Hey guys, I'm sorry I've been dead these past few months. I have a question.
I want to start writing this is third person instead of first. How do you guys fill about it?
Do you guys want to keep 1st or have a new with 3rd?
Ex: 1st
-Starfires POV-
I stared at the screen of the Titans computers. My breath was shallow as I waited for midnight. Come on, hurry. It couldn't have gone by any slower. One minute paced and I couldn't contain my excitement, I began bouncing on my toes! Another minute past, I could squeal! It was 12:00AM. I turned around with my hands in the air.
"HAPPY BIRTHDAY ROBIN!"
He laughed. I made sure I was the first to hug the boy wonder.
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Ex: 3rd
-Starfire-
Starfire stared the Titans screen computer. She was watching the time, waiting for midnight. Her breath was shallow as the seconds ticked by slowly. Finally 1 minute past, she bounced on her toes. Another minute. It's almost time! She bit her bottom lip, almost squealing with excitement.
12:00 AM
"HAPPY BIRTHDAY ROBIN!" Starfire squealed with joy. She flew toward the boy wonder hurriedly, making sure she was the first to hug him.
Robin laughed as he hugged her back.
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Which one would you prefer me to continue in? Thanks guys! Sorry, I didn't want to give you sneak peak but here's a sentence because I'm sorry!
- There wasn't a star in sight. -
:)
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