Reviewer- hayxden

~P R O S~

⭐︎The introduction paragraph is beautifully written and I can't stress this enough.

⭐︎You made every event so clear and that really helped the flow of the book. I usually find myself confused with books because the events are either unclear or just not written well. But this book wasn't confusing at all.

⭐︎The emotions were amazing. Almost like you could feel how Soo-yeon was feeling.

⭐︎There were no grammatical errors.

⭐︎The cover of the book was very well done.

⭐︎The plot twist was unexpected!

⭐︎I don't usually read romance, but this book was amazing!

~C O N S~

⭐︎This isn't necessarily a con, but it was at one point fanfiction. This book stands beautifully on its own and it shouldn't be considered fanfiction because it's so original!

⭐︎The first thing the reader sees is the music line. While it is original, it can also divert the reader's attention if they don't quite understand it.

⭐︎The time period is unclear. This was however mentioned in the author's note.

⭐︎The last thing I have to say is I recommend splitting your chapters in half. It will draw more readers (since most are on mobile) and it makes it easier to read!

Great job @Raven_Rae17 this book deserves more recognition!