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1. SKY CASTLE - TSAsimplicity1

Cover/Title: 10/10

The flow of words - 13/15

Grammar/Spelling/Vocabulary- 13/15

Writing style- 15/15

Poetic devices- 15/15

Emotions- 10/10

Originality- 10 /10

Enjoyment- 9/10

Total: 85/100

Review: I really liked all the imagery and good choice of wording to make the magical scene come to life.

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2. ALASTOR AND JACK FROST - by TaliaRivers

Cover/Title: 9/10

The flow of words - 10/15

Grammar/Spelling/Vocabulary- 10/15

Writing style- 12 /15

Poetic devices- 14 /15

Emotions- 9 /10

Originality- 10 /10

Enjoyment- 9 /10

Total: 83/100

Review: The story aspect of the poem was lovely, and had consistent imagery throughout.

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3. ONE SIMPLE WISH - by erifnidne

Cover/Title: 10/10

The flow of words - 10/15

Grammar/Spelling/Vocabulary- 5 /15

Writing style- 8 /15

Poetic devices- 10 /15

Emotions- 3/10

Originality- 10/10

Enjoyment- 2/10

Total: 58 /100

Review: Intriguing. Though somewhat difficult to follow, I admired the storytelling nature of it.

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4. LAND OF DREAMS by FernGoldenOfGale

Cover/Title: 8/10

The flow of words - 14/15

Grammar/Spelling/Vocabulary- 15/15

Writing style- 14 /15

Poetic devices- 15/15

Emotions- 10/10

Originality- 10/10

Enjoyment- 9 /10

Total: 95/100

Review: I very much enjoyed this. I loved how you can interpret the poem in any way you want to perceive

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1ST POSITION

Land of Dreams
FernGoldenOfGale


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2ND POSITION

Sky Castle by
TSAsimplicity1


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3RD POSITION

Alastor and Jack Frost by
TaliaRivers

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JUDGED BY emmymorgan2008



And for all the participants

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Thank you everyone for participating
Best Wishes


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