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(Insurrection of Prophecy)
written by: kyubi3

🗨Book cover: 9.5%
Reasons: The design is really great! It's unique! However, medyo hindi kita 'yung title dahil nagmumukhang nagsiksikan sila sa ibaba, so, we suggest na palitan 'yung font style para perfect na sya.

🗨Blurb: 18.75%
Reasons: From how you make the words, the ending rhymes. It's just so accurate and madali syang maka-interest sa isang tao na basahin ang story mo dahil the prophecies were just way too great!

🗨Book title: 9.75%
Reasons: The title is just unique and it attracts attention.

🗨Plot: 46%
Reasons: I'm not really familiar with fantasies because I am more on romance and actions but nang nabasa ko ito ay medyo nagbago ang pananaw, I want to read fantasies so bad because it's enables our mind to imagine that one enchanting place and uncommon type of living animals. Suggestions lang ay make the first chapter of this book the 'chapter 1' because it's another book, it might be season 2 but it has different plots and new characters will come, so, better change it.

🗨Grammar and spelling: 7.5%
Reasons: Need to do corrections. Also, learn how to express people's emotion by describing, not by showing emoticons because if someday, you'll get the chance to write a printed novel, emoticons won't work, it will be revised into describing.

Overall: 91.5%

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(ACADEMIA: Hunters×Ghost)

🗨Book cover: 8%
Reasons: The background picture is totally fine but the only problem is the font, suggestions lang na use proper colors of font that will fit with the background pic. The book cover isn't complete without the other one. The picture and the title are partners, so dapat agaw-pansin silang dalawa.

🗨Blurb: 13%
Reasons: Lot of fantasies or almost lahat nga siguro ay may kasamang adventure. Maybe, you put a little hint about the adventure they would encounter so that the reader will eager to read your story.

🗨Book title: 6%
Reasons: It's really unique kasi siguro nga hindi ko pa masyadong kilala ang fantasy world pero unique talaga sya para sa akin. It's nice but can be better.

🗨Plot: 45.5%
Reasons: We like the way you narrate the story. Walang paligoy-ligoy. Kung papatayin, papatayin. Kung ililigtas, ililigtas. Hindi rin nakaka-bored basahin 'yung conversations ng mga karakter. Plus the pictures, it added interest on the reader kasi we know, fantasies has it's own world, hindi sapat ang pagpapaliwanag sa lugar kundi kailangan ng pictures para mas ma-imagine ng taong nagbabasa.

🗨Grammar and spelling: 5%
Reasons: Always be cautious in proper use of punctuations and capitalizations. Also, 'his' and 'he is' ay magkaiba. Gaya nalang nung the way sinabi ng isang karakter sa story na 'his protecting her' no, it's 'he is protecting her' because he/she is pertaining to the lion that was protecting the female lead. Be careful of such words.

Overall: 77.5%

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(Curse of the Fallen Deity)
written by: SereinV

🗨Book cover: 10%
Reasons: The picture suits the story as much as the font style and color fits the background picture. It's the best cover for fantasy genre, as of now.

🗨Blurb: 19.75%
Reasons: Dark fantasy is the best! It aims for something more! It's interesting dahil 'to fall in love is a curse' line is just so different! It brings chills to the reader!

🗨Book title: 9.5%
Reasons: Maganda. It catches attention and curiosity! It's powerful!

🗨Plot: 48%
Reasons: It's great na hindi kaagad pinakilala ang lahat-lahat, one by one lang ang pagpapakilala ng mga importanteng character. Aurora's wit and sharp mouth makes her a loveable character even when she's unemotional!

🗨Grammar and spelling: 9.25%
Reasons: Wala namang masyadong corrections of grammars and spellings. Using Taglish is really a good choice!

Overall: 96.5%

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(The Avallon Chronicles Season 1)
written by: LORAINEJD

🗨Book cover: 8%
Reasons: That innocent look of a girl catches someone's heart, the fonts and it's colors are a perfect combination. It brings the 'icy' vibe!

🗨Blurb: 18%
Reasons: A perfect example of how you will catch attention of a reader is what you wrote in the description. It's good to not reveal too much detail about their 'physical' world, instead, you wrote what happened to the past and what lies behind her journey.

🗨Book title: 7%
Reasons: Question: Were there any ice princesses before her?

🗨Plot: 46%
Reasons: Suggestions: If you can, put some interesting plot or scene at the the end of every chapter, don't just end it like it's the ending, one of strategies that would catch reader's attention is the cliffhanger at the end of chapters.

🗨Grammar and spelling: 7.5%
Reasons: Note on some errors and redundancy. Also, congratulations in successfully written a whole English story from the chap 1 to the end!

Overall: 86.5%

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(The Untold Story of Us)
written by: Hannabishi_11

🗨Book cover: 9%
Reasons: The design, picture and the font really fit with each other. It looks like a children fantasy book by it's cover!

🗨Blurb: 18.25%
Reasons: The story somehow resembled the story 'The Little Mermaid' wherein Ariel will make the Prince fall in love with her, then kill him. Hope it will end beyond the expectation!

🗨Book title: 9%
Reasons: Sobrang interesting ng title. It can open your curiousness. It implies that the sub-genre is romance, so, good job!

🗨Plot: 45%
Reasons: Thank you for putting pictures on the introduction, we will able to imagine. The story is nice. It went smoothly but then, in the first five chapter, it felt like, we've been reading a romance genre because there has been no clue about the fantasy world at all. Remember, fantasy is a fast-paced story, kung hindi sa end ng chapter 1 ay sa dapat sa end ng chapter 2 ay maipaliwanag na at maipakita ang fantasy world because this is a fantasy genre kaya mas pagtuunan ng pansin ang hindi totoong bagay, fantasy, it is.

🗨Grammar and spelling: 8%
Reasons: Some of the parts has redundant and you might construct some of the parts. Also, nakakalito kung sa kingdom ay English ba lahat ang language nila dahil bihira lang ang tagalog na ginamit doon.

Overall: 89.25%

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(Dimentia)
written by: Ms_davinci

🗨Book cover: 8%
Reasons: Maganda ang color. Nakakalito lang ang background, it looks like clouds dahil in the story, dimentia has something to do with dimensions, but it's a boy and girl pala.

🗨Blurb: 18.5%
Reasons: It makes the reader wonder kung bakit umaabot ng araw ang tulog nya, 'what's the reason?'

🗨Book title: 10%
Reasons: Unique. We thought that wrong spelling lang talaga sya but then, as we read the story, the word 'dimentia' has it's own term. Good job!

🗨Plot: 43.5%
Reasons: The twist is actually good. So, it has 2 colliding dimensions, the real world and her dreams. If she didn't follow the rules, there are grave consequences. Dun lang sa part na may nangyaring masama sa tatay nya, pero it already in chap 7 but still no emotions na pag-aalala kay Cassi. Better na ilagay mo ang sarili mo sa kwento, like pag sa'yo nangyari 'yun, what would be your feeling? Uuwi ka lang ba at matutulog rin? Iwasan ang puro dark scenes like nasa dorm lang sya or sa kwarto or sa park. Fantasies are fast-paced. Make every chapter interesting.

🗨Grammar and spelling: 8%
Reasons: Watch out on proper use of punctuations.

                          Overall: 88%

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(Mysterious Feeling)
written by: Shylymirose

🗨Book cover: 8.5%
Reasons: The contrast is good. It's dark yet magical. It's unique in it's own way for fantasy. Mas maganda lang pag in-edit 'yung title para mas klaro ang pagkakasulat. Overall, maganda naman ang mga puno-puno sa gilid nito.

🗨Blurb: 16.5%
Reasons: Catchy siya. It's good that you put interesting questions in the description, it put emphasis to the story. It's unique din at the same time.

🗨Book title: 9%
Reasons:  Pero 'mystery' eh kaya okay na rin. Then, catchy sya, 'yung parang mapapaisip ka nalang na 'bakit ganoon?' 'what kind of mysterious feeling?'. Okay, since you put the feeling as 'mysterious', we hope that it's really mysterious.

🗨Plot: 41%
Reasons: Questions lang: Alam ba nya na may mga ganitong kakaibang bagay talaga? 'Yung pag time travel, lagusan, 'yung feeling na may humihigop? Base kasi sa first impression o unang pagkakabasa, parang normal lang talaga 'yung mundo nila dahil parang sanay lang sila. Also, hindi normal 'yung 'mysterious' case na hahawakan nila, pag ikaw kasi 'yung nakaranas nun, you will feel nervousness. I-describe nang maigi 'yung feeling nya kapag nakapasok sya sa isang lagusan, don't just imply na parang 'ah, ok lang' iyong nararamdaman. Don't just focus sa mga dead moments like kumakain lang, nasa bahay, o nasa puno. Show some emotions, 'yung makatotohanan. When you're writing fantasy stories kasi, or kahit ano pang story, you need to put yourself in your work. Expound more interesting yet mysterious moments kasi mas catchy iyon. Pero, maganda ang twist a? Bakit puro lalaki lang ang nawawala? Bakit sa may balon sila huling nakikita?

🗨Grammar and spelling: 6.5%
Reasons: Note on redundancy. May mga parts na umuulit-ulit lang kahit nasa iisang paragraph lang sila. Just explain the accurate and important scenes.

Overall: 81.5%

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(Note: Only the first, second, third ang ilalagay dito sa rankings. Pag wala 'yung stories nyo sa baba ay expected na nasa below third runner ups kayo. You will receive consolation prizes naman.)

💎First: The Curse of the Fallen Diety by SereinV with an average score of 96.5 percent.

💎Second: Insurrection of Prophecy by kyubi3 with an average score of 91.5 percent.

💎Third: The Untold Story of Us by Hannabishi_11 with an average score of 89.25 percent.

📌: Kailangang hintayin niyo ang prizes such as voting, commenting, suggesting your stories, and such. For those who didn't win, you'll still have prizes. Just wait for it.

📍: This marks as the officially closing of Fantasy Genre on Starry Book Awards 2021...