🌟YOUNG ADULT/ROMANCE🌟WINNERS🌟

JUDGE: rebel_imperfect    Stariewrites   Where_Souls_Roam

FIRST PRIZE:

Shock Waves by abbyapple9878 (72/80)

Title: 8/10. Short and straight to the point, but draws readers interesting.

Cover: 9/10. Beautiful, aesthetically pleasing, but also simple and not too much.

Blurb: 10/10. It's interesting enough to draw readers in, but also short enough that they don't get bored.

Plot: 14/15. It's a great plot, and it develops beautifully, no confusing time skips and loop holes. It's also original.

Character development: 13/15. Great characters, very realistic and unique. 

Grammar: 14/15. Very good job. Hardly noticed any errors, but rereading would still help little.

Personal enjoyment: 4/5.

A great fictional work. The writer is very talented and she is telling a beautiful story, and taking readers along on the journey.


SECOND PRIZE:

Falling for my enemy by turkey222 (68/80)

Title: 8/10. Perfectly sums up the story, a bit too much. No room for suspense, but that isn't necessarily a bad thing.

Cover: 9/10. Beautiful and simple.

Blurb: 9/10. Like the title, it tells us exactly what to expect from the story, and that encourages readers to read.

Plot: 13/15. It's just a little bit wattpad cliché, but again that's not a bad thing when it's done right, and this writer is doing it right. I've only read four chapters but I'm enjoying it already.

Characters: 14/15. Very well written, realistic, unique personalities.

Grammar: 12/15. Only minor spelling and punctuation issues to fix.

Personal enjoyment: 3/5

Interesting plot, the writer has a very hilarious writing style that keeps readers smiling and eager for more.


THIRD PRIZE:

Making her mine by gulle_Jana (65/80)

Book title ( 9/10) Honestly saying the Book name pulls the readers who have romantic taste because the name explains it all. 

Book cover ( 8/10) And even the cover is catchy. 

Blurb( 9/10) And the blurb is giving exciting thoughts on how she falls for him. 

Plot (12/15) Even though the plot is like any other common mafia story, the way she has written it gives a exciting glint to it.

  Character development ( 12/15) 

Grammar( 12/15) 

Personal enjoyment ( 3/5) 

And there is not that much of a grammatical mistakes, so yeah! The is book awesome all in all. 


🌟CONGRATULATION TO THE WINNERS🌟

🌟TO ALL THE PARTICIPANTS, YOUR BOOK IS AMAZING BUT IT NEEDS SOME IMPROVEMENT🌟

🌟KEEP ON TRYING AND ONE DAY, YOU WILL HAVE A SURPRISE🌟

Participants,please inline comment here your book's name and I will reply your marks and the review.

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