Example for competition # 2
* Hi, this is a quick example because I need to get going soon, next destination on my road trip : Español ( I can't spell ) *
I watch in horror as my dad walks right up to my mum, spitting in her face " Don't give me that crap!" My mum backs a way, he was drunk again. She glances at me, trying to trell me something, to run, but it was to late. He was walking up to me yelling " Come here you mistake of a child"
Something clicks
" What did you just call me you dumb drunk? " I watch as what I just said processes through his mind, anger flares in his eyes.
The fist comes forward, slowly , crashing its way into my skull.
Blackness
* There we go, not plea sent but you know, 121 word count or so *
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