Reviewer: cwang1

Pros:

What an interesting title! I love it, and it definitely gives me some sci-fi and thriller vibes.

Your cover was amazing! I liked how, even though the title seemed to be in red, you could still clearly see it.

You had quite a bit of dialogue which really helped to build the characters, so good job with that! I also really liked your dialogue tags.

I really liked how much description you had, which really made me able to picture every scene in my head. I could also clearly see the characters in my head.

Cons:

You have quite an interesting blurb, but I do want to point out a few things I noticed. First of all, you don't really need to include the "not you cliche thriller zombie tale" part; instead, you should try to show the reader that your book isn't cliche. Additionally, I'm a little confused about the whole Symbiote Corp. thing. You state in the first part of that paragraph that Adrain helped Symbiote Corp. develop the virus. Firstly, I am unsure if you mean the COVID-19 virus or the zombie apocalypse. Secondly, shouldn't Adrian like Symbiote Corp? That would make it a good thing (for him) to have the fate of humanity fall into the hands of Symbiote Corp. Finally, you don't need to capitalize "zombie." Your blurb did definitely give me many questions, so good job with that!

I did see that you sometimes misused some punctuation marks, so I would just go back and edit and watch out for that next time you're writing.

I would recommend using your paragraph structure to put more emphasis on certain sentences, essentially separating important sentences from the rest to make it stand out.