(Note:My chapters might not be that long)

                    Storyshift Asriel POV
I was making my famous star shaped cookies in the kitchen. 'Where is chara?' I thought. "She's probably sleeping in her room being the lazy person she is. I guess I'll have to go wake her up." I knocked on her door not wanting to be rude.
No answer. "Chara!" Still no answer. I walked into her room to find her not in there. "Where is she?" I said worried. "She must have went to grillby's". I ran over to grillby's and walked inside. "Has anyone seen Chara come in here?"
Everyone said they never seen her. I was so worried of where my sister could have went.
   I was walking back to the house hoping chara has returned, but then I stopped. There was a figure standing in front of me that looked a lot like king sans but something was different about him. He had several error signs around him. Then the figure faced me and wrapped blue strings around me that were coming out of his fingers. He then threw me into a weird glitchy hole,and I passed out.
    When I woke up I couldn't see anything but white. I decided to call out if anyone could be here. "Hello!" I shouted. "Asriel!" I heard someone say. I turned around to find Chara hugging me. "Chara are you ok? What happened?" "I don't know I  just woke up and saw a glitched up skeleton and next thing I know I'm in this weird void place."
      "Well I'm just glad your alright Chara,but we need to find a way out of here." "I don't think there is a way out of here Rei." I stomped my foot on the ground. "Chara I told you not to call me that!" "Heh sorry bro, but we should go and try to find a way out of here."
      We were walking for a long amount of time then all of a sudden we saw two small figures lying on the ground in front of us.
       ( and that concludes that chapter. What do you guys think about it?))