Chapter 1: Suzie, Do You Copy

Announcement please read before getting into the chapter.

Okay like I said last season, now that we've made it here make another announcement, The dialog for Five: Has been changed to Y/N:

Like this

(Old) Five: Hi

(New) Y/N: Hi

He will be called Five in private with the party or the party adults. I've tried to make Five/You more mature than Eleven did but I changed something around for this season and I hope you won't be upset by this. Eleven/Jane is NORMAL in this for the new readers who skipped to this cause I know they did. Her mother and aunt will have a big part as does Hopper and Joyce. I'm only going to writing scenes from the main Mind Flayer plot with the party, Russian plot with both Dustin and Steve and I will go ahead and Skip ahead of the Johnathan and Nancy news plot. Not trying to get copywrite at all, that's why I made minor changes to the last plot and a bigger change in this one.

Again I DO NOT OWN STRANGER THINGS OR ITS ENTIREITY, ALL RIGHTS OF Matt and Ross Duffer and NETFLIX. If you do not like this story you can leave, don't write mean comments, I'd love to have a peaceful community of followers and hope to encourage them to stay peaceful and have hope to make their own stories. As well as another thing, I shall make another OC, this is special, one of my many followers/readers will be able to be apart of the Stranger Thing franchise. So I want you all to answer a questions

1. Which Stranger Things cast member almost didn't make it in the series?

I will post who won at the end of the season, and they will be put into season 4, 5 and one-shots and if I got through with it a fan made season 6. Anyway good reads everyone.

[Summer, 1985/Hopper's Cabin]

♪ Just a little more time
is all we're asking for ♪

♪ 'Cause just a little more
time could open closing doors ♪
A song plays as we see two teens in and embraces while making out. Y/N Hopper and Jane Ives in the young boy bedroom as music plays in the background.

♪ Just a little uncertainty
can bring you down ♪

Jane seperates from the kiss and sings along.

Eleven: ♪ And nobody
wants to know you now ♪

Eleven: ♪ Nobody wants to show you... ♪

Y/N: El! El, stop! Stop!

Eleven: ♪ So if you're lost and on your own ♪

Y/N: El! Stop!El! El!

Eleven: ♪ You can never surrender ♪

Y/N smiles and cute the girls cheeks and shushes her as he laughs.

Eleven: What, you don't like it?

Y/N: No.

Eleven kisses Y/N again as he returns the kiss.

Y/N: We could get in trouble for this you know.

Eleven: Who cares?

In the living room, Hopper sits in his recliner eating chips and drinking a beer.

MAN ON TV: Don't look at
the dogs, work the lock. Work the lock. Work the lock. Don't look at the dogs. You looked at the dogs. Sometimes everything goes exactly as planned.

Hopper looks towards his sons room door, noticing the door slightly open and how quiet it is. He leans back slowly getting the view of his son and Jane making out.

Hopper: Hey!

Now scared the couple seperate. Y/N notices Hopper looking at them as he uses his power to shut the door.

Hopper: Hey!

Hopper gets up from his chair and marches to the room door.

Hopper: Three-inch minimum! Leave the door open three inches!

Hopper tries to open the door but finds it locked.

Hopper: Five open this door. Open the...

The lock click and Hopper opens the door to find his son leaned against the wall and Eleven reading a magazine.

Five: What's wrong?

Hopper sighs and leave the room, leaving it opened three inches.

Eleven looks at her watch and notices the time.

Eleven: Shit I gotta go.

Y/N: Mall?

Eleven: Yeah. Promised Mike, Will and Lucas that I'd be there.

Y/N: Max as well?

Eleven: Sadly yeah but she follows Lucas around like a dog.

Y/N: Play nice now.

Eleven: I try but it's just hard to accept her.

Y/N: At least an attempt is being made, come on I'll walk you out.

El rushes over to Y/N and kisses him one last time before they exit the room.

Hopper: Where you two going?

Y/N: I'm just walking her out.

Hopper: Mhmm.

Y/N opens the door and walks outside with Eleven to her bike. Eleven has noticed the change in Y/N. He stands at least 5'10 which makes him the tallest in the party, his hair has now grown out to his shoulders and is curly as hell, particularly because of his genes and the fact she plays with his hair from time to time. It's been about 6 months since the Lab shut down. Jane has never begged for the year to end faster than now.

Y/N: Even I can tell what your thinking.

Eleven: What?

Y/N: 6 months, 2 weeks and 5 days from now I'll be allowed in public.

Eleven: I know but i wish there could be another exemption for this.

Y/N: Maybe I'll talk to Dad and ask him.

Eleven: I gotta go.

Jane kisses the boy on his cheek. Y/N smiles as she mounts her bike and leave the area. Y/N walks back inside and is smack in the head by Hopper.

Y/N: Ow!

Hopper: One rule Five. One rule, door stays open three inches.

Y/N: I'm sorry.

Hopper sighs, he wants to punish Y/N but last time he trashed the living room.

Hopper: Go to bed, your buddy Dustin comes back tomorrow.

Hopper ruffles the boys hair as he goes back to his recliners.
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[On the road]

Eleven pedals as fast as she can as she talks to Y/N on the radio.

Eleven: My God, that was priceless! Did you see his face?

Y/N: *over radio* It was like a tomato!

Eleven: Yeah, a fat tomato.

Y/N: I wish I was still with you.

Eleven: I know. Me too. But I'll see you tomorrow, all right? First thing. Tomorrow.

Y/N:*over radio* See you tomorrow.
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[Starcourt Mall]

Eleven finally makes it to her destination as she leaves her bike in the bike stand where the party approach.

Lucas: You're late.

Eleven: Sorry!

Mike: Again. We're gonna miss the opening.

Eleven: Yeah, if you guys keeping whining about it. Let's go!

Lucas: "If you guys keep whining about it." Nyeh-nyeh-nyeh.

Lucas mocks as the party enter the mall.

Eleven: Just please stop talking, dude.

Lucas: Let me guess. You were busy smacking lips.

Eleven: Oh, yeah, real mature, Lucas.

Lucas: "Oh, Five, I wish we
could make out forever, and never hang out with any of our friends."

Eleven: Lucas, stop.

Lucas: Will thinks it's funny.

Will: Because it is.

Eleven: Yeah, it's so funny that I want to spend romantic time with my boyfriend.

Lucas: I can't attest to the boyfriend part but I'm spending romantic time with my girlfriend.

Mike: While me and Will here are third wheels.

The party run to the escalator and run down the opposite side.

Mike: Excuse us! Sorry! Sorry!

Will: Sorry, sorry, sorry!

Max: Excuse me, I'm sorry.

Eleven: Sorry.

The party now leave the escalator to their destination, not before Lucas accidentally bumps into a man.

Man: Hey! Watch it!

Erica: Yeah! Watch it, nerd!

Lucas turns to find his little sister with her friends by the mall fountain.

Lucas: Isn't it past your bedtime?

Erica: Isn't it time you died?

Lucas: Psycho!

Erica: Butthead!

Lucas: Mall rat!

Erica: Fart face!

Lucas blows a raspberry at his sister. Max grips her boyfriends arm.

Max: Oh, now that was mature.

Finally reaching their destination the party make it to the Scoops Ahoy! Ice Cream parlor where Mike rings the bell repeatedly.

Girl: Hey, dingus, your children are here.

From the kitchen window it opens to reveal Steve as he sighs.

Steve: Again? Seriously?

Mike rings the bell again for dramatic effect as they all walk into the kitchen and go back into the back way passages.

Eleven: Come on, come on.

Steve: I swear, if anybody hears about this...

Party: We're dead!

Mike cracks one to the doors open slightly and looks around.

Mike: All clear.

The party sneak into the mall theater to find seats.

Eleven: See, Lucas? We made it.

Lucas: We missed the previews.

Max: Still made it. Fart face.

Man: Shh.

Lucas: Skittles.

Max: Thanks.

Lucas pours Skittles into Max's hand as the movie begins to play. George A Romero's Day Of The Dead.

The movie place part of the beginning until the film malfunctions. The crowd groans and boos. One minute passed as the movie begins to play again and the crowd erupts in cheers. Will is the only one who doesn't cheer as he softly rubs the back of his neck as goosebumps rise.

Mike: Hey. You okay?

Will: Yeah.

Mike: Are you sure?

Will: Of course.

Mike: Okay.

[The Next Day]

[Dustin] This is Gold Leader,
returning to base. Do you copy? Over. This is Gold Leader, returning to base. Do you copy? Over. I repeat: This is Gold Leader, returning to base. Do you copy? Over.

Dustin is now seen in his mother's car on their way back home as he tries to contact the party.

Dustin: I repeat: This is goddamn Gold Leader...

Claudia: Dusty!

Dustin: What?

Claudia: Relax! For goodness' sake.

Dustin: I'm in range. They should be answering.

Claudia: You've been away a whole month, honeybun. Maybe they just... forgot.

Dustin sighs and hopes that's not the case as they make their way home in silence. Once there Claudia stays behind while Dustin goes inside. Dustin goes into his room and tosses his bag on his bed. He sighs as he turns to his new turtles home.

Dustin: At least someone's happy I'm home.

The toys in Dustin's closet begin to move out by themselves. They leave his room, all of them. Quickly thinking he grabs the hairspray Steve told him about and points it out in the hallway.

Dustin: It's just a dream.

Dustin slowly follows the toys to wherever they're leading him.

From behind a wall the party waits and hides as they trick Dustin whereas Y/N closes his eyes using his power to move the toys.

Dustin: You're dreaming.

Mike taps Jane's shoulder giving the signal. She turns to her boyfriend whos nose is bleeding.

Jane:*whispers* Now!

Y/N opens his eyes and stops his powers stopping the toys. Dustin crouches and picked up one of the toys as the party creep their way around quietly to surprise him. Lucas uses his finger to count down. Three, two, one.. Once at one the Max and Lucas blow on the party noisemakers while Mike, Will, El and Y/N scream out "welcome home", but that was short lived as Dustin screams in terror spraying the spray in Lucas's face. Y/N knocks the spray out of Dustin's hand with his powers as Lucas cowers over in pain.

Max: The sink.

Max brings Lucas over to the kitchen sink and starts to wash his eyes and Mike and Will stare at Dustin in shock.

Dustin: Shit! You guys scared me.

Eleven: Does that consider first blood?

Will: I'm not sure to be honest.

Mike: I give benefit of the doubt.

Y/N: But when I used my powers on Lucas, Mike got mad.

Mike: You did fling him across the junkyard.

Max: *from the kitchen* He did what?

Eleven: Can we move on to how Dustin's trip was?

Dustin: Lucas you alright?

From the kitchen Lucas whimpers and winces as he sticks his thumbs up.

Dustin: Good, I have to show you guys what I made while I was at camp.

[Hawkins]

The downtown area has been closed down or lost business because of the mall. No stores are open except for the general store where Joyce works patiently. The doorbell jingles and Joyce turns to find Hopper walking in.

Hopper: Hey.

Joyce: Hey.

Hopper: You busy?

Joyce: You're our second customer, so...

Hopper: Second?

Joyce: Well Terry came in earlier.

Hopper: Good.

-timeskip-

Hopper: And then Y/N, he just... slams the door. Right in my face.

Joyce: Uh-huh?

Hopper: You know, it is that
smug shithead Jane.

Joyce: El?

Hopper: El, Eleven, Jane what ever she's corrupting him, I'm telling you. And I'm just gonna lose it. I mean, I am gonna lose it, Joyce.

Joyce: Just take it down, Hopper.

Hopper: I need for them to break up.

Joyce: That is not your decision.

Hopper: They're spending entirely too much time together. You agree with me about that, right?

Joyce: Well, I mean, they're
just kissing, right?

Hopper: Yeah, but it is constant. It is constant. Okay? That is not normal, that is not healthy.

Joyce: You can't just force them apart. I mean, they're not little kids anymore, Hop. They're teenagers. If you order them around like
a cop, then they're gonna rebel. It's just what they do.

Hopper:  So what, I'm just supposed to let them do whatever they want?

Joyce: No, I didn't say that. I think you should... talk to them.

Hopper: No. No. 'Cause talking doesn't work.

Joyce: Not yelling. Not ordering. But talk to them. You know, like a heart-to-heart.

Hopper: A heart-to-heart? What is that?

Joyce: You sit them down and you talk to them, like you're their friend. I find if you talk to them like you're on their level, then they really start to listen. And then, you know, you could start to create some boundaries.

Hopper: Boundaries.

Joyce: Yeah, but, Hop, it's really important that no matter how they respond, you stay calm. You cannot lose your temper.

Hopper: Uh... Maybe you could do it for me?

Joyce: No.

Hopper: Yeah, you could. Yeah, you could. You come over after work. Yes.

Joyce: No. It only works if it comes from you.

Hopper: Yeah but Y/N really likes you.

Joyce: I know but it has to come from the father figure. But...

Hopper: But?

Joyce: Maybe I can help you...find the right words.

[Henderson Residents]

In Dustin's room, Dustin shows Mike, Will, Eleven and Y/N his new inventions

Dustin: I call it... the Forever Clock. All right? Powered by wind. Very useful in the apocalypse.Then, I give you...

Dustin then takes a hammer with wires and chip attached to it and starts it up.

Dustin: The Slammer. Pretty neat, huh? But this...this is my masterpiece.

Dustin proceeds to take his bag off of his bed and opening it to show them.

Dustin: I would like you to meet...Cerebro.

Will: What exactly are we looking at here?

Dustin: An unassembled one-of-a-kind battery-powered radio tower.

Mike: So, it's a... a ham radio.

Dustin: The Cadillac of ham radios. This baby carries a
crystal-clear connection over vast distances. I'm talking North Pole to South. I can talk to my girlfriend
whenever and wherever I choose.

Party: Girlfriend?

Dustin: Come on I need to set it up so you guys can atleast hear her.

Dustin packs Cerebro up and leads them out of the room with the party following.

Mike: Wait, so her name is Suzie?

Dustin: Suzie with a "z". She's from Utah.

Will: Girls go to science camp?

Eleven: Girls camp?

Dustin: Suzie does. She's a genius.

Mike: Is she cute?

Dustin: Think Phoebe Cates, only hotter.

Y/N: Who's Phoebe Cates?

Max: What's going on?

Will: Going to talk to Dustin's girlfriend.

Max/Lucas: Girlfriend?

[Store]

Hopper: I know this is a
difficult conversation to have...but I hope you know that I... care about you very much. And I know that you...

Joyce: Eye contact.

Hopper sighs and runs his hand through his hair and continues.

Hopper: And I know that you...both care about each other very much. *groans* This does not sound like me at all.

Joyce: Just keep going. Come on.

Hopper: Which is why I think it's important to establish these boundaries...moving forward...

Hopper tries to use his cheat sheet but Joyce stops him.

Joyce: No looking. You know this. Come on.

Hopper:... so we can build an environment...uh...where we...all feel comfortable and trusted and open...

Joyce: "Share our feelings..."

Hopper: ... to sharing our feelings... This isn't gonna work. Um, it's not gonna work. It's not gonna work.

Joyce: Yes, it will! I promise. Oh, come on.

Hopper: Maybe I'll just kill Jane. I'm the chief of police, I could cover it up.

Joyce: You got this. I promise.

Hopper looks at Joyce. If he doesn't get a chance to say it later now would be q good time.

Hopper: You wanna have dinner tonight? You can give me some more pointers.

Joyce is taken aback by the sudden approach. She hasn't been on a date since Bob and that was almost over a year ago.

Joyce: Oh, I... Um... Um, I...I have plans.

Hopper: Okay, sure.

The door opens to reveal Terry who has two bags in her hand.

Joyce: Hey, Terry!

Tery: Hi Joyce!

Joyce: What are you doing back here.

Terry: I was gonna go to the mall but decided against it.

Joyce: Well now might not be a good time.

Terry: Why, something wrong?

Joyce: Well....um... Hopper here um....

Hopper: Your daughter is corrupting my son.

Terry: Is she now? Let me guess, they've hit the kissing stage?

Hopper: More like 24/7.

Terry: Weren't you like that at their age?

Hopper: Difference between me and him is that I didn't have a good father figure to tell me not to, with him he didn't know anything about a relationship when they finally made it official.

Terry: Jim they were separated from each other for almost a year, they care for each other alot, they aren't doing anything adult so it's fine.

Hopper: *to Joyce* Do you bear this?

Joyce: She's not wrong Hop, besides it was gonna happen sooner.

[Party]

Dustin takes the party to the highest point in Hawkins to set up cerebro. It's been an hour since they left his house and now they're walking uphill to the highest peak.

Mike: Aren't we high enough?

Dustin: Cerebro works best at a hundred meters.

Lucas: You know, I'm pretty sure people in Utah have telephones.

Dustin: Yeah, but Suzie's Mormon.

Lucas: Oh, shit. She doesn't have electricity?

Eleven: No disgus that's the Amish.

Will: What are Mormons?

Dustin: Super religious white people. They have electricity
and cars and stuff, but... since I'm not Mormon, her
parents would never approve. It's all a bit... Shakespearean.

Max: Shakespearean?

Dustin: Yeah. Like Romeo and Juliet.

Mike: Right.

Dustin: Star-crossed lovers.

Mike: But they died.

Eleven: Hey, guys!

The party turn back to see Y/N and El hand in hand.

Eleven: This is fun and all, but, uh...

Y/N: I have to go home.

Dustin: We're almost there.

Eleven: Sorry, man. Hopper gave Y/N a curfew. You can tell me about her tomorrow though.

Without getting a chance to respond, Eleven and Y/N walks back down the hill leaving the party.

Dustin: Curfew at 4:00?

Mike: They're lying. It's been like this all summer.

Max: It's romantic.

Mike: It's gross.

Lucas: It's bullshit.

Dustin: I just got home. Well, their loss, right?Onwards and upwards! Suzie awaits!

Dustin treks uphill again with Lucas, Max and Mike following but Will stays behind looking off into the distance as he feels the back of his neck again. But this one is different from when he felt it in the theater. This one felt stronger.

Dustin: Will, come on!

Will turns back and walks uphill leaving the shakey feeling behind.

About an hour later the party finally reach the top of the hill with a sweaty Lucas.

Dustin: Made it.

Mike: Yeah, only took five hours.

Will: Why couldn't we just play D&D?

Lucas: I'm so thirsty.

Lucas takes his canteen and gulps the water down, Max stares at him in disbelief.

Max: Did you seriously just
drink the rest of our water?

Lucas stops in the middle of the gulp and spits the water in handing it back to Max who shrugs it off and gags.

Mike: Haven't you two swap spit before?

Lucas: Yeah but not like that?

Max: Why are you so pissy?

Mike: I'm tired, thirsty and hungry.

Lucas: Don't forget jealous.

Dustin: Jealous about what?

Mike: Nothing.

Lucas: You're as bad as lying as you are in...well.

Dustin: I'm lost.

Max: Ever since El was allowed at Hopper's to spend time with Five she's been there from day to night just about.

Lucas: And Mikey here is jealous that he was to late to say anything.

Mike: Shut up Lucas, let's just set this stupid thing up.

Dustin still somewhat lost as he puts down the bag.

Dustin: Now, you ready to meet my love?

Max: Okay, sure.

Will: Yeah.

The party then set up the antenna and everything ready to talk to Suzie, about 15 minutes of setting it up they finally finish it. Dustin flips the switch on and grabs the speaker.

Dustin: Suzie, this is Dustin. Do you copy? Over.

Radio static is heard.

Dustin: One sec. She's probably... She's still there. Suzie... this is Dustin. Do you copy? Over.

More radio static.

Dustin: I'm sure she's there. It's just...

Lucas: Yeah.

Dustin: You know, maybe she's, like, busy or...

Mike: Yeah.

Dustin: It's around dinnertime.

Max: Mmm.

Dustin: Suzie, do you copy?
This is Dustin. Over. Suzie, do you copy? This is Dustin. Over.

[Cabin]

Hopper makes his attempt in talking to Y/N and Jane in a civil manner by review his note one last time.

Hopper: ... why it's important to establish these boundaries... moving forward, so that we can create an environment where... you feel comfortable and trusted and open. Shit. "To share our feelings".

Hopper knocks on Y/N's door expecting them to try to act normal.

Hopper: Hey.

Five: Yes?

Hopper: Can I talk to you guys a minute?

Y/N opens the door for Hopper to see him and El sitting on the bed.

Hopper: Hi.

Both: Hi.

Hopper: Um... What I, uh... needed to say to you... What I wanted to say to you... is that, um...

Eleven: Uh-oh. I think we're in trouble.

El jokes chuckling but Y/N pays attention.

Hopper: No. No, nobody's in trouble, okay? I just, um... Uh...

El still feeling cocky whispers in Y/N and he cracks a smile and laughs making Hopper finally crack.

Hopper: You know what? Your mom called.

Eleven: What?

Hopper: Yeah. She needs you home right away.

Eleven: Is everything okay?

Hopper: No, I don't think so. It's family related.

Eleven: Oh, um okay.

Hopper take Jane outside and into his jeep turning it on while Jane bombard hims with questions.

Jane: What's wrong?

Hopper: Nothing! There's
nothing wrong!

Jane: What?

Hopper: But... there's something very wrong with
this thing between you and Five.

Jane: Oh, you lying piece of shit!

Jane unlocks the door to leave but Hopper locks the door.

Jane: You're crazy!

Hopper: Crazy? You want to see real crazy? You disrespect me again. Okay?Here's what's gonna happen. I'm gonna drive you home. And I'm gonna speak...and you're going to listen. And then, maybe...maybe by the end of it, maybe if you're lucky, maybe... I will continue to allow you to date my son.

Jane stares at Hopper in confusion and fear. Confusion on why they're talk and fear in knowing that Hopper is the type to kick ass, take names and then hospitalize them.

Hopper: Nod if you understand!

Jane nods as Hopper puts the jeep in reverse.

Hopper: I don't care what it is you do but you two will be separated for two days minimum.

Jane stares at the road now in anger.

Hopper: You can be pissed all you want but this relationship is getting out of hand. I don't hate it but I don't like it. You guys are good for each other, yes. Are you meant for each other, maybe. Do you need to be kissing for hours, no.

Jane: But..

Hopper: Let me speak. I'm trying to be civilized in letting you two still continue to date but I will continue to run the ground rules. Three inch minimum on the door alway, if I'm away or not, you two will have conversations, normal ones like you and your friends have, and finally, no lovey-dovey shit at all. Understand?

Jane nods and stares back at the road.

Hopper: I don't know whether or not you still try to teach him things you and your friends do but that is on your own time. You have about 3 months left till he can finally go out in public, I don't care what you all do together while anywhere else but in my house you will abide by my rules. Yes?

Jane: Yes sir.

Hopper finally drives into the city taking Jane home while the rest of the ride is quiet.

[Party]

Now nighttime and with another hour past the party continues to listen to the Dustin try to contact Suzie while Max and Lucas cuddle ok the ground, Will staring at the night sky and Mike slowly trying not to fall asleep.

Dustin:... do you copy? This is Dustin. Over. Suzie! This is Dustin. Do you copy? Over. Suzie, this is your Dustin. Do you copy? Over. Suzie...

Mike: Dustin, come on! She's not there.

Dustin: She's there, all right? She'll pick up.

Will: Maybe Cerebro doesn't work.

Mike: Or maybe Suzie doesn't exist.

Dustin: She exists!

Mike: She's a genius and she's hotter than Phoebe Cates?

Lucas: No girl is that perfect.

Max leans up and glares at Lucas.

Max: Is that so?

Lucas: I mean... you're perfect. I mean, like,
per... perfect in your own way. In your special... your own special way.

[CHUCKLES]

Max: Relax, I was teasing. I'm obviously perfect.

Mike: I'm gonna a barf.

Max: And Dustin's obviously lying. Come on, Don Juan.

Max and Lucas stand up and begin to walk down the hill.

Dustin: Where are you going?

Max: Home.

Max and Lucas begin their decend do the hill.

Mike: Wait for me, I'm not planing on falling asleep in a random field.

Mike walks down the hill trying to keep his footing.

Dustin: Well... guess it's
just you and me, Byers.

Will: Um... it's late. Sorry. Maybe tomorrow we can play D&D. Or something fun. Like we used to?

Dustin: Yeah, sure.

Will: Welcome home.

Will walks away joing the other leaving a sad Dustin.

Dustin: Yeah.

The radio begins to unscramble letting Dustin hear chatter.

Dustin: Shit. Shit. Suzie? Suzie, is that you?

Voice: [IN RUSSIAN] The silver cat feeds... when blue meets yellow in the west... A trip to China sounds nice... If you tread lightly... The week is long...The silver cat feeds...Beautiful, isn't it?

Dustin soon realizes the language coming from Cerebro and he grabs a nearby recorder.

Dustin: Holy shit!

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