JUDGE: meow_astia

FIRST PRIZE:

Delusion or illusion by aaria101 (68/80)

Title-(9/10)

Cover-(7/10) it looks perfect but it has the same frame like the story 'Betrayal'

Blurb-(9/10)

Plot-(12/15) The plot is new to me but it felt more like movie.

Character development-(13/15) including some characteristics will be good but as it has casting, it's alright.

Grammar-(14/15) not much errors but needs little editing.

Personal enjoyment-(4/5)

Review- personally I really like the plot. Story description was also good. It would be better if you use left-to-right and right-to-left writing style for the texts. A chapter is fully written with Italic (use Italic for the dream part only). Overall it's quite good.

SECOND PRIZE:

Midnight Assassin by heart_of_god (66/80)

Title-(9/10) It matches with the story.

Cover-(9/10) Graphics is really good.

Blurb-(7/10) It seems short but it upholds the theme.

Plot-(11/15) the nerd has secrets seems to be little cliché but the secrets were unique.

Character development-(13/15) the characters are okay but some characters need to describe more.

Grammar-(13/15) Minor errors, needs some edit.

Personal enjoyment-(4/5)Review- The story is going smoothly. But from my point of view, it took long to get to main point and the nerdy thing seems to be long too. And it would be good if you add a mystery or thriller tag. Expand the blurb to make it more clear. 

THIRD PRIZE:

Prevails by FQareena (65/80)

Title-(9/10) it goes with the story pretty well

Cover-(6/10) it doesn't seem to fit for the story.

Blurb-(7/10) a mystery vibe would make it more interesting

Plot-(12/15) betrayal part is common and it wasn't that much of a mystery but the thought was great.

Character development-(14/15) all the characters seem okay.

Grammar-(13/15) minor errors. Needs some edit.

Personal enjoyment-(4/5)

Review- I was really enjoying the story though I think there's little lack of mystery. Personally I loved MC. The blurb has a few questions but adding some more description other than questions will be great. And the cover is simple, try to reflect the story. And try to follow the rules of grammar. Overall impression was good.

🌟CONGRATULATION TO THE WINNERS🌟

🌟TO ALL THE PARTICIPANTS, YOUR BOOK IS AMAZING BUT IT NEEDS SOME IMPROVEMENT🌟

🌟KEEP ON TRYING AND ONE DAY, YOU WILL HAVE A SURPRISE🌟

Participants,please inline comment here your book's name and I will reply your marks and the review.

Winners please PM me your gmail for the sticker.