Chapter three the Battle 4 the caln [[Wait. Four correctly spelled words in a row?]]
thx jazzie-kun 4 th good review! and stop flmaing the stroy!1 i bet u cant right such a good story!1!1 [[I feel like this Jazzie-kun is a made up character. And I'm sure anyone could make a better story than this]]

StarPaw walkd over too the appentice's den. Insid she saw her sister's FlamePaw and lakePaw and hr frend JazzPaw (a.n: jazzie-kin ur my bff!) [[Sure...]] waz slepping on the mos.

"JazzPaw get up." She cried. [[Never get up and let this monstrosity cry forever]] JazzPaw opend her brlliaint blu eyes and looked at hr. [[So brilliant that it had to be said]]

"Do yo want 2 go on pattrol wit me?" she asked. [[That's not how it works]]

"Sure!" Said JazzPaw getten up from the moss. They leavt and went two the entrnse too camp. [[Which one? The main one or the dirtplace? I want dirtplace]]

But then, a cat came in thru the entrnce! It was BlackStar!1!11 [[Oh no! One and eleven!]]

"Shadowclan are attaking!" She yelled. All the cats came out from there dens. She jumped on a cat and clawd him and he ran of. [[Wha- it was only Blackstar- and- how?]]

"Good job StarPaw!" FireStar called, "The last cat i new that culd fiht lik that was SandStrom. Your a good fihter!" [[I think Sandstorm was a good hunter. Also, that was a lie.]]

StarPaw was happy. She wus a good fihgter! Maybey this was wat the prophcy meant. [[Because the tiger and holly is so connected with this]]

thnkx and ples no more flams [[nope]]