Results for General Fiction Genre

Note: Don't take any criticisms as a negative feedback.

Scoring:

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(Loveless Marriage)
written by: RUBYGEMS_

🐥Book cover: 8%
Reasons: The font is the only problem. The pic is okay and it fits with the story.

🐥Blurb: 15%
Reasons: The blurb is too short. Maybe, put something interesting detail or plot about the story so that the blurb will stand out.

🐥Book title: 8%
Reasons: It's catchy. It fits with the story well.

🐥Plot: 43.5%
Reasons: Maganda naman ang story. Nung una ay magulo pero pag pinagpatuloy ay maiintindihan na naman sya. Sana lang ay hindi mo kaagad ipinakilala lahat-lahat ng karakter, take it slow para hindi malito ang mga reader.

🐥Grammar and Spellings: 5%
Reasons: Sobrang kulang ng mga punctuations. Sana ay lagyan mo muna ng (") gan'to bago ang dialogue or convo nila para hindi malito ang reader. Watch out with the proper use of capitalizations and spacings.

Overall: 79.5%


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(Another Day To Fall In Love)
written by: happysnowfeet

🐥Book cover: 9%
Reasons: It's unique and eye-catchy. Maganda din ang pagkaka-combine ng kulay ng pic at font.

🐥Blurb: 20%
reasons: It's well-detailed. Sobrang nakaka-excite. So interesting.

🐥Book Title: 9%
Reasons: It's interesting and unique at the same time.

🐥Plot: 45%
Reasons: Mabilis ang mga pangyayari nung una pero kalaunan ay naging asset 'yun ng author para mas pagandahin ang story. Good job!

🐥Grammar and Spellings: 9%
Reasons: Spellings lang and spacing ang error.

Overall: 92%

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(Pens Over Guns)
written by: NotAnEarthian

🐥Book cover: 9%
Reasons: Simple lang sya pero catchy. The color of the title and the background pic really suits with each other.

🐥Blurb: 19.5%
reasons: Maganda ang pagkakasulat mo ng blurb. It's interesting. Nakakatawag ng pansin ng reader. Well-explained.

🐥Book Title: 9.5%
Reasons: Ang ganda. It's really unique. Never heard of that word before.

🐥Plot: 48%
Reasons: The plot is really unique. Maganda din ang pagkaka-narrate mo ng story. Hindi sya boring because of the conversations siguro na nakaka-good vibes. Well done!

🐥Grammar and Spellings: 7%
Reasons: Need to do corrections sa grammars and spellings.

Overall: 93%


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(Scandalous Affair 2: Atlas Mate)
written by: CxlxrGreg

🐥Book cover: 8%
Reasons: Maganda ang book cover. It suits well with the theme of your story. Maganda din ang font at ang kulay nito, it suits with the picture. Pero hindi talaga na'tin masasabi na unique sya since marami ang tulad nito na cover kapag pareho ng tema.

🐥Blurb: 18%
reasons: Interesting talaga sya. Nakakakuha ng atensyon ng reader.

🐥Book Title: 9%
Reasons: Ang unique ng name ng lalaki. Really kaya maganda.

🐥Plot: 46%
Reasons: Sobrang interesting. Ang ganda ng pagkaka-kwento mo. Hindi naman talaga pinapadali ang mga pangyayari kasi hindi ito fantasy genre kaya good job sa paghinay-hinay mo sa mga pangyayari. Nakakakilig ang interactions nila. Medyo narumihan lang ng kunti ang inosenteng utak natin, noh? Hahaha! Pero maganda talaga. Waiting for the next chap.

🐥Grammar and Spellings: 8%
Reasons: Ang spacings lang minsan. Sa grammar naman, walang masyadong mali dahil sobrang linaw. Nakakanose-bleed lang talaga sya. Huhu! Also, the redundants din, watch out.

Overall: 89%


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(Beyond The Pages)
written by: empathyberry

🐥Book cover: 9%
Reasons: Ang ganda ng book cover. It's really unique. Writer ka ba o editor? Huhu! Ang ganda ng design eh. Sobrang unique. Siguro, medyo palakihin ng unti ang username mo para naman mapansin kaagad na itong writer na 'to, may lahing editor.

🐥Blurb: 18%
reasons: It's good na mahaba ang blurb pero siguro medyo bawasan lang ng kunti lang naman para hindi sya matawag na TMI. Maganda naman ang pagkakasulat mo ng description pero need lang na paiksiin kasi mas interesting iyong may pabitin.

🐥Book Title: 8.5%
Reasons: Maganda sya. It's really unique. Pero kagaya ng ibang taong mas mahilig sa interesting na title ay hindi masasabing it's really catchy kasi there's more, they need more. Pero, maganda naman sya.

🐥Plot: 48%
Reasons: The plot is so unique. Wala pang story dito na may katulad sa lahat ng plot mo. It really catches the attention of a reader. It's really really unique. Minsan kasi, kahit na sumulat ka ng original plot mo ay mayroong magsasabing hindi ito unique since sobrang rami na ng mga scenes sa wattpad world pero 'yung sayo ay iba. Sobrang unique. Well described din ang emotions nila. Good job!

🐥Grammar and Spellings: 7%
Reasons: Redundant lang and meron din minsan na wrong spelling.

Overall: 90.5%


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(Catch Me, Assassin)
written by: queen_assassinate
Catch Me, Assassin by

🐥Book cover: 9%
Reasons: Ang ganda ng cover. Sobrang interesting. The fonts, it's color, and the background pic perfectly fits with each other.

🐥Blurb: 18%
reasons: The blurb is short. Hindi naman talaga gaanong ganun ka-short pero siguro ay punan lang ng mga detalyeng makaka-encourage sa reader na basahin ang story mo.

🐥Book Title: 9%
Reasons: Sobrang catchy ng title. Hindi naman ganun ka unique pero sobrang interesting lang. Ang catchy talaga.

🐥Plot: 46%
Reasons: Maraming stories about assassins na merong kapareho ng plot pero may kakaiba kang nilagay talaga.  Sobrang interesting ng bawat chap. Walang masyadong dead scenes o boring scenes. Mahirap gawin 'yun, di'ba? 'Yung mapapasabi talaga ang reader na hindi boring ang story mo kaya good job sa'yo dahil nalampasan mo iyong pagsubok na 'yun.

🐥Grammar and Spellings: 7%
Reasons: Dapat maging aware ka sa mga spacings minsan, redundant din at ng proper use of punctuations.

Overall: 89%

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Rankings:

💎FIRST: Pens Over Guns by NotAnEarthian with an average score of 93 percent.

💎SECOND: Another Day to Fall In Love by happysnowfeet with an average score of 92 percent.

💎THIRD: Beyond the Pages by empathyberry with an average score of 90.5 percent.

🏁Congratulations! Just wait for your prizes, panalo man o hindi may prizes parin such as voting, commenting, and sharing your stories sa iba pang wattpadians.





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