Oops #2 - Writing
Well I had that moment I wrote about Water and Star, I wanted to send it to my friends but my phone doesn't gave a f and told me that it will not send such a big text soooo
Here we are
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Water & Star - Random moment
Star strated his cigarette. He was sitting on the bed completely naked, only covered by a thin white sheet for his inferior body. Water was next to him. He was naked too but not hiding it at all. He was sitting cross-legged showing himself shamelessly. Star looked over at him. Once again, he had his stupid smile that he seemed to keep on as much as he could. A crazy but foolish man. He inhaled slowly while looking at Water who just smiled back at him. He breathed out smoke, spitting it at Water's face. His smile rattled at it. He didn't really like smoke but he never complained when Star smoked in the same room as him.
_ You're disgusting, said Star before bringing the cigarette back to his lips.
_ That's why you blew that disgusting thing at me, asked Water with a tender smile.
Star never took time to ask about it, but every time he would swear at or insult Water, he will always smile more tenderly. He seemed to somehow like it. He didn't like being insult by anyone normally but with him, he acted like he was complimenting him or something. Weirdo, thought Star as he blew another smoking breath at Water.
_ Yeah, he smirked. Disgusting things suit you.
Water laughed at that. He then stole Star's cigarette before he could tasted it again. Star was about to scold him until he saw him bring it to his mouth and inhale deeply. Star remained speechless at that action. After inhaling, Water almost immediately started to cough and choke on the smoke. Star smiled fondly at that.
_ Are you trying to impress me, little Blue ?
Water just kept choking, his eyes watering at the bright pain. What a pitiful being. Star got up and kissed the poor man. He inhaled in his mouth, stealing his air more and more. They stayed in that position a few minutes. Water wanted and needed air but he just let his lungs get abused and stolen all their air. He really just might be a crazy or foolish man. Star ended the kiss after missing air himself. Water almost collapsed in his arms. His head jerked backwards as he was held only by one of Star's hands while the other was taking back the cigarette. Water had his eyes closed taking his time to gain his breathing back to normal. Star took a drag of his cigarette then came to kiss the top of his head. In this very moment, the crazy man wasn't smiling too occupied on taking care of his poor lungs.
_ You're not smiling. You look less like a freak without that smile. At that, Water instantly jerked. As his eyes were still shot, he started to weakly smile but was stopped by Star who crushed the still lighted up cigarette on his chest making him bite his lower lip and breath sharply through the pain. Keep smiling and I throw you in a dumpster, threatened the smaller man.
Water smiled genuinely hearing that and opened his eyes. He gave him a playful look before starting to hug him tightly. Star struggled in the forced embrace.
_ Get off of me, freak !
Did the pain really get away this quick ? What a freak.
_ Noooooo, you're going to throw me away, joked Water since he smiled despite the warning.
He rolled over to be the one on top. He then looked at Star smiling fondly. The eyecontact felt sweet. A sweet moment for foolish and crazy men. Water broke this eyecontact to crush with his hand the cigarette that had been thrown away in the embrace. It was still flammable, it was better to not let the sheet get burned.
_ Let's not start a fire, shall we, said Water while showing the crushed cigarette.
_ Yeah, it was already hot last night, let's not make a fire camp in here.
_ Oh I can still smell the rotting flesh of those girls. It was a beautiful night, wasn't it ? We should bring fire to our crime more often, said Water while giggling in a maniac manner.
_ I was referring more to the sex we had but yeah... You're right. We did that too...
Water let himself fall into Star. He liked feeling him close to him. Star instinctively put one of his hands in his hair.
_ Why did you smoke earlier ?
He lifted his head up putting his chin on Star's chest. He looked at him in the eyes. Another lovely moment. Star would never admit it but he always felt safe and in a trance when their eyes locked. They had a weird connection that he couldn't really name.
_ You said that disgusting things suited me. You're supposed to wear and take things that suit you.
Star wondered if it had deeper meaning. Did he really meant what he just said ? That was such a stupid reason. Well, more he thought about it and more it made sense. It was a stupid man that he had in front of him.
_ Why would you believe that ? Where did you get that idea ?
_ My dad told me that one time.
_ Your dad ? I thought crazy men like you were popping out of the ground.
They smiled at each other a bit. It was such a dumb reply but they liked to be dumb with each other.
_ My father died the moment he said that.
Water said those words like it was nothing as he started to snuggle onto Star. It felt weird. The tone of his voice was light like he was talking about what he ate the day before.
_ You just made me think of him. It's been... A while since I thought of him.
_ How... Was he like, asked weakly Star.
_ Mmh... My mom always said that I looked like him. We physically looked pretty similar but I can't say for the rest. He died when I was 6.
_ And you still remember him telling you that !?
Water stayed silent for a few minutes. Then he sat up and looked at Star wearing that smile crazy he wears all the time.
_ I do because he said something really important to me at that moment. Star sat up looking at his eyes being slowly filled by madness. That day, as he had been repeatedly stabbed by my mom with his blood spread everywhere, he caressed my cheek with his bloody hand and told me while looking at me :
« Your eyes are as red as blood. Blood suits you. And I want you to remember that you're always supposed to wear and take things that suit you. I wish you, one day, to be killed in a bloodbath you and your whore of a mother. »
_ That day, I saw my mom kill my father and had him wishing me to die. It was the first time I saw blood, the first time I had someone wishing my death and the first time and last time I laughed with my dad.
Star looked at Water's eyes. They were full of insanity. It was a crazy man that was sitting in front of him and he was disgusting.
_ Messed up family, uh ?
Water smiled more in response. Star looked irritated. He got out of bed and gathered his belongings. He was starting to get dressed as Water was lying down. The man got confortable to watch the naked body in front of him one more time. Once he was completely dressed, Star turned to Water. His smile was a perverted and crazy one. He looked at him in the eyes. Nothing felt sweet or lovely. Ugh, disgusting garbage.
_ Never stand next to a dumpster if you don't want me to push you in it, said codly Star. Water laughed.
_ Wouldn't a dumpster suit me ?
Star remained silent for a bit before taking a pack of cigarettes out of his pocket. He put a cigarette between his teeth and mumbled as he was trying to light it up. Water giggled at that.
_ I don't understand you, dear, teased Water. Could you repeat for me ?
Star finally managed to light it up, threw the lighter back in his pocket before taking the cigarette between his finger and screaming at Water.
_ I said you're a fucking disgusting garbage !
Water didn't rattled at that and Star, frustrated, opened the door before violently close it.
_ Fuck you, Blue, almost cried out Star from behind the door.
Water smiled more at that before covering himself with the sheet and let himself go back to sleep.
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I was trying to show their relationship through an example. I don't know if it feels like a good example or not but it's not like I could do better. I will try to make more little writings to help establish and show the relationship between characters of my stories, it sounds like something right to do.
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