🌟WEREWOLVES/VAMPIRES🌟WINNERS🌟

JUDGE: Snakie_Sara

FIRST PRIZE:

A Dangerous Howl by Taerobic with 72 out of 80

Book title- (8/10) Sort of tells us a bit about the story

Book Cover- (10/10) Like those famous stories on the front page.

Blurb- (6/10) A tiny bit of an info-dump.

Plot- (14/15) It shows a journey a reader will be willing to be a part of.

Character Development- (15/15) I can see Edward becoming softer and showing more emotions, Chaerins character is interesting and funny.

Grammar- (15/15) Edited really well.

Personal Enjoyment - (4/5) Fun mostly.

Review: The characters are really interesting, the effort is evident and I see a ton of hidden meanings from the author. The plot is blurry at first but it got better as I read. Maybe if the blurb was a bit more sharp.


SECOND PRIZE:

Swapped mate by pandawithbraces with 69 out of 80

Book title- (9/10) sparks curiosity

Book Cover- (8/10) aesthetic

Blurb- (9/10) interesting

Plot- (15/15) pretty original

Character development- (10/15) nothing changed, really.

Grammar- (14/15) good punctuation

Personal enjoyment- (4/5)

Review: The character tries to be fun and relatable but it comes off as weird and gets me confused. So much is happening that I don't understand. She is a good writer, she just needs to watch over her writing style


THIRD PRIZE:

Alpha Athena by samsmilesxx with 50 out of 80

Book Title (5/10) Not bad

Book Cover- (4/10) It needs to change

Blurb- (10/10) Informative and captivating

Plot- (10/15) The idea of a man chasing after an 'expensive' girl is so cliche and I've seen it too much. Honestly it's called Alpha Athena but it was mostly Sebastians POV.

Character development- (9/15) Typical characters, Sebastian is the horny werewolf looking for his soulmate, Athena is the 'powerful' woman rejecting him. It isn't very original.

Grammar- (12/15)

Personal Enjoyment- (4/5) I understand why people would like it on wattpad.

Review: As much as I want to love the idea of a female alpha, I can't since the story was mostly on the males side. Showed a mature scene and I'm certain mature scenes weren't allowed but it was only one, I guess. It was very repetitive may I add, not very fun to read. No comedy scenes for the reader to laugh, no love scenes to get the reader soft. Overall not my favourite out of the five books I read.


🌟CONGRATULATION TO THE WINNERS🌟

🌟TO ALL THE PARTICIPANTS, YOUR BOOK IS AMAZING BUT IT NEEDS SOME IMPROVEMENT🌟

🌟KEEP ON TRYING AND ONE DAY, YOU WILL HAVE A SURPRISE🌟


Participants,please inline comment here your book's name and I will reply your marks and the review.

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