Reviewer- cwan

Pros: 

 I really liked the quote you put right at the beginning of the blurb, which really stood out to me and drew me into your book. 

 I loved how right away, you drew the reader in by calling Jase a thing, rather than a person and making the reader wonder what Jase could have done to True. 

 I really liked how you used the sentence structure to emphasize certain points. For example, in Chapter 2, you used a shorter sentence structure at the beginning to create a more exhausted-but-relieved feeling. 

 Overall, I felt that your grammar was really good. Though there were a few mistakes, it definitely didn't detract from the overall story.

Cons: 

 I thought that your cover was a little crowded, and I couldn't clearly see a lot of the text, along with the background image. I would suggest making your cover with the dimensions 512 x 800 so that Wattpad does not change the dimensions. Additionally, try removing some of the text and making the rest bigger.

 I would recommend putting the trigger warning at the bottom of the blurb. Right now, it seems a bit out of place and distracting, and I think putting it at the bottom would remove that distraction.

 I did spot the misuse of certain punctuation marks, like ellipses, sometimes, so I would suggest going back and fixing that.  

I would recommend using a wider range of vocabulary. Not only will this improve your description, but it will also help you better create the tone and mood through the connotation of your chosen words.