Someone do a crappypasta review of my story, cause I hate it and it's so old that I just, I can't write non clique oc story's, especially "horror" ones. I did put in a few references and what not but overall it was a "just for fun" kinda thing, and it turned out really REALLY bad. I read over it again and I realize how, almost, Mary/Anti-sue I was in this story. It's almost like it was right in between the two but was still unbalanced, like how I had it to where she didn't want to stay there but the others forced her or how she wasn't scared till the end, which that is associated with adrenaline cause you can't really feel it till later on and that's the one moment her brain processes the whole situation so yeah, idk. Like is said it was "just for fun" and I needed some kind of relevant backstory for Miss. Grounding cause I did a few CP rp's with my fiends and I needed a back story so yeah, most of it was me typing and my friends reading it over, only about half of what my idea was made it into the book. Like the proxies dialogue, it jumps from fairy intimidating, to prideful, then to your average laid-back teen. Now I will say one thing, one of my fairly good friends edited the text for the forest scene, so props to him cause his a really good writer. During the fight scene I didn't want Kay to over power Jeff but at the same time I didn't want her to get seriously hurt, so I made it to where it hinted at her being Autumn and also I gave a reason behind her being fairly acrobatic, so you can't say she's over powered, plus she did screw up a bit which is where the anti-Sue comes into play. So yeah, idc if you wanna talk trash about this story, it's not like I'm gonna re-write it or fix it, tho if you do have any advice cause I am writing a new book and I might see if I could publish it in real life, so that exciting, tho I haven't started writing it yet. But with all that being said, this is the end of whatever I'm doing and yeah, stuff, have a nice day, I guess.