Lotus | BTS AU | by 97jungcookie 

"...despite the SMPA's best efforts, not enough is known yet about the suspected killer besides the patterns in the slayings - in which all five victims were female high school students in their adolescent ages, found in the vicinity of the Han River. Another definitive link officials found among the killings were dried lotus petals stuffed throat-deep into the victims' mouths, hence the name 'Lotus.'.."

. in which a struggling journalist investigates a series of murders.

[This work and its events are purely fictional. All rights reserved.]

{Cover made by me; elements used were taken from the internet.}

TITLE:  5/5  Goes well with the story and makes sense.

COVER:  5/5  Very eye-catching.  I would read this book.

DESCRIPTION: 9/10 I like the wording of the description and it certainly is attention-grabbing.  

PLOT: 29/30 The first impression I get is that it's going to be an interesting read full of mystery.  The story starts with a report on the current murder.  It is realistic and well done.  Next, we get a glimpse of the possible killer watching this on television.  The setting is described strongly and the details of the character's movements enrich the story.  The investigative reporter is introduced in a quaint way showing her unique character without exaggeration. I can't wait to see this plot unfold and find out the madness behind his actions.  I hope it includes many twists and turns.  Try to keep your chapters at a more consistent length. Also having a chapter 3.5 seems weird.

DIALOGUE: 10/10 The dialogue is expertly done as you can see the character's personality expressed in their banter.

DICTION: 10/10 You have a good vocabulary and I enjoyed how you phrased things making the story more entertaining.

GRAMMAR: 10/10 No problems here. Maybe limit the number of dashes and use the more traditional comas. 

AESTHETIC: 9/10 The aesthetic is good.  You provide pictures that showcase the different characters in the story.  The use of dashes instead of comas is interesting.  I haven't really seen that used too often.  The Jungkook gifs especially give the creepy vibe that is necessary.  I personally don't like the numbering instead of chapter titles, but it's up to you. 

ORIGINALITY AND APPEAL: 10/10

The horror plot is appealing but without the graphic descriptions, it would lose much of its intensity.  You did a great job at this keep it up.  You really conveyed the feeling of terror. I really enjoyed your writing style and can't wait to read the rest.  Looking forward to the next climactic scene.

97/100  - Great job!!!