+ NOTES ! ☆
today, ladies and gents and non-binary magicians, i shall present to u, the actual copy of my digital notes!!
what are my digital notes? it's my whole notepad in my phone where i write and plan for this fic! u can see a few deleted info & a lot of planning. wow. maybe some fun facts too abt me ?? ;)) idk lol. there are many plot armor notes here, so if u start to say stuff like "that doesnt make sense" ,, i'll just reply with "ikr" bc i agree w/ u a lot and i wish past koko knew that changing something in a story should happen for the sake of the plot, not for shock factor smh. this will be my last update here since the book is done now, so i'll c u all in my next angsty fic !!1! >:D
enjoy!
[ NOTHING HAS BEEN EDITED ]
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momo gets a stalker
• predicted it would be furukawa (oc)
• revealed it was todoroki
• toga was behind all this
• todoroki and momo have a private talk back at the secret staircase
• bOOM first arc is over :)
☆☆☆ bday !! ☆☆☆
// momo gets a surpirse + flowers + personal talk w/ stranger instead of todo
development;
since momo × stranger r close,,,, she gets to open up to him.
todoroki's feelings for her increase. anxiety abt his rep increased. after overhearing momo's conversation with her dad,, he rushed inside. not to make things obvs, he will mumble something. he goes solo. panics abt it {no help 4rom kendo this tym. he needs to comfort her. best gift ever.}
SAME NIGHT - MOMO FALLS FOR STRANGER
YOOO THAT'S AMAZING KOKO
in the midst of that, todo was alrdy in love w her lol.
momo thanks him the next day. todo texted miss abt the thingy he experienced this morning. kendo is happy and thinks his training is over :)))
he goes solo for the rest ~~
meet-up will be after 1 MORE CHAPTER after momo falls for stranger. development is required here >:^
so, momo + stranger kilig situations occurr. todo is unexpectedly really happy abt it. he was also going solo for only 2 days and he was able to feel comfortable.
/plan up was decided after getting comfortable/
furukawa shows up. corners momo. reminds momo of cousin trauma moment.
todo shows up. furukawa reveals to be toga
BBOOM FLASHBACKS
awkward convo @ stairs
space
then -
apologize
" u did nothin wrong "
" friends? "
(oof. i like u tho)
" f r i e n d s . "
meet up @ stairs. irl convo. awkward ~> normal :)
timeskip.
date.
kiss.
eY
done uwu
☆☆☆☆
☆ a collection of them talking ☆
> momo's book resumes and influences Todoroki in his confession <
Todoroki kisses her AHHHH ♡♡♡♡
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TODOROKI SAYS HE IS A GIRL. = why?
because todo believed that perhaps, momo, never showed attraction to him. so displaying him as a girl and her easily believing him, would technically mean "oh, you're a girl? ah, that's ok !!! we're friends after all:))" and that would be a bad thing for him, or maybe she's bi. pfft, who knows.
basically, todoroki believed "mm sHI she doesnt have any form of attraction towards me does she" and so he thought "maybe,,, if she finds out i was, well, a girl, and she accepts it, she probs think im just a friend. or maybe's bi. but if she doesnt believe me or is doubtful, she probably likes me. actually, maybe not."
todoroki is very dense actually.
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"wait what now?"
seeing that momo and stranger have already developed a strong bond, so did todoroki's with momo, but momo doesnt see it, todoroki does.
so, she's the only one worried about the bond, while todoroki seems chill (pun intended) with it, cuz he basically is getting closer to her everyday.
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FIRST: momo = todo
both wr ok with each other ..
SECOND: momo todo
distance occurs
THIRD: momo .. todo
rebuilding
FOURTH: momo sksnxjs todo
mess but still rebuilding
FIFTH: momo . . .. . . . todo ??
confusion
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WHAT IS HAPPENING OMG LET'S FIX THiS
so,, MOMO:
- currenlty calm now over the bond
- still quite awkward and open
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BIG DAY YALL.
writing new chapter of todoroki sudden appearance. time to break it down-
CHAPTER GOAL: momo wants to meet the stranger.
PREVIOUS: Todoroki + Momo bond be fixed [ FINISHED ]
1. momo was overwhelmed and contemplating after her vent with todoroki.
status: overwhelmed, still positive
2. todoroki was overwhelmed by momo's vent
status: disappointed, sad, curious.
DUE TO CURIOUSITY - digged deeper in his investigation, thus finding new info.
3. momo contemplates stranger's identity.
status: overwhelmed, still positive, doubtful.
4. momo receives the message
status: overwhelmed, filled with happiness, lovesick
LOVESICK - leads to quick decision making despite knowing she'd regret it (CRUSH EFFECT; author moment)
5. momo walks to school
status: hesitant, overwhelmed, filled with happiness, still lovesick
HESITATION: anxious
6. meets furukawa
status: relieved,
7. climax
status: afraid, betrayed
8. todoroki's sudden appearance
status: confused.
CLIFFHANGER.
short chapter .
extension? yes pleathe.
small clues at the end.
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CHAPTER 22 CONCLUSION: momo realizes it's not so bad to like todoroki while outside watching the rain ?? i thought of this while going to bed hm
BUILD UP - todo opens up to kendo,,, collects himself and shi and fixes himself up and reflects ( shows he truly respects momo and is trying his best to understand their bond more and their boundaries and space. WoW. )
momo still emoting
A MOMENT ........
momo learns to like him :)
YEYEYEYEYEY
i thot of yhus at like 12 am in bed and i kept yelling
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ok early end plan
1. LAST LINE EASTER EGG
idk how hm
the first line of the book is "Class has ended."
sO HMMM
the last line of the book should be
uh
"And a new Love has begun."
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OMG THE SLOWBURN EFFECT HAHA WOW.
i wanna get this over with already O K
1. MOMO WAS LIKE "meet me up @ the stairs"
2. "it doesnt have the same vibe as the staircase we used to go," WOW
"honestly no,"
"uh why"
"bc ur still here"
"...????"
"ah, sorry. i must have gone too far,"
"NONO THAT'S OK HAHA"
if i do it in the order of momo then todo that means todoroki didnt learn his boundaries
HUH WHY
im so confusion,,,,,,
what hmmmmM
3. "hey uhh let's be friends again?"
"... yeah."
END OF CHAPTER ???
jk n o
SCHOOL BEGAN AGAIN!!
"hey,, uhhh todoroki!!!! staircase???"
"yee"
4. ASKS HER ON A DATE Y E S
HAH NOT YE T MATe
jfc i hate it when i do so much slowburns
OK LEZ G O
( i thought of this after brushing my hair after a nice shower lmao, 10:02 PM; may 26)
5. decided to clear up the toga thing
they report it,,, teachers send authorities,, give a few scolds,, kendo is proud
6. fixing father bond
"hey uhh imma make a private call for a while,,"
"sure"
contacts him and confronts him calmly this time,,, it goes unexpectedly well,, momo is thrilled,,
[ CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT (um sorta?)
TODOROKI: learns boundaries,, prevents himself from saying weird shi,,,, (HE KINDA DOES E W)
MOMO: learns to take things headfirst and not shade away from them (unlike her father situation)
OOOOO
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THE CLOSING OF THE BOOK
aaa im gonna miss u 'strangers' 😔
oK
during their "cool down hangout" (TODOROKI CALLS IT THAT WAY SHHHSHSHSH i hate myself),,, he does strange things
momo picks them up one by one,,, && realizes
he was following the EXACT actions a character from her book did in a date,,
BUT in the end of that chapter,, the boy just leaves happily
B u T
@@ THE END OF THE DAY,,,
MOMO THINKS "welp,, time to end the date"
but then she starts laughing and was like "i noticed u did this!!!hahaha!! funny lolol smash like!!"
and while doing so,,,
hm wAIT
we cant let AN unexpected ACT haPPEN AGAIN W/O CONSENT IT MEANS TODO NEVER LEARNED HIS BOUNDARIES SHSUDUDHDHDJEJD
W A IT
I GOT IT WE GOTTA MAKE IT CUTE or somethin im sorry koko im just really bad @ romance when ive never been in love but only own a crush,, yikes :((
o h
O H
he goes "sorry,, this is the only thing that i couldnt restrain myself to do,,,"
HSJDHDJDN
"sorry,,,"
"n-nononono IT'S OK!!!!"
"yaoyorozu,, i'll tell u straight,, but i like u. a lot."
MOMO SMILES nice
"me too- i m-meAn I LIKE U A LOT TOO NOT ME IM gahhhhh"
todoroki LAUGHS (i cry)
"can i kiss u again?"
"ah,, um,, im bad @ kisses,,"
"dont worry,, i am too,,"
".. ok then (lol)."
KISS B O O M END
i cried while writing this LEZ GO,,,
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EPILOGUE
momo and todoroki keep relationship private,, find themselves going on a date,,
"dont couples go to cafes after school .. and stuff??"
" .. idk."
".. should .. we .. like .. go .. or somethin ??"
"mmmmm k"
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TODOROKI FEEDS HER IM WEEPING AND SHE GOES
"AGHH idk man,,, im,, weird,, h-h-hahaha"
"s-sorry,, i dont how this romance thing works."
"ME TOO HAHAHA"
".. would .. u like it if we go back to that staircase .. and just .."
"id like that"
AW.
OK.
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OK IM STUC ON CHAP 24
aLRIGHT.
the pacing is too fast,, too many timeskips,,
HMMM
so
todo and momo private talk - IN DETAIL
todo and momo cant sleep - IN DETAIL
todo and momo talk again - IN DETAIL (50)
TIMESKIP
running - IN DETAIL
report to nezu - SMALL DETAILS
momo call - IN DETAIL
momo's walk back - IN DETAIL
momo and todo talk - IN DETAIL
balanced ???? is the length && detail balanced ???? should i add more paragraphs regarding their feelings ???? to emphasis it ?????
im not very sure,,, i'll write it all tomorrow but im having a migraine rn,,, && im sleepy
u gh
goodnight
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hahahah IM STILL AWAKE PAST KOKO
ok i think if i continue just adding more length and irrelevant info regarding their feelings itll be longer and drag the reader for so long and make them bored
it requires a todomomo moment,,, i mean like,,, thERE IS,,, but not a single one makes me melt
LMAO THAT SOUNDED WEIRD SHSHSH
but i want a line that makes me go "AGGHH c u t e" and i feel that weird melting feeling
yes that is how i think of moments i just think of random lines and pick which makes me go "AAAAA UWU"
H M
so the todo + momo moment while talking:
momo moves forward (RISKY LINES; showing attraction) // development from admiration
actually wait i cant let todo say weird && cheezy things anymore he learned his boundaries already
d a m i t
ok whatever we'll stick to writing events
hmm
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| DATE | EVENTS.
1. AUTUMN WALK
> bird watching + leaves
> "i like ur puppy!!"
> "kite?? AGH- KITE!!!"
2. CAFE MEAL
> "u like,, muffins?"
> "yup!! they taste good (:"
> todo admiring her looks session ;)
3. TOY SHOPPING
> gets her a toy
> todoroki gets flustered bc momo gives him one too
> puts flower in ear,, "looks nice."
> "AAAAA" "shi sorry.. i'll try to be better."
4. ART MUSEUM
> "oooh,, it must have been hard to ger tickets :)"
> "kinda. but im happy i got one for u today."
> "thanks."
> "weird holding hand thing
> "u made me a lot happier."
> familiarity to the situation
5. ICE CREAM
> "u have cream on ur face,,"
> "oH shi i must have looked strange"
> "u still look nice to me."
> "//////"
6. SUNSET STROLL
> "sunsets always remind me of u"
> "is that.......bad???"
> "ofc not. they look pretty."
7. BIGGEST CLIMAX
> HEY U TWO SHOULD KISS
> gonna prove doglover_106's theory or smth is right lolololol ;)))
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imma balance it like the hangouts i go to my class
im in a taxi rn so
uhh
yeah
BALANCING
short event (meeting up)
meal
most climax
or
meal
whole hangout
we usually get snacks after majority of the hangout so i'll add another event w/ toy shopping
i wonder hwat tho
AN ART MUSEUM
YEEHAW
i just saw my 'blue' school friends im cryinf PLS GO HOME u guys make me sob in a bad way istg
jk u guys make me happy but also kinda sh y y
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i wanna write this HSHSHSHSHDHD
so basically i hung out w/ my old crush (we're cool now,, we're really good friends) and my best guy friend and some other guy aND LIKE-
we did nothing much then i was at this internet cafe and i said "hey i need to do a project" but IN REALITY i was writing the final chapter on microsoft word so it looks like i am doing some project
i feel like dying
irrelevant LEZ DO IT
i need to get an exhausting autumn park moment so it feels comfy on the next segment
GASP
LET'S GIVE THEMES
1. THE AUTUMN STROLL
- expresses todoroki's attraction to momo's dedication and her hardworking attitude
- expresses momo's admiration over todoroki's loyalty and endless kindness
THEME: admiration for each other's inner qualities
2. CAFE MEAL
- expresses todoroki's admiration for every detail of her
- expresses momo's admiration for the little words and things of todoroki
THEME: the attraction to the smallest things
3. TOY SHOPPING
- expresses each others' gratitude and support for each other by the use of giving gifts
- giving love
THEME: the giving of gifts
4. ART MUSEUM
- expresses the stage of getting comfortable and being honest w/ each other
- showing respect and accepting opinions and preparing
THEME: the mature acts in a bond
5. ICE CREAM
- still finding that beauty in people when doing something wrong
- looks having no contribution to a relationship and small sins not being a big deal
THEME: forgiveness
5. SUNSET STROLL
- the opening of a new relationship
- learning. still learning.
THEME: relationships blossom through time and care
OK IDK ANYTHING ABOUT LOVE BUT THAT TOOK LONG H O O
it wasnt much lol
it sounds kinda cringey tbh koko u ok lol
koko sleep na
kk
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GAHD writing plans abt this date//'hangout' thing makes me nostalgic i miss hanging out w/ my friends lol
ANYWAY
( was mever used )
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LET'S REPLACE ART MUSEUM W/ ICE SKATING SHSHSHSHHD
I WANT THAT SM
ok brb i'll clean up
IM BAC
4. ICE SKATING
- intimacy increases and the comfy stage begins!!
- mad respect
- a bit of skinship (MILD bc we gotta keep it fluffy)
THEME: intimacy is now quite comfy
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[ A PIC FROM MY CHURCH'S SLIDESHOW ]
• interpersonal love
• warm relationships
• giving
• appreciation
• gratitude
1. APPRECIATION
2.
3. GIVING
4.
5.
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i DID SOME RESEARCH ON DATES bc im bad @@ them i never experienced love b4
1. AUTUMN STROLL
2. COZY CAFE
3. TOY SHOPPING
4. BIKE RIDE
5. APPLES
6. SUNSET
Y E S
but awfully cliche i must add something,,, n e w.
ROLLER SKATING
bc i cant do ice skating in october who does that lolol
( i would tho )
but i wANT SKATING SMH
let's replace it w/ biking
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1. STROLL
- cool shifting
- thrilling, to tire out the characters
- todo admires her hardworking attitude
- "ur really nice."
- "??? thank u but ur nicer tbh"
- "..."
2. CAFE
- meal
- calm and cozy, relaxing
- allowing characters to cool down
- todo stares
- momo is just,, "???"
- "u-u-U ok?"
- "mhm."
- 'she's really pretty.'
3. TOY SHOPPING
- nice calming
- change of atmosphere
- "it looks good on u."
- "aa,, i see,, hahahahahHahsh"
- change of pov
- todo decides to get her a toy
- when he gives it to her, it's just wow
- "here. i wanted to give this to u."
- "... wha"
- "youve been .. really nice to me so-"
- "nO LikE-" *pulls her toy out*
- "i was gonna give u one too actually .."
- aaa??
4. BIKING
- calming yet tiring
- making the characters cozy and tired
- "u ... have a bike?"
- "yeh,, the city is getting crowded."
- "so .. ???"
- "so let's go somewhere else."
- momo hug todo uwu??
- she smiles a LOT
- "u ok there?"
- "y-YeaH"
5. ICE CREAM TRUCK
- cozy and chill
- "ice cream!!"
- nom nom
- "u have a bit cream on ur face."
- "aAAA i must have looked weird,,"
- "not at all. u still look nice tbh."
- "hNNGhHHHh thank u ://)"
6. CLIMAX
- cozy atmosphere,, calm
- "aaaa,, sunsets :))"
- "sunsets remind me of u a lot tbh"
- "is it bad??"
- "no. sunsets are pretty and nice."
- quiet,,
- momo realizes the similarities
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1. TEAMWORK
- finding the dog together
2. COMMUNICATION / speaking
- talking in the cafe
3. GIVING / GRATITUDE
- toy shopping + giving gifts
4. TRUST
- bike ride, knowing todo will not take momo to anywhere unsafe, especially after that unsettling act
5. UNDERSTANDING
- cafe talk,,, soft disagreements regarding the dog mission && how it tired them out
6. RESPECT
- ^^^^
7. LOVE
- nuff said
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[ A THREAD OF MY DRAWINGS OF THE BOOK'S MOMENTS ]
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