Results for Short Story

Note: SCORING MUNA TAYO. DITO IPAPALIWANAG ANG MGA SCORES NG CRITERIAS. NASA DULONG BAHAGI LANG ANG RANKINGS. BASAHIN MUNA ANG DAHILAN AT FEEDBACKS NG JUDGES PARA KAHIT PAPAANO AY MAY PALIWANAG KUNG BAKIT IYON LANG ANG SCORES NA NAKUHA. OKEY DOKEY? YOW!

Scores:

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(Tagu-taguan, ikaw na ba ang buwan?)
written by: s-saxnt

🌈Book cover: 7.5%
Reasons: Walang problema sa font ng title at background pic dahil they fit with each other well. Ang pangalan mo lang sana (author's name) ay palakihin or ilagay malapit sa title or sa ibaba nito para naman mapansin kaagad.

🌈Blurb: 15%
Reasons: Description pa lang, andun na 'yung emotions, naipakita na kaagad. Well done.

🌈Book Title: 7%
Reasons: Mahaba sya sa first read palang pero bagay na bagay sa kwento.

🌈Plot: 44%
Reasons: Ang sakit po na 'Haemoptysis' ay sana nilagyan nyo ng kunting description para hindi malito ang reader. Ang daming plot twist, really. Maganda naman ang pagkaka-narrate, well-detailed and well-described.

🌈Grammar and Spellings: 8%
Reasons: Sa mga punctuations and grammatical errors, watch out.

Overall: 81.5%


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("Matthew is Nowhere to be Found")
written by: 6LEextraordinary

🌈Book cover: 7%
Reasons: It's simple yet it's really catchy. Tama lang ang pagkakabagay ng font sa background pic. 'Yung name mo lang sana, sana ay nilagay mo malapit lang sa title ng story para naman makita ang name mo.

🌈Blurb: 17.5%
reasons: The most interesting details are included kaya nakaka-eager na basahin ang story.

🌈Book Title: 8.5%
Reasons: It's interesting. In the first read of it, it seems like it's sacred because of the name 'Matthew'. Maganda talaga ang title. Grabe ang impact.

🌈Plot: 44%
Reasons: Ang daming plot twist. Ang ganda ng pagkaka-narrate ng bawat part. Well-detailed. Pero iyon nga, sobrang mapanakit kayo!! Nakakaiyak kaya! Grabe lang! Buti nalang ay magkasama na sila dahil patigok narin pala si Matthew. Huhu!

🌈Grammar and Spellings: 6.5%
Reasons: Watch out for redundants. Also, be careful of using punctuations, you must know well kung ano ang dapat mong ilagay, tuldok ba o kama. Also, 'i' supposedly 'I', a big letter kasi it's the rule noon palang. The ellipsis supposedly ay tatlo dapat (...) hindi dalawa o apat.

Overall: 83.5%

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('Til I See You Again)
written by: heryellowpen

🌈Book cover: 8.5%
Reasons: It's beaufiful. The font and the picture. The girl, the pic, is beautiful but there's sadness behind her face. Kaya pala ganun.

🌈Blurb: 17%
reasons: It's interesting. Well-detailed. Catchy and unique.

🌈Book Title: 9.5%
Reasons: In romance genre, minsan talaga ay ganito 'yung mga title ng story nila pero yours is very interesting.

🌈Plot: 46.5%
Reasons: Mahilig kang manakit, noh? Ang sakit-sakit kaya. Nakakaiyak talaga. Naalala ko tuloy dito 'yung 'Angel's Last Mission' na KDrama dahil bulag sya at 'yung driver nya na lagi nyang pinapagalitan kahit na mabait naman ay iyon ang nagbigay ng mga mata sa kanya upang makakita syang muli. So, it's unique since nasa wattpad tayo, walang 'tong koneksyon sa mga dramas na plot. Ang ganda ng pagka-narrate mo. Nakakainis lang talaga! Sobra kang mapanakit!! Huhuhu! Ba't naman ganun? Anyways, ang ganda talaga. Sa POV lang, lagyan mo nalang ng POV kung kanino iyon para hindi malito ang nagbabasa.

🌈Grammar and Spellings:9.5%
Reasons: Sa mga spacings lang minsan ang mali.

Overall: 91%

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(Almiah)
written by: AlmiahsLove

🌈Book cover: 7.5%
Reasons: It's beautiful. The fonts lang and then 'yung name mo ay dapat nasa dulo o sa ibaba lang ng title para makita kaagad. The background suits the story.

🌈Blurb: 16%
reasons: Ba't wala kang blurb or description? Well, anyway dahil naman short story 'to, I'll still give you a score.

🌈Book Title: 7%
Reasons: It's catchy. I can't say that it's really unique, yes, the name is unique but kadalasan talaga dito sa wattpad ay pangalan ang ginagawang pamagat. But anyways, it's beautiful.

🌈Plot: 44%
Reasons: Nakakatawa. Nakakasakit. Nakakainis din. Bakit? Huhu! Bakit hindi nagkatuluyan? Hindi ako maka-relate dahil hindi pa ako nagkakajowa either sa RW at RPW pero kinilig ako. Nakakakilig. Soooooobrang rupok ni Miah!!! Hahaha!

🌈Grammar and Spellings: 6.5%
Reasons: Spacings and punctuations lang naman ang error.

Overall: 81%

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Rankings:

🦄FIRST: 'Til I See You Again by heryellowpen with an average score of 91%.

🦄SECOND: "Matthew is Nowhere To Be Found" by 6LEextraordinary with an average score of 83.5%.

🦄THIRD: Tagu-taguan, ikaw na ba ang buwan? written by s-saxnt with an average score of 81.5%



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