Reviewer- @cwang1

Pros: 

 I really liked your cover! There's only one thing that I want to touch on about your cover below, but overall it was really good!

 I liked your use of vocabulary; it really fits the mood, and the connotation of your words really fit your tone. You had a really complex vocabulary, and that definitely enhanced your writing.

 I really liked how you had a lot of dialogue. This really helps the reader to see into the characters and relate to them, making your characters more life-like and realistic.

 I really liked how you had a lot of cliffhangers; it really made the story more interesting and fun to read.  

Cons: 

 I thought that your blurb was a little bit short. Though the content was extremely good, I would recommend extending some of that and providing more information on the story to draw readers in. 

I thought that the short text at the top of your cover "'If words can kill, then they can also heal'" was pretty cool. It was so small, however, that I could barely see it without zooming in. Thus, I would recommend perhaps making it bigger.  

I didn't really like how you spaced your text out so much. I thought that sometimes, it would be more effective if you just combined some of your paragraphs, so try doing that. 

I felt that you used ellipses too much, even in places where they're not really needed. I would recommend watching out for misusing punctuation, as that may confuse the reader and distract them. 

I thought that you could perhaps use more description. This would really benefit your world and plot building, and it would really help your readers to picture the scene.