Reviewer- Savannah_Rose101

Book cover – Beautiful cover but maybe adjust the size of Ethereal so you can see the whole word.

Title – The title goes along with the genre and plot wonderfully!

Blurb – The blurb does not make any sense. The structure of it all is too broken up. You start it out with what seems to be a quote from the book. Then you continue with another snip bit from the book, finishing it off with two small sentences telling what is going to happen. The blurb lacks inspirations and interest. If I saw it, the cover would attract me, and then I'd read the blurb and go find another book to read. To improve it you could make your explanation bigger and maybe cut down on the snip-it.

Descriptions, grammar, vocabulary – You had nice vocabulary using words such as; inhabitants, reckoned, insidious, descendants, etc. Your grammar was good as well, although I would advise shortening your paragraphs for the readers. (To help them not get lost in the paragraphs. It's significantly harder to read than if they were smaller and better spaced out. You have wonderful descriptions such as; "The wrinkles on his face and his weary eyes were the proof of his wisdom and endless struggle against the insidious: strangers and family." This description was very well written.

Characters – I love how you describe your characters. Also, I love the fact that you explained the system of royalty. "It was all according to the tradition, with the eldest son maturing into the King of the nation, the eldest daughter maturing into the Queen and the continuing sibling maturing into the Prince or Princess whose children were to inherit the throne instead of the King's or the Queen's."

Storyline – The storyline is consistent and well thought out. Also it's quite interesting.

Dialogue – I honestly wish you had put more dialogue throughout the book but it was fine after the 1st few chapter. I'd definitely advise you to name the first chapter prologue because that's what it sounds like, as well as because of the book having 2 chapter 1's. Either put them together or make one the prologue because a book can't have more than 1 chapter of a single chapter.

Pacing – The pacing was good not to fast pace and not to slow. Good job!

Enjoyment – I'd rate my enjoyment as a 6.