Reviewer- CathrynneWolf

~PROS~

⭐️The reader is thrown right into an event that draws them in!

⭐️Characters are beautifully introduced with amazing descriptions right off the bat.

⭐️Your story is in the first person, which is definitely hard to write in. But you have absolutely slain this task which you've set! It is written wonderfully, and the emotions the main character is feeling are truly vivid.

⭐️Upon first glance, the cover of your story looks simple. But upon further inspection, it is very well done!

⭐️The title is definitely a draw in! Well-chosen.

⭐️Your main character is Thea, and she is developed over the first two chapters wonderfully!

⭐️As far as I've read, there are no grammatical errors!

⭐️ I don't usually read teen-fiction on here, but this was definitely well done!

~CONS~

⭐️As I said, the reader is thrown right into an event at the start of the story. This is a splendid way to begin a story, but make sure that the characters and who are talking are clear to the reader.

⭐️The title is amazing! But I do see multiple fonts on it. Try sticking to one or two next time!

⭐️ Title is amazing! Nothing wrong here!

⭐️Nothing wrong with the grammar either!

This is an amazing story, @juyjuyjuyjuyjuy! Great job! It also deserves so much more recognition! I will be promoting this book.

"Reach for the moon. Even if you fall short, you will land among the stars."