture of how hard it is to cope with the loss of someone. Something that everyone can relate to. It's hard to voice our pain, yet you have done it in such a brilliant way. Well done!

Originality:8/10

Enjoyment:10/10
•I absolutely adored this poem. Keep up the good work!

Total: 81/100

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3|Crescent Moon by PriscillaYiadom4

Cover/title:10/10
•Absoultely gorgeous cover! I love how simple yet elegant it is. The colours all blend in perfectly and fits the title. I love how there are two people just simply having coffee, enjoying themselves and then there's the background symbolising life outside their little bubble.

Flow of words:3/15
•I feel like you could work on your word flow. It's a good conversation between the moon and the little girl but you could make it a little deeper. The flow of words felt forced like you didn't know what to say so you were grasping at straws.

Grammar/vocab:7/15
•It would be easier to read and understand if you use inverted commas when the moon and little girl are speaking to each other.

Writing style:5/15
•I have read the other poems in this book and I do feel like you have the ability to better this specific poem. Your writing style is unique and beautiful in its own way, you just need to learn how to harness it properly.

Poetic devices:0/15

Emotions:2/10
•It did evoke some emotions from the reader, but not enough. As I said, it's a beautiful poem, it reaches everyone because we all sit and lay out burdens to the moon. But that's the only thing here, relativity. And it isn't even that much.

Originality:8/10

Enjoyment:2/10
•I didn't particularly enjoy this poem. You have the capability to do so much better! Use that to your advantage.

Total:37/100

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4)ii (Soporific) by __morosis

Cover/title:3/10
•Cover is plain and doesn't catch the reader's attention. You could work on that.

The flow of words:11/15
•I couldn't stop reading! It was so beautiful and deep, I just loved it!

Grammar/vocab:12/15
•Wise choice of words, beautiful descriptions.

Writing style:15/15
•Your writing style is bold, unique and captivating. The first stanza alone had me gripped and wanting more.

Poetic devices:15/15
•I love your obvious use of personification. The comparison of the things we go through in life, how time slips through our fingers to the autumn winds and their effect on trees was so creative!

Emotions:10/10
•Stirred emotions from the first to last stanza! Speaks about the depression we feel and then goes on to give hope. I love how you woved that into this poem!

Originality:7/10

Enjoyment:10/10
•I loved every bit of this poem. It touched my heart.

Total:83/100

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5|Pangs of pain by seven_hues

Cover/title:6/10
•Simple and elegant cover. Fits perfectly with the title "Silent poetry". The single branch in the bottle speaks volumes.

Flow of words:10/15
•Natural flow of words. I wish this was longer,I didn't want to stop reading.

Grammar/vocab:14/15
•No spelling errors at all. Perfect use of vocab, the words weren't hard to grasp and yet it still impacted heavily

Writing style:14/15
•Other than leaving too much space after each stanza, it was lovely. Very unique, very deep. It's clear that you relate to this poem.

Poetic devices:11/15

Emotions:8/10
•I think it's beautiful how you've written this so well that we, as readers, can practically feel the pain and heartache she is going through. It feels like an event occurred in our life and we're feeling the effects.

Originality:8/10

Enjoyment:8/10
•Beautiful poem. Each stanza was gripping and captured my heart. I have no suggestions to help improve this, it's already amazing.

Total:79/100

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6| The epitome of Nonentity by awriter_aka_yuri
•The author changed their name, and now I cannot find their book.

Cover/title:/10

Flow of words:/15

Grammar/vocab:/15

Writing style:/15

Poetic devices:/15

Emotions:/10

Originality:/10

Enjoyment:/10

Total:/100

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7|Mister Summer by syzou

Cover/title:2/10
•The use of so many colours makes it seem like there is a lot going on in one picture. The colours don't contrast and it doesn't make any sense with the title.

Flow of words:11/15
•Lovely flow of words. Especially with you using a rhyme scheme in specific stanzas.

Grammar/vocab:10/15
•No mistakes that were too obvious but I do suggest you read over for small punctuation errors.

Writing style:9/15
•It seemed lively and yet dangerous at the same time.

Poetic devices:7/15
•Well done with your obvious use of personification and metaphors

Emotions:7/10
• There's anger and resentment in this poem. That's the vibe it gives off.

Originality:6/10

Enjoyment:6/10

Total:58/100

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8|Dearest aunt by a_friendforever

Cover/title:5/10
•Simple and beautiful. Eye-catching and fits well with the title. 

Flow of words:15/15
•I don't know what to say. The flow was so natural and beautiful! It was deep and captivating. 

Grammar/vocab:15/15
•No mistakes at all. Perfect Grammer and clever choice of vocab. 

Writing style:15/15
•Your writing style is beautiful and deep. The fact that you wrote this poem, with so much of emotions embedded in it, alone makes it something beautiful to read. 

Poetic devices:15/15 

Emotions:10/10
•We can all relate to missing someone and not getting to see them. You managed to take that feeling and write it down with pretty words and descriptions. 

Originality:10/10 

Enjoyment:8/10 

Total:93/100

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9|My imaginary friend by jordynsaelor

Cover/title:4/10
•The cover is pretty but it doesn't really make sense with the title and relativity of this book. 

The flow of words:10/15 

Grammar/vocab:15/15
•Perfect Grammer and punctuation. 

Writing style:13/15
•I don't know what I was expecting when I was about to read this poem but it wasn't this. I loved the imagery you have us here. Activities we did as kids, giving them more meaning were a brilliant idea. 

Poetic devices:5/15 

Emotions:8/10 

Originality:10/10 

Enjoyment:9/10
•Every stanza was beautiful and well-written. Your descriptions were all on point! 

Total:74/100

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10|Saboteur by SIR152
*Could not find book**  

Cover/title:/10 

Flow of words:/15 

Grammar/vocab:/15 

Writing style:/15 

Poetic devices:/15 

Emotions:/10 

Originality:/10 

Enjoyment:/10 

Total:/100

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1ST POSITION

Dearest aunt by
a_friendforever

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2ND POSITION

Soporific by
__morosis

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3RD POSITION

It's time to say goodbye by
wild_imaginator16

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JUDGED BY TemikaSingh

And for all the participants.

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Thank you everyone for participating
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